~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

SEE YOU READ IT THAT EVEN FULLL 👏 👏 🤗

i know right! my eyes were blurring, and then the auto-correct! Damm! i will make it fine shine tomorrow if i will to 🤣 😆

still i have a feeling it wasn't up to the mark 😕

Wow!

You are not satisfied!!! Whats on your mind?

It is never good enough! That way you will always strive for perfection.

Way to go!👏👏👏

Quote

cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

very nice update...😊...

such sweet and funny scenes between asya...❤️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Wow!

You are not satisfied!!! Whats on your mind?

It is never good enough! That way you will always strive for perfection.

Way to go!👏👏👏

You always speak too lofty of me. i dont know but i dont like it 🤣 the 2nd part was my personal fav. this one kuch jama nahi :P 😕

Quote

shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

wao...ankie darling...atti uttam...

vry nicely written...

Quote

cutejerry

@cutejerry

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

It was really superb .
I just loved Asad throughout the story .

And u know the best part was Tere Liye track . I simply love this song . [:P

Few lines which I wanted to add for asya

Tere sajde mein sar hai jhmuka
Tu ibaadat hai , tu hi dua
:aut ke baad bhi jo miley bandagi ka silaa
Woh maang loon tere liye

Khushiyaan hazaar tere liye
Jannat doo waar tere liye
Meri jaan nissar tere liye...] 😳 😊

Edited by cutejerry - 12 years ago