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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Fabulous...the ending was unexpected..😉 You should write more of AsYa..u know..😳 Can u plz pm me for your OSs or ffs..?😃

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-iLoveKaran-

@-iLoveKaran-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

that was really good !!! loved how they were husband and wife !! u write so well !! :D

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Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I loved this! you have to write more on asad zoya!

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

This was really good!

Nicely written!

Do you have any more work on AsYa?

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friendsall

@friendsall

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

superb work...nice catch @ d end...keep writing

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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome os😊😊..loved it❤️

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Mohini

@ChocoDamon

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: blueflames
ahem ahem... m still dazed out..☺️
thank God they were married, warna aise illicit rendezvous would have been too much 😉

LOL. It would have been a real scandal, if they were not married, right?!😉 I was not very sure about the ending... But i guess people liked it!!

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Mohini

@ChocoDamon

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: irock321
I love it! It was amazingg!!! Only Zoya would come up with this idea xD LOL

I know!!

Only Zoya can come up with this idea.😆 I have rarely come across a female character- so spontaneous and dynamic. Nothing is impossible when it comes to her!

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Mohini

@ChocoDamon

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sophie420
This was really good!
Nicely written!
Do you have any more work on AsYa?

Nope. I have a general apathy towards the keyboard. So I rarely type something out. Most of my stories remain in my head!!😆

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blueflames

@blueflames

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ChocoDamon

LOL. It would have been a real scandal, if they were not married, right?!😉 I was not very sure about the ending... But i guess people liked it!!

it was a well knit story, i liked it.

well as for scandalous i cant comment much, as everybody has their own point of view 😆😳☺️