~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Now you're gonna get a number of wacks on your head and innumerable hugs bear hugs that too!

Why??
Because..
1. The first part was mindblowing and was keeping me on the edge of my seat, as I read 😲 and read and read 😡 and read 😲 😳 🤢 😉 😆 and read...❤️ and read.. 🤣

2. Asad's outburst MashaAllah! Allah Miyah! Kya likha hain! Waah waah!👏

3. Damn you! We both are writing similar Short Stories kya?? Haen?? It's like you have the same thoughts like mine and you put it down there! I should be really angry at you, 🤔 and trying to be too... Hmmph!
*in a small voice* but..

4. And Zoya's mouth forming an 'O' and her wide eyes were perfect for the situation and the way it was going! The intern is seriously as gossip maar! Maybe it was you!! Hmm... 🤓*narrowing eyes to slits and assessing you with suspicion* Mallika-e-Soap Opera...😉

5. That 'I LOVE YOU ZOYA' was like making my ears start ringing with the words. It was written with such intensity!!👏 You know not many people have that ability to write such stuff that gives off the intensity with which they were actually said. Even after using 'Caps Lock' they don't really get the reader to feel what they were imagining. But you did it, and..

"I Approve!!" 😎 A huge round of applause for you, my lubly girl! *applauding*

6. I didn't listen to the song, and I skipped the lyrics part, only coz I was listening to this wonderful song of Coldplay - Hurts Like Heaven. Just gets my groovy and all senti simultaneously and all singing-along-with-the-song! Damn!! The tune, the music, the lyrics (though I couldn't make out much 😆), just made me go Wow, Wow and WOW!!! Jeez! Am such a CARAZZY gal!

You Know Me! 😎
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago
Aisha.K thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ankie!!wonderfull...😛it made my day!!lovely yaar!!ill read it again😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😆

unres 😉

Firstly I would say I simply love the SONG!!! its one of my very few favourite serial title tracks ❤️
The wordings are amaziing...just PERFECT for AsYa 😃

And now coming back to your last part...what an ending man,,seriously what an ending!!!👏
hayye I can never get tired of reading this over and over again!! Why dont the cv's think like you jaani 😭

I was reading it as if its my exam question paper😆
It was BRILLIANT!!! and today u again proved you are such a MINDFREAKING writer!!!!👍🏼

Loads of love and hugs to u for the beautiful story 🤗❤️
Edited by sophiya_92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dat was one emotional story lvdit
wish show me bhi tanveer ku aisa hi slap mile
friendsall thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab bas bhi karo Ankie...Rula diya tune!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! par khushi ke aasoon...😭 though i wud nt wan Zoe to b eseen in such a dreadful state...par anth bala tho sab bala!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up ur gud work!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
looovvveeeddd the last part ankie di! Ur fabulous!! Thnks 4 d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏

BRILLIANT!

What can I say?
Very gripping and beautifully written!
The effort you have put in shines through!👏

It was perfect, barring a few spelling mistakes. Forgiven!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chicksoup

👏👏👏


BRILLIANT!

What can I say?
Very gripping and beautifully written!
The effort you have put in shines through!👏

It was perfect, barring a few spelling mistakes. Forgiven!😆


SEE YOU READ IT THAT EVEN FULLL 👏 👏 🤗

i know right! my eyes were blurring, and then the auto-correct! Damm! i will make it fine shine tomorrow if i will to 🤣 😆

still i have a feeling it wasn't up to the mark 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful 👏

Many thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res Res :)
Edited:
Guess what?
I loved you for this part
Beautiful Part
Plus a hug🤗 That too bear crushing
And..I loved loved loved the part itself
Continue soon <3
Edited by risingsea101 - 12 years ago

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