An ASYA OS |RUK JAO ZOYA| final part updated pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Absolutely wonderful story👏👏, well done
Just stumbled upon it today, and read all 3 chapters at once...I love your writing style.
Would love to hear Asad's phone play that ringtone 😳, would certainly shock Zoya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
now dis called a updt. Wonderful
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hey dis was fabulous ending, just lyk it shud hav been. I just wish to see dis in QH too. do write more dear, u write v well, n y do u think we'l throw chappals at u, dis part was just perfect.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Allah Miyan at last you have posted🤗

Such a long wait

thanks for the P<
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
I will read and comment but am sure it will be awesome like the previous two😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
My like button is not working dear but one like is not enough for what yoi have written

Its amazing


Words are not enough ti describe it



Its beautiful


👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
hey dear
that was just amazing
loved it
and a fantastic ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
This was so good and amazing. Even I want our Asad tho chase Zoya in a love stricken way in the air port. I have been imagining him stopping her in all filmy ways. Crashing all the rules and regulations , leaving apart the entire world he just wanted to stop her. Oh.. How perfect it will be if only if it happens in real. But, then you fulfilled my wish over here. So, thanks for that.

~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
hey that was such a nice update
well done
glad that everything worked out😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Your hard work certainly paid off!! This update was amazing.. Hope this wasn't the last part :)

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