An AsYa OS : UNTIL YOU (part 3 page 20) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Its truly our Zoe...wonderfully described Zo and her dialogues...awesome...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


Bunny it has a second part READ :-*

Apppu this is my Bunnyy *hugs both tight*

🤗


hey bunny how are you???

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Blue,

I love the way you have kept them both so much in character!👏

'Are you checking me out?', and him being totally caught off guard- CLASSIC!😆

I could imagine him going woh woh...actually...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Blue,


I love the way you have kept them both so much in character!👏

'Are you checking me out?', and him being totally caught off guard- CLASSIC!😆

I could imagine him going woh woh...actually...😆


thank you .. yeah keeping in character is important, specially when its AsYa 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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Did you write this Bhaijan? 😲
Naaao! 😲
Bhaijaaan Naooo! 😲
yea naa insafii hai!!! 😲

I was rofl-ing all the time 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Now here you go

For updating ^_^



For making me laugh for 10 continuous minx



p.s. : Woh mera kaam hai, but then you are sooo goody too! Ahh afterall Behen kisski hoo aapp :-*

For the Second part's rating you get a







really is it that badd that you said bhte na insafii hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
I loved your "totallly bakwas" as said by you.😉

And some of the epic of these bakwas were the following:😛

she had a weird ringtone, Ishq waqt zaya karne ka tareeka hai, laikin humare pas karne k liye aur kch nahi, it ended in a annoying laugh".

Mughal e Azaam k jahpanah ki aatma

signals have again ran away with its girlfriend

this peaceful person sleeping had a dual personality and a mouth which can burst like a volcano anytime.

Totally it was worth reading. 👏

Awaiting for the next part eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

awesome update!!!

asya's conversation was so good...i couldn't stop laughing ...plz cont soon!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: laizu

I loved your "totallly bakwas" as said by you.😉

And some of the epic of these bakwas were the following:😛

she had a weird ringtone, Ishq waqt zaya karne ka tareeka hai, laikin humare pas karne k liye aur kch nahi, it ended in a annoying laugh".

Mughal e Azaam k jahpanah ki aatma

signals have again ran away with its girlfriend

this peaceful person sleeping had a dual personality and a mouth which can burst like a volcano anytime.

Totally it was worth reading. 👏

Awaiting for the next part eagerly.


Allah Miyah !! thank you soo much for reading. 😳😳😃
will try to update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice nice nice...

made my day...

plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Awsommmee awsommmee awsommmee... wowww great update... thank you for making my day... love it dear... now pls update soon dnt make us to wait long...
Thanks for pm
Love
Anushka

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