|AsYa OS: An Endless Ocean|

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

beautiful OS 👏

it started so calm and graceful .. Loved the whole description of the beach & i could literally picture Asad sipping his coffee by the window 😳

you described Zoya amazingly! made her sound like a princess drowning in sorrow 😳

i thought you would have dragged the meeting but it was short,simple&serene which was wonderful 👍🏼

and the final scene absolutely stole the show.. i wasnt expecting a Mr&Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan 😆 came as an unexpected surprise which i loved without a doubt 😳

their scene was also described beautifully.. the scene was also calm but emotions were speaking out loud

great OS 🤗

P.S - After reading this.. i feel like going to the beach 😆

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: reginaberrito
Aah!!! U describe the beach beautifully, esp the feeling of wet sand under the feet... I m a beach baby myself.. Beaches are in my blood... Watching the sunset is the most beautiful sight... Totally loved ur OS

Awww! Im glad i was able to make you feel the beach! 😳 Im a beach lover tooo. 😃

Im so glad you liked it, thankyou so much😃

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
beautiful OS 👏
it started so calm and graceful .. Loved the whole description of the beach & i could literally picture Asad sipping his coffee by the window 😳
you described Zoya amazingly! made her sound like a princess drowning in sorrow 😳
i thought you would have dragged the meeting but it was short,simple&serene which was wonderful 👍🏼
and the final scene absolutely stole the show.. i wasnt expecting a Mr&Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan 😆 came as an unexpected surprise which i loved without a doubt 😳
their scene was also described beautifully.. the scene was also calm but emotions were speaking out loud
great OS 🤗

P.S - After reading this.. i feel like going to the beach 😆

Awww! I feel like jumping with joy that i made you feel the ocean! Im not too good with words and when someone says i described something well, it feels so good 😆

Hahaha im so glad you liked it!!! Thankyou sooo much! 🤗

Hahaha meee tooo! 🤣

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: blueflames
the one place i can never refuse going is to the beach, to feel the waves crash and the dazzling sand... my fav retreat 😳

lovely OS 😃

Yesss!! And thats exactly what i tried explaining! And then my fav couple on my fav relaxing place, heaven! 😆

Thankyou so much😳

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Really? You could? OMG YAY! 😃 Mission accomplished! 😃

Thankyou so much for the lovely comment, it means alot! 😃
Defo will keep on writing. As long as AsYa are there to inspire me! 😳

Sure, sure, and I would be eagerly waiting to read em. 😉

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Yesss!! And thats exactly what i tried explaining! And then my fav couple on my fav relaxing place, heaven! 😆
Thankyou so much😳

you did an excellent job at explaining.. i could feel it, the sound of sea, the waves the calmness.. hayee 👍🏼

m going to the beach today 😃

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Sure, sure, and I would be eagerly waiting to read em. 😉

Hahaha thankyouuu 🤗

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: blueflames

you did an excellent job at explaining.. i could feel it, the sound of sea, the waves the calmness.. hayee 👍🏼
m going to the beach today 😃

Means alot! 😳Exactly my feelimg when i think about the beach! Hayeee 😆

Really? Awww!! Have funnn. And imagine AsYa romancing somewhere around you 😆

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Guess what?
This was beautiful!!! 🤗
I loved it
An endless beach, nice title
I wanna go to the beach now😆

You always make such beautiful comments on my work! Thankyou so much🤗

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Crap!? :O Nah... This was utterly beautiful. Love and Beach go together. Just lyke Asad and Zoya, hand-in-hand. I fell in love with this simple, short yet deepl and beautiful story! 🤗
Thank You For writing and sharing this.

P.S I really loved the way you described the sea and everything else. It makes me feel like I am actually there! Lovely! 👏