AsYa: Dil Ki Toh Lag Gayi ||Part-13 pg 129 ||

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@nilorina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

i'm falling in love with your ff ❤️

this is too good yaar👏

plzz continue soon i can't wait

do pm me next time plzz

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

brilliant update...typical scenario of the shepherd calling lion, lion...hope asad is not too late to save zoya...

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

I really love your story! What a cliffhanger! Will we get to hear a Mangalpur style "Zoyaaa" dahaad? Waiting for the lion's roar and a tear jerking scene! Pls update soon!

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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Aww...dis was a sad 1...i realy hope asad reaches in tym 2 save zoya...awsum updte...continue asap

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teddy25

@teddy25

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI
Yippee me first!!love the way u write..comedy,romance,pain,yearning,evilness everything combined together..update was fab..🤣 zoya texted asad for a cockroach..how typical.perfectly suits her charecter.poor asad bhaiyya has so many museebat's do deal with..precap:blood!oh nooo...update the next part soonishhh.thanx for da pm

Thanks dear for having the patience to read my long update and giving such a nice feedback 🤗. Don't worry about the 'blood' precap. After all, Asad is there 😊, so no fear. I will try to update ASAP.

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teddy25

@teddy25

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Saw the update before you pmed.

Gosh when do i get a new update? tomorrow?!

you wont let me sleep at night you know?

Awefreakingsome! 👏

loved it to the core.

Total AsYalicious.

felt as if i watching QH

doo i need to tell more how awesome it is? 😳

EESSHHH I have no words to say 😳. Totally speechless. Your feedback matters a lot to me. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your love and support. 🤗

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

awwwn this part was so touchy indeed

even though zoya irritated him but still he asnsered all her messages and calls

but last paragraph was like ummm whts gonna happen man

loved it

thank u so much for the pm

love this ss

awosomeee

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

i hope zoya is safe nd they confess soon

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anushka

@anushka2112

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Once again you proved u r a fabulous and humours writer... I loved ur text msg part...
I know our hunk gallant sher khan will save his sherni... Love the tragic bcoz uske baad hi to actual mitwa moments milebge...I want razia and tanveer's plan to be shattered on the floor... and Asad be a Savior of his lady love...
thank u for wonderful update...
Love
Anushka