|Hullabaloo| An AsYa SS :) Updated on 1/4/13 Pg30! - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Jingalala!

I liked this part. :P

I know, it's my ego that's talking.

But really, tell me if it confused you even more.

To simplify it, Asad is pissed off cause his client, Lars Mikkelsen is coming down for a day's visit to Bhopal. Asad wanted to have one holiday, at home, with his family and Mikkelsen ruined it.
So Asad is waiting at the office for Mikkelsen to come.
Meanwhile, Maan Singh Khurana is trying to sneak into Asad's office for some unknown reason.

ALL the other characters are the same way they are in the show.

Now, please read part 1 again. :) You'll understand properly now..

FOR THE RECORD:

Peeps.

I know that Asad has met Yash Scindia before in Mangalpur.

So yeah, small glitch in the storyline.

But I didn't want to bring in Yash Scindia because I dont watch Punar Vivaah.

But I watched Geet, like a mental.

So yes, it's Gurmeet Chaudhry as Maan Singh Khurana. :)

Our mystery man.

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Edited by havokhotline - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
res

unres

read both d parts now😃

it was awesomee👏

maan s d mystery man😃

loved ittt😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Wow..this chapter cleared my confusion entirely!the first part was so asadishh!! Breakfast=fight with zoya🤣 and the mystery man is Maan!!! It was too good.update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: risingsea101

That was an outstanding part

Who's this mystery man
Can't wait to find out
Hayye, continue soon
Farhana <3


The mystery man is..

TADA!

Read the second part and you will know. :)

Thanks so much for all the encouragement.

Love :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: grad2011

really nice start update soon ;)


I will... :)

Thank you so much for reading. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Haila...a total surprize..MSK in Asad's office!! Looking forward to the next chapter..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: rennie

i like it...i guess...but i'm so confused...pls do update soon, and put me out of my confusion...


I hope the second part made you understand better :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Hey havok lovin this story. Have to say when I read part 1 I thought it was ASR but MSK works too... 😃

I love how you have described Asad's OCD. It's true to character yet it offers light moments in the story.

Can't wait for the the next update! Maybe another one today to keep a poor girl at work entertained?xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Wow..this chapter cleared my confusion entirely!the first part was so asadishh!! Breakfast=fight with zoya🤣 and the mystery man is Maan!!! It was too good.update soon.


Yup, I really wanted to bring out their creepy similarities and their astounding differences. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the part. :D

I will update soon. Thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Oh, I get it now
lol, nice part
I read part 1 again, confusion cleared
Continue soon
<3 Farhana

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