Asya SS ~ Tu Jahan Main Wahan! THREAD 1 (chapter 1-9) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"''..And she left me but took my heart along with her. I never knew what separation meant, I never understood why sometimes people got so depressed in separation that they felt the need to drown themselves in indulgences like alcohol. You know that saying about how you don't know what you have until it's gone? I already did know what I had, and now that she's gone, I know even more. I miss her, I mourn her, all I think about is her, I hear her laughter in the winds, I hear the tinkling of her anklets. She consumes my mind. I see her in my dreams, I see her when I'm wide awake. I see her all around''"

awwweee ☺️

every line of dis para is just soo true 😳

n i m quite sure he ll be going through the same pain in d show really soon 😉

n he climed up a pipe for her ❤️

he entered dat house for her ❤️

he couldnt sleep coz of her ❤️

awww

*AWESTRUCK*

MINDBLOWING 👏

i simply LOVED IT (as always) 😆

p.s-agala part kal na???

hehehehehe 😉

update soon

n thanx fr d pm 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: giee

"''..And she left me but took my heart along with her. I never knew what separation meant, I never understood why sometimes people got so depressed in separation that they felt the need to drown themselves in indulgences like alcohol. You know that saying about how you don't know what you have until it's gone? I already did know what I had, and now that she's gone, I know even more. I miss her, I mourn her, all I think about is her, I hear her laughter in the winds, I hear the tinkling of her anklets. She consumes my mind. I see her in my dreams, I see her when I'm wide awake. I see her all around''" I'm so glad you liked! it took me so much of time to think this para! i was searching for a quote from some novel as asad was reading a book but i couldn't find anything apt so i only wrote it down!

awwweee ☺️

every line of dis para is just soo true 😳

n i m quite sure he ll be going through the same pain in d show really soon 😉

n he climed up a pipe for her ❤️ yea ik i just love that part

he entered dat house for her ❤️

he couldnt sleep coz of her ❤️

awww

*AWESTRUCK*

MINDBLOWING 👏

i simply LOVED IT (as always) 😆 Thankyou so much for the comment!

p.s-agala part kal na??? next part when i feel like writing lol 🤣

hehehehehe 😉

update soon

n thanx fr d pm 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

lovely part...it really reminded me of armaan...plz add oyye hoyye in the next part, i really miss it😆

PS-was this inspired from the gudiya factory saazish vala promo?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

lovely part...it really reminded me of armaan...plz add oyye hoyye in the next part, i really miss it😆

PS-was this inspired from the gudiya factory saazish vala promo?


the Zoya fainting part?

yep actually i had this plot in mind ever since the gudiya factory promo but i was just way too lazy to write an SS as i'm much comfortable with writing one shots!

it gets over quicly and doesn't involve much hassles but ankie and tanya were like hell bent on getting an SS from me! 😆😆😆

thankyou for the comment and as for the oye hoye part! hmmm will see about it! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Nice part..Asad in 'Armaan' mode rocked!!👏 Continue soon!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Amazing update...
Asad climbing a PIPE to meet his darling Zoya... 😲.. Anything for Zoya right? 😆
Really enjoyed it!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Wow, just to good.. I love to read your SS.. I can't wait for your next update.. !!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
wow!! razia can never improve can she??
such an evil woman!!!

and Asad climbed a pipe??😲😆
truly shocking lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Superb update :-) after reading this I miss Armaan so much :-( but I loved how Asad came to meet Zoya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Awesome update!
The way Asad climbed up the pipe was actually so romantic!
Loved the update!
Thanks for the pm :)

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