Asya SS ~ Tu Jahan Main Wahan! THREAD 1 (chapter 1-9)

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

THANKYOU so much everyone for the lovely comments but i didn't get the response i was expecting! 😭

it's really hard to think up some plot and then write n type!

please all the silent readers comment!

even if it's criticism! constructive criticism is welcomed! insult is not welcomed!

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malini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

i loved it...

plz send me a pm

and it would be very good if some of ayan house members

sees asya together romantic ...i sooo wish that happens

and ur story makes my day...

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

asad climbed up a pipe and entered zoya's room thru a window?! WOAH!!! Though its totaly OOC 4 asad's character but we girls can dream right? Loved this chapter to the core and thanks 4 d pm!!

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

ROFL-ING!
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Geetha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

"……..And she left me but took my heart along with her. I never knew what separation meant, I never understood why sometimes people got so depressed in separation that they felt the need to drown themselves in indulgences like alcohol. You know that saying about how you don't know what you have until it's gone? I already did know what I had, and now that she's gone, I know even more. I miss her, I mourn her, all I think about is her, I hear her laughter in the winds, I hear the tinkling of her anklets. She consumes my mind. I see her in my dreams, I see her when I'm wide awake. I see her all around

I really loved this part.. It suits the upcoming track very well 😊

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Geet_Ha
"''..And she left me but took my heart along with her. I never knew what separation meant, I never understood why sometimes people got so depressed in separation that they felt the need to drown themselves in indulgences like alcohol. You know that saying about how you don't know what you have until it's gone? I already did know what I had, and now that she's gone, I know even more. I miss her, I mourn her, all I think about is her, I hear her laughter in the winds, I hear the tinkling of her anklets. She consumes my mind. I see her in my dreams, I see her when I'm wide awake. I see her all around

I really loved this part.. It suits the upcoming track very well 😊

Thankyou so much for the comment! 😃

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LoveAsYa222

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Just read the whole thing and it was awesome 😳 Loved the "woh actually" part 🤣 Keep writing 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: LoveAsYa222
Just read the whole thing and it was awesome 😳 Loved the "woh actually" part 🤣 Keep writing 😃

thankyou so much for the comment! 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

NOTE!

Thankyou so much everyone for the lovely comments! comments and likes are my redbull! i'll update faster if i get more of them! 😆😆

I'm really upset with the response though!

Allah miyan! what's wrong with you forumwasis? why so thande? why so bland comments? 🤢

it feels so great to know that people are liking my SS

guys writing is not a piece of cake! it's really difficult! the only reason i write is because i love it when i can make my readers laugh and cry with my works but if ya'll don't tell me how ya'll felt then how will i improve? how will i provide ya'll with kick-ass stories??

Writing an SS or FF is something i don't prefer to do! writing an OS is much better!

i was really sad n disheartened at the response this SS is getting!

my crap stuff have gotten more response then this! 🤢🤢

Reviews are like gems and pearls and rubies for me! I Lurvvv em!

Silent readers! please comment! even if it's constructive criticism!

If such a bland response continues then i might discontinue this SS! 😭😭 its not a blackmail or something but lack of response from the readers really saddens me!

hope ya'll understand!

the next update will be in a while as i'm not in a mood to write the next part! 😕

LOVE,

Sadie!😃