Os:darmiyaan Part 3 page 30 - Page 24

Originally posted by: -cyndu-

ekk baat batao tumhe surprise kaisa laga i said na next part is gonna is a surprise 😃
and ekk aur baat batati hun mei i really have no clue not even 1 % ki mei aage kya likhun 😭

mujhe surprise bohut acha laga it was awesome
and aaje yeh likh ki hua kya hai
ki kyun zoya ki halat aisa hai
and yeh bhi likh sakti hai ki kaise sab ko pata chal ki Zoe mamu ki beti hai and Asad ka reaction
you can show that asad is remembering the flashback while lying there
something like that i guess

Originally posted by: nihamrm

mujhe surprise bohut acha laga it was awesome
and aaje yeh likh ki hua kya hai
ki kyun zoya ki halat aisa hai
and yeh bhi likh sakti hai ki kaise sab ko pata chal ki Zoe mamu ki beti hai and Asad ka reaction
you can show that asad is remembering the flashback while lying there
something like that i guess

mei soch soch ke mar rahi hun Aur shayad next part iska Last part hoga 😭😭

Originally posted by: -cyndu-

mei soch soch ke mar rahi hun Aur shayad next part iska Last part hoga 😭😭

itna jaldi finish kardogi ise😭😭

Originally posted by: nihamrm

itna jaldi finish kardogi ise😭😭

mei yeh bhi soch rahi thi ekk sad ending rakhun like ishaqzade aashiqui 2?

Originally posted by: -cyndu-

mei yeh bhi soch rahi thi ekk sad ending rakhun like ishaqzade aashiqui 2?

mujhe pata hai ki abhi tere bheje ka bartha ban chuka hoga
to bas take a chill pill abhi ke liye
thoda samay ke baad sochna ki kya karna

Originally posted by: nihamrm

mujhe pata hai ki abhi tere bheje ka bartha ban chuka hoga
to bas take a chill pill abhi ke liye
thoda samay ke baad sochna ki kya karna

ok ok 😆😆😆 teri beje ka fry kardiya na meine? 😲🤣

Originally posted by: -cyndu-

ok ok 😆😆😆 teri beje ka fry kardiya na meine? 😲🤣

nahi toh
tu mere beje ka fry tab kar pathi agar mere paas beja ho toh
par main bach gayi kyunki mere paas beja hai hi nahi😆😆

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

hey cyndu..really emotional yr..jab zoya ne kaha sapna...i felt like crying.,...r they gonna die..pls...do change it...hum gul madam se toh expect nhi kr sakte..pr pls...asad-zoya ko maat mrna...they r made 4 each other hain...love this piece of writing yr...so emotional...so touchy...love it jst superb..thnks 4 d PM dear...

keep writing

pari

Mei sach mei chati hun to write something like that. but i will try my level best to try not to kill them but i choice is to kill them..2nd one of them 3rd nobody 😃

but glad you liked it😳

Originally posted by: nihamrm

nahi toh
tu mere beje ka fry tab kar pathi agar mere paas beja ho toh
par main bach gayi kyunki mere paas beja hai hi nahi😆😆

acchaaoo 😆😆😆