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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Jeez! So intense!!

But loved it!!Hope Zoya will be better!!

Please PM me next part!! Thanks!!

Sammy❤️

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Okay, you don't deserved to be killed, but hugged tightly and smothered with kisses on your face!! I immensely liked this part! Well, Tanveer's insane outburst just put me off the edge since it was so soap-opera ishtyle, but kya karein? Me dear Ankie is no less! You the Soap Opera Queen, you know?

Mallika-e-Soap Opera!

But you made up for it all, when you added Asad screaming like an agonized animal. I could very well hear it echoing around in my ears. Damn! I would love to see Asad do that on screen. He has already screamed "Zoya" many times, so this won't hurt at all!! 😉

So good update, girl! And me is not at all angry with the cliffy! But yeah, upload the next up-i-date soon...ish!

Annie

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

wow gr8 work!! pls continue soon

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roses.09

@roses.09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

nice one please continue soon

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princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

OMG you have to continue ASAP this is sooo good yet sad I really wanna know what happened please update soon and I would love it if you please please please PM me once u update :):):)