mr akdoo lost her ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad asked "why are u in a rush to leave?." Zoya said that the pain might ease and Zeenat and my ji ja ju have already spoken to me and told me that i shud come back aswell, there is nothing and noone keepin me here n e more Mr.Khan!!" i should just leave. Asad stood up walked infront of her placed his hand over hers and pulled her up off the bench, and said "what if i say dont go" will that be a good enough reason?...Why do you not want me to leave? asked Zoya..."i dont know why, but please stay!!" Mr.Khan im sorry but that is not a good enough reason for me to say plus all ill be doin by staying is gettin in between ur life n making a mess out of everything so i feel its best to leave!!!Your life will go back to the same boring way it was before and she gave him a little smirk Asad rolled his eyes but u cud see the tiny smile that appeared..Najma came an met them outside and handed Zoya her tickets for her flight, Asad stood emotionless as he watched her take them...Zoya left and went in with Najma. Asad stood there contemplating, "why didnt i just say i need u here, and i like you alot stay because i like you, because this house is as much yours as mine and this family is now your family dont go please dont go!!!"but soon Mr.Khan snapped outta his daydream and headed inside, while walking pass Zoya's room he saw her looking at the one side of the earing that she had of her mom and he remembered how he had called her to give it back to her but then he didnt, he wondered if he should keep it or give it back, he turned and headed for his room. Zoya sat on her bed thinking " Abhu , ammi, why did Allah take you away from me, please come back i just want to know you, i want u to hug me and love me" a tear rolled down her face. Asad there lookin on from the side of her opened door, said "she pretends she is fine but in reality she is quite sad and she is hurting..." he watched her get up and moved her suitcases already packed to the right side of her bed, and in that moement he knew that she was leavin and if he had given her back that earing alll he would have is memories and that just couldnt cut it. Mr.Khan turned and walked to his room and shut the door behind him. Najma, phupi and zoya sat in the livin room lookin at a indian show and Zoya face filled with happiness trying to surpress her grief, Mr.Khan passes by and looks on but Asad knew how much she pretends to be fine when she isnt because she believes that she is very tough. they switched off the tv and all three began to chat about how much Zoya beign there with them changed alot of things, asad sat at the dinner table and was listening along, phupi told zoya that she would make a wonderful bride, wife, mother someday and that she should always remember that she considers her as her second daughter and to never forget that, phupi with tears in her eyes gets up hugs Zoya and leaves. Najma told zoya that she is the best freind that she has ever had in a long time and she loves her "you are more than a real sister to me i love you"...asad over hears all of this and wonders "Can it really be this easy to admit one's feeling?"...morning arrived and Zoya got dressed with her jeans and top and headed outisde, phupi , najma and Mr.Khan stood there lookin on as she rolled her bags out of her room, Phupi n najma hugged Zoya tightly not wanting to let her go, they tld her to have a safe trip n call as much as possible and never forget that she is always welcomed as this is her family aswell, Mr.Khan asked her if that was all her stuff and she told him yes, but i have arranged for a taxi there is no need to put yourself through all this, just thnak you very much for accommodating me"...Asad face was boiling red he did not know what to tell her, there was so much feelings that he didnt know which to express, he wanted to stop her but how she needed a slolid reason and he was afriad to give her one. Asad walked her out of the house and to the cab "ZO... Ms.farooqui take care of yourself and have a safe trip ", Mr.Khan give me a reason to stay, please" zoya thought in her mind...but nothing more escaped his mouth, he reached out n hugged her slightly and in about three seconds it was over, she was in the cab driving away. Asad stood paralyzed, he couldnt move, he didnt believe what just happened, but Mr.Khan pulled himself outta his state of shock and entered the house and told najma n phupi that she just left, she is gone. he went to his room, and Phupi followed, Asad, can i ask you something?, Yes ammi, what is it?.Do you like her? Yes..Is she your type?...Yes but she drives me crazy but thats what i like about her... Do you think she needs to change anything clothes type after marraige and such?...No.ammi Zoya is absolutely fine the way she is!!!...Phupi looked shocked but Asad was horrified thinking about what he just said, he admitted that he loved her if not but really like her...Phupi interjected Zoya nahi hai? Tanveer hai !! i was speaking about Tanveer, Asad do you like Zoya?? Ammi i need to leave now i need to stop her, what is the time? Asad slow down who are you going to stop?. Zoya i need to stop Zoya...Asad ran out the house jumped into his jeep and drove like a maniac to the airport, he bought a ticket for her flight although the agent assured him that he will surely miss the flight he hurried her along... Meanwhile Zoya sat awaiting n her flight to be announced and wen it did she got up, but she forgot to get a mini pizza so she decided to get one, while in the line she remembered how Asad had made her feel so much better all the times she was down, n phupi n najma loved her unconditionally, how the khans opened up there home and there hearts to her (except Mr.Akdoo), Asad reached the boarding terminal for her flight in time to see the agent pack up all passes and walk off, defeated the great Mr.Khan. Asad face was filled with guilt and grief as he walked out of the terminal and headed to his jeep. When he arrived home Phupi answered the door and saw his face red with frustration n eyes filled with tears he hugged his ammi n said she's gone!! she left me!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice n touching...

U hv stopped at a v crucial point...

Please continue soon... no1 wants Mr. Khan and Ms. Farooki sad...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good one...pls contnueee😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nicely written. Ending was so sad :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awe that was awesome
plz continue your such a cliff hanger
no one wants Asya to get separated
plz continue
and pm me if possible

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