ASYA SS PATH TO TRUE LOVE NOT TOO EASY ch 7 (28/4) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

omgg that was suchhh an amazing part and the percap is sooo cuteee ^^ i'm so exited for the next part 😆 i'm glad that u cleared everything for Asad in this part! now we can have some real AsYa scenes [:p]
Continue soon,
Love, Laiba



Thanx . I will be updating today
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: irock321

Awww super duper adorable! Awww like awww!!!! OMG!! ahahaha xD I'm sitting here swooning xD All your fault!!! :P Loved it!



Thankyou so much dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
So guys here I am back . Thankyou so so much for all the likes and comments . I am really really very happy .


One important ques , I had thought that I would complete it in 8 -9 chapters , but now I have new ideas and I feel it will go very long . So pls tell me should I change it into FF or I should wind up my story in 2 chapters more . Pls tell me , as my decision will be based purely on your wishes .

Here goes the next update .

It had been 4 days since Zoya returned to Khan mansion . Life had again returned to normal . Dilshad was recovering at a good speed . Zoya was stillupset with Asad , but that was very normal .
Asad and Zoya used to fight without any reason like always . But now their fight didn't contained any heart breaking words like commenting on parentage or the upbringing . They used to fight like kids .
Asad had decided that he would first gain her forgiveness and then love . Asad had decided that he would never shout on her or say any cruel thing to her .

But today this girl was testing his patience . It had been three hours more then the curfew hour , and she was still not at home . Ammi was resting , and Najma was busy with exam peparation , and this girl god knows where she was . Nowadays , she used to take care of full family like a perfect bahu , and then full day , she used to disappear . Asad wanted to know where she went , but she never told him . Asad was really worried . In last one hour he had nearly 100 times on her phone ,and got no answer . Now Asad was really really geting nervous . He knew she was a musibat magnet . What if she was in any danger . No ... his heart yelled at him . And he wanted to thrash himself for thinking such a thing .

Zoya hurried inside the house . God today her interview had really taken long . She wished that phupee and tamaatar must have had their food and gone to rest .

As she entered the house she met with an infuriated Asad .
As Asad saw Zoya a sense of relief dawned upon him . But quicklly that relief was replaced by fury .
"What the hell Ms Faarooqui where have you been ? Have you seen the time ?"
"Sorry Mr. Khan actually ..."she was cut in between as Asad caught her tightly by her arms . "Don't u feel , u have a responsibility for those who wait for u and are worried for u ."
He tightened his grip on her arms .
"I don't owe u an explanation Mr. Khan ."
"You have to explain me Ms. Faarooqui . I have some rights on u "
"Stop acting like a husband Mr. Khan " replied Zoya . And suddenly she felt embarrased for saying it.
But Asad was in great fury . Nothing would cool him down . He still tightened his grip on his hands , " you have to explain me Ms. Faarooqui . "
Tears rolled down Zoya's eyes . " u are hurting me Mr. Khan "
And those words brought Asad back to his senses . He wanted to kill himself for hurting her . The thing he promised he would never do .
He loosened his grip , and slowly released her . Zoya turned back to go to her room .
Then in a very calm and composed way Asad said , " I tried your no. 100 times , but there was no answer "
Zoya turned back to face him , and replied " I have lost my cell , ipad , money and cards . So I am searching a job . Today the interview took too much time , nad I doubt that I will not be selected ."
"No need to find a job . U can take my cards and use how u want . U can keep them with you , till u wish . "
"Thanx , Mr. Khan , but I will manage on my own . "
Zoya turned to go back , but suddenly stopped . " mr. Khan , phupee and tamaatar , have taken dinner . "
"Yes ."
"Ms Faarooqui , dinner ?"
"I am not hungry Mr. Khan." Zoya went back to her room.

Asad was really upset . He didn't wanted to hurt her . But the bad thoghts which came in his mind about her , had drawn him crazy . But no he would not let her sleep empty stomach .

It had been nearly 1 hr , since Zoya had returned . She was sitting in her room and thinking abot the day's incident , when suddenly her concentration was broken . There was a loud noise of t.v. , coming from hall . She went outside , and was surprised to see Asad watching a horror movie , with pizzas and coke in his hand .
" Allah miyan , what's wrong with u Mr. Khan . At such late hour , u are seeing tv at such a loud sound ."
"Oh sorry , I didn't noticed ."
Zoya turned back to go when Asad said
"Ms. Faarooqui , would u like to see movie with me "
"No Mr. Khan , I am really tierd ."
"Please "
"No Mr. Khan , I can't "
" Oh now I get it , u are afraid to see a horror movie at night . No problem"
"Not at all Mr. Khan . Its just that I don't want to see "
"Really , u aren't afraid ? Then prove it , see the movie "
" I understand your trick very well Mr Khan , and I am not giving in ."
" fine , u may leave "
Asad talked to himself aloud " girls will always be girls , afraid of everything "
His plan worked .
Next moment Zoya was sitting on the sofa right beside him.
Asad asked him for pizza , but she refused .
In next half an hour , all the pizza and coke was finished by Zoya ; and she didn't even realised when she did that .
Zoya's eyes were glued on tv and Asad's eyes on Zoya.

Suddenly something very fearful appeard on the screen . Zoya , gave a small cry , like a 5 year old kid ,and burried her face in Asad's chest .Asad was shoched due to this sudden movement . He saw her . Her both the hands took hold of Asad's shirt tightly , and her face was burried in Asad's chest , his bare chest , as his three buttons were open .

Asad saw this beautiful scene . He could feel her lips on his bare chest . This sensation was driving him crazy . He wanted to hold her , take her in his embrace , kiss her .he had a feeling to protect her from this evil world . Only god knows with how much difficulty he stopped himself . He felt as if Zoya's hairs were playing on his chest .
Asad tucked her hairs behind her ears . With the touch of Asad , Zoya came back to reality . God she had felt heavenly in his chest , as if it was a paradise on earth .She had never felt so much secure ever in her life . His touch brought her back to her senses . She withdrew herself , and saw in other direction . Asad was staring at her . He could understand that she was uncomfortable . There was an awkward silence .
Asad broke the silence by a " I must say Ms Faarooqui , u are a very brave girl ."
"There is no need to laugh Mr Khan , it was really very frightening . "
"Oh really Ms Faarooqui "
"Yes Mr Khan , didn't u saw it "
"I was busy seeing u "

Suddenly asad realised what he had said . He tried to change the topic . "I must change the channel ."
Next was a cartoon channel .
"Stop stop stop Mr Khan . Wow I really love tom & jerry ."
"Are u serious Ms Faarooqui. "
"Yes Mr Khan . I daily saw tom & jerry in New York "
"I can't believe it "

Asad laughed to himself . This girl saw tom & jerry . How can anybody be so cute .
Zoya saw him laughing . "Stop laughing Mr Khan , there is nothing funny it . Infact u should also see tom & jerry . U know how much the tom resembles to you . He is always back at jerry and scares her to death ."
"Really . And u r like jerry , whu doesn't leaves even one opportunity to irritate and disturb tom "
"No problem Mr Khan . I like jerry "
"I too love jerry " said Asad in a very sarcastic way .

Zoya was shocked . Had he said it for jerry , or commented on her . But she chose to ignore it .
They saw tom & jerry and slept on the sofa , god knows when .

Zoya's head on Asad shoulder . Asad's head on Zoya's head . God , they looked so adorable together . A perfect couple . Or a perfect tom and jerry .

Precap : Asad tricks Zoya to go on a dinner with her.


Finally completed . It took me more than two hrs to write . Typing on mobile is really tough .
Guys , I am the worst at writing something romantic , which must be very clear to u all , by my above piece . But I tried my best . Yes I know my best is not goo enough . But still...
Please do comment. And like . Each comment is a prize for me .


Joota chappal tamaatar , sab kuch sar aankhon par
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
u shud continue as ff cause it so lovelly ...i m so loving the way asad trick zoya to make her agree as per he wants
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Asyalover

u shud continue as ff cause it so lovelly ...i m so loving the way asad trick zoya to make her agree as per he wants


Thankyou .
I will try to continue it as a ff if others also wish
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awww, this was so cuteee. Waiting for the next part, update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Loved it. Very cute. TOM AND JERRY ARE MY FAVOURITE so I'm a little baised =P But I love how he tricks her and knows her so well. Please do continue. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Awww, this was so cuteee. Waiting for the next part, update soon :)


Thankyou... 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

ah, i love dis asad. Cont soon


I too love this asad . Wish he becomes like this in the show
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90


Thankyou 😛

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