Shadows FF Last Chapter & Epilogue (strictly 16+)

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khadupam

@khadupam

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#311

finally something about zoya and asad feeling 😊😊😊

its really great👏👏👏👏👏

doo continue soon😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Awsome update... 😊
Looking forward for nxt part update soon... 😊

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

great update.. Loved reading the last part.. :)

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Can't wait for the next chapter! Just read this all in one go again!

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Like the update. It was cute. Pls update soon...

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nrthya

@nrthya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

it was nice..!!!

Asad is clever.. he is approaching in a different way!!!

there is something huge in her life i guess!! hope we will know soon!!

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

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This update was so cute. Seeing Asad bond with Noor just so that he could sit next to Zoya and how Noor "plopped herself on him" was just adorable. 😊

Then came the scene where Zoya starts to feel an attachment to the bangles that he gave he 😳😳 Again, too sweet. I could just imagine Asad leaning against the doorframe in his white kurta... *fangirls for a minute or two*...he's too hot to handle...*pulls head out of the gutter*...as I was saying, the fact that Asad told her his whole life story was really touching and how Zoya told him about herself and Humaira's lives after they became orphans made me want to just give the two a huge bear hug.

And then came that heart stopping moment where he bent down to kiss the bangles. That gesture was way too sweet and innocent.

I shrieked like a kid who had just been told they're going to Disneyland for summer when I read the line "as he circled her arms around him". Honestly, it was just so...I don't know what it was but it was awesome!

Thanks for the PM and continue soon!!

Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago