OS : Slightly Cloudy

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Posted: 12 years ago
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~Slightly Cloudy~


Remember that slightly cloudy day, on the seashore, intertwining and twisting our fingers around as we doubled up then hugging each other as we rehearsed our one true love vows to one another? And after which I think, we had them committed to memory forever; we kissed and we had our promises pledged to each other...

Promises like, never letting go...to be each others shadow and mirror...to keep each other in check and lifting one another up when the depths of sadness chills our heart.

To be understood and to understand, to be loved as to love.

To grow to be one...forever.

Remember when I took out those silly half-heart shaped rings we bought when we were children and skid one into your finger? It didn't go far so we laughed. We laughed till you took the other ring and tried to do the same.


I smiled and took your hand onto mine and pulled you to lock your lips with mine. And we kissed as we put our rings together and both the half hearts made one heart.

I felt your sweet lips moving along mine, and you smiled at it. Tears brimming in your eyes. I kissed them away & you whispered, "I love you".



And today, I look at the small flecked rings I have kept all these years. Even if it doesn't fit, I still try to put it on...I try so hard, pushing the ring as far as it can go only because you had put it on me that cloudy day. And I can feel you touching my hands again.

I'm missing you so much; it still hurts a lot today as it hurt that day that you were snatched away from me. I hold the ring closer to my heart, my hands hugging around it.

It's just not fair, not to have you. I wish your hands were resting on mine at this instant. Devoid of, how much it hurts not to have you with me every day, it is you who I want to think of everyday to the end of my last breathe.

But I know you are always here with me and always will.

Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan, you're always loved, forever missed and never forgotten.


"..Lakh Duniya Kahe, tum nehin ho

Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho.."



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well, you must have guessed by now who was that dukhi aadma? 😆

Hey! 😎

*takes of her glares*
*Throws 'em inside her shirt and it gets stuck somewhere-I-can't-say-aloud🤪🤣*

never-friggin-mind!

I am tahi and I was more of a silent reader of this forum. I got hooked to QH lately so couldn't help myself from posting! 🤪

There are so many brilliant writers in this forum👏 It took all my courage to post anything here actually! 😳 Even though you people look friendly 🤪

It's really small so hopefully aap log ande nehi maroge! 😳

P.S: Chappals must be from Steve Madden and tamatars better be fresh! 😎
p.s.s: this OS is devoid of any logic 🤪

Love,
Despicable Tahi😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I started reading, sooo beautiful, so dreamy !

Then when i neared the end, i had this lump in my throat as i dreaded the worst!

Damnnn. No more Zoya. Zoya dead. WHYYY?? </3

It was so mega sad. But sooo beautiful. So well written!

The ring part so adorable, the slightly cloudy sheet above them, the imagery, so beautiful

BUT WHY MUST SHE BE BEAD? </3

Okay sorry, il get over it! *sniff sniff*


LOVELY!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh My Gawsh!!
That was beautiful🤗
Your writing style was absoultely wonderful
The half hearted rings were just AWWW
Even though this is a short OS, it's full of many emotions
I loved it, do write more Tahi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will never figure out the logic behind the glares and where they disappear to, but to see you here and read something from you feels really really good.

Good going bahuria, loved your short and sweet OS.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*bawls*

*cries loudly*

*beats chest like wild gorilla*

*subsides*

*sniffs*

THIS MADE ME EMOTIONAL, YOU LADY!

I loved it. :D It was really really beautiful. ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice, well written.
No prizes for guessing who that dukhi aatma is 😆
you should write more and write longer ones. I love looong oneshots 😳

welcome to forum tahi.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you everyone! ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice story! U have written really well!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my god that made me cry
you started it in such a beautiful way
the rings and kiss everything was described in such a perfect way
but by the end it was soo sad
you're such an amazing writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You made me sad!
It was beautiful!

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