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Amayaa

@Amayaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Ab to tujhe tamatar aur patthar marne hi padenge😆

u r so so bad😡

I luv u as well as hate u😕

Update soon plzzz

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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

sorry baccha cudnt comment on da 1st part coz of kambakht studies
ahaha!!!kya likhti hai ap mera sunday toh ekdum funday ho gaya ye padke😳
yippie!!!i luvd chudail's qatil-e-confession
haww!!!i so adored dis akdu ahmed khan acting insane only & only 4 his zoya😉...aur tune toh usse swear bhi karwa lia😆...by GOD!!!gussa isse kehte hai beta😛
awiee!!!asad bleeding zoya sinking kya cliffhanger hai boss😲
ab jaldi jaldi last part ud karde tujhe bohot DUAein milenge😃...kyuki ye battameez dil manena yar🤣
chal lambaish comment kar dia ab khush ho ja meri pyari si ankie pankie🤗

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cutejerry

@cutejerry

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Awesome ...
u are brilliant yaar ...
love it ...
pls update 3rd part . am dying to read it ...👏

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anisha

@anishaalluri

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

i want the UPDATE NOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

otherwise i wont b able to sleep *pout*

plzzz yar cont na

this is not done dude

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Wow that was sooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was amazing and I loved how Asad slapped Tanveer!

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Superb ankie...tujhe pata bhi hai tune KAMBAKHAT ZOYA kitni bar use kiya is part me lol

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ojaswi

@ojaswi_kajen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

I jst read ur ff...

It was awesome...

Loved it...cont soon...

Nd do PM...:):):)

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Yet another cliffy??😡
this time it is worser🤢

But what a FANTASTIC post..tannu ko apna aukad dikhane ke liye asad ko ek pyaara sa if wala huggy from me 🤗

'AMMII!!! ISSNE!!! ISSNE MERI ZOYA KO MARNA KI KOSHISH KI!! ISSNE!! ISSNEE!! AAMII ISSNEE!!'

Awleey such cute lines..I want them asap in real life..hayyye

' TANVEER SACH SACH BATAO, NAHI TOH MUJHSE BURA KOI NAHI HOGA!!!'

The oh-so handsome angry young man is back 😉 😆

'MAT PUKAROO MUJHE USS GHATIYA NAAM SE!!'

This was total rofl...hahaha!! I am still laughing out loud 🤣

Pata hai Asad humne use 5 baar sir pe rod se mara, magar woh Asad aur Asad chillahti rahi! Waah kya pyaar hai usska! Dhamki de rahi thi hame!!HAME!! Hame uss halat mein ki Asad hume nahi chorne wala! Ahahaha! Dekho, aj Khuda bhi chahena usske bacha nahi payega! AUR ASAD AHMED KHAN KO HAMARA HONA SE KOI ROK BHI NAHI PAYEGAA! Ahahahaha!'

The perfect laughter for a perfect kutti kamini vamp..😉 😆

Tanveer screamed. The very next thing she knew was her left cheek burning up in pain as she fell against the window beside the wall. It registered everyone, Asad had slapped her.

BALLE BALLE🥳

'MAIN SIRF AUR SIRF ZOYA KA HOON! ZOYA SIRF MERI HAI MERI! GET THAT IN YOUR F*CKED UP BRAIN'

NAILED IT!!! 👏 👍🏼
asad ban gaya intelligent (rhyme it with raju ban gaya gentleman) 😆 🤣

He literary strangled Tanveer up in his grip but the Inspector released them.

maar daal usse asad..JUST KILL HER 😡

'AGAR TUM MERI DOST NAHI HOTI TANVEER, MAIN TUMHE USS FACTORY MEIN KHUD ZINDA GADD DETA!!!'

gaad de usse..she is not even worth a human being, let alone be a friend 😡

His fingers lingered on the table full of instruments beside, and laced around a sharp instrument. He let his pain out through letting all the force, go though the instrument clenched tightly in his fists.

The wall and his trousers were stained with blood.

His Blood.

MANGALPUR MEMORIES

'She's sinking Mr Khan!'

Gonna kill you for this cliffy 😭

But what a post Ankie...PERRFECCT continuation👏
You deserve this-- 🤗

Continue ASAP..😃 😊

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Awww Awsm work Ankie <3 hamesha k jaisa..i always loves ua posts...nd plsss upload...next part sooon m waiting...!!

i jst lovd tht scene jb Asad tanveeer ko slap karta hahahhahahah

:))))))))))))))))))

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Ankie I am speechless, it was chumeshwari update. Mein to khushi se paagal hi ho jaungi agar serial mein asad tanveer par aise hi dahade aur ek zordar thapad lagaye.

Waiting for more please update soon.

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