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Amayaa

@Amayaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Very very very BAD!!😛

Not the os but u

The story fab as usual but m unhappy coz after such long wait the update was so short

Not done😭😭

next update penalty k sath bahut lamba karna hoga ok

Kya apko ye penalty qubool hai???

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samko

@samko

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

it was full of emotions which i could never ever describe

hats of to u

it was so good

i feel lyk crying after reading it

please asad aur zoya ko marne math dena please

update as soon as possible

will be eagerly waiting for the next part

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Priya

@MysteryLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Please don't let the lovers die, please!!!

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Prizi
Sob sob...amazingly written...

Thanks 😃

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: asya143
Very very very BAD!!😛
Not the os but u
The story fab as usual but m unhappy coz after such long wait the update was so short
Not done😭😭
next update penalty k sath bahut lamba karna hoga ok
Kya apko ye penalty qubool hai???

haaww meri buri hun 😭😆
glad you liked the os
aur update short kaha thi? dona done!
next update isse bhi chota hoga aur for the next update you might not just hate but also kill me!

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: samko
it was full of emotions which i could never ever describe
hats of to u
it was so good
i feel lyk crying after reading it
please asad aur zoya ko marne math dena please
update as soon as possible
will be eagerly waiting for the next part

Jaldi update karungi next part cause mujhe pata chal gaya hai what's next!

Aur rahi baat sad os ki jab rote ho that cleans your eyes..

Sorry sorry enough of biology >
glad you liked the os will update soon

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: priyarao27
Please don't let the lovers die, please!!!

Glad you liked it but like zoya said har kahani puri nahi hoti Mr khan kuch kahanio mei adhura rehena hi likha hota hai 😭 so i'll see mei toh ekk sad ending ki soch rahi hun 😃