AsYa Updated Final Part Page 42: 6 years later

UK_VS thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
My first OS on AsYa...hope you enjoy it!!!
Part II: Page 10; Part III: Page 17; Part IV: Page 23 and Part V: Page 30; Part VI: Page 35 and Part VII: Page 42.
PMs will not be possible as it is too tedious.
6 years later: We meet again for we are destined
Background:
Asad is divorced from Tanveer and Zoya is based in NYC after her mission Abu. But Asad and Zoya had consumated their relationship (the story will be a part of the OS). Before Asad and Zoya could take the next step Tanveer and Razia happened. So Asad married Tanveer and Zoya moved back to NYC. Ayan and Humeira are married.
NOW:
Zoya felt sadness and pain as she deplaned. Even though she and Ayan married for a reason, she never felt for Ayan like she did for... But anyway, they were divorced and were good friends and still family. Ayan had married her step sister and the love of his life Humeira. Zoya was back in Bhopal for a summer break and to be with Humeira as she was expecting. Humeira had broken ties with Razia after the incident so Zoya was her mother too.
She completed the immigration proceedings when she heard a child's voice squeal in delight and said "Ayan". Zoya looked up to watch Ayan and Humeira equally excited. Zoya Farruki realized that her daughter Zainab (taken from another OS) had spotted her beloved Ayan. Then another childish voice squealed and said "Ira". Zoya's son Armaan has spotted "Humeira" (armaan could not say Humeira:) so he named her Ira). Her five year old twins had spotted their favorite people in the world. She smiled and sighed as she was left with all the baggage. Zain and Armaan were scooped up and played with. The four had forgotten her for a few seconds. Ayan and Ira realized about Zoya and then rushed to help her with the bags. Before that both hugged her. Zoya smiled.
Zoya had requested Ayan to book an independent apartment as she did not want to burden her Abu. In the past, Razia had not accepted Zoya's presence and NOW Zoya had not wanted to risk her wrath on her children. Everyone thought that Zainab and Armaan were Ayan's kids but Ayan and Humeira knew the truth. Zoya did not change their mindset as she did not want her children to be called illegitmate and this way their middle and last name would be A. Khan.
In the evening, Zoya took her kids to the mall for fun. Zain and Armaan were enjoying themselves and running around. Zoya observed her kids: Armaan was like her and Zain was like him...the quieter of the two. She resembled him so much..Anyway, they were the reason she had managed to move on. Armaan the naughtier of the two was running around when he crashed into someone. Zoya screamed "Alla Mia, Armaan are you okay". Armaan stunned looked at her said "Yeah!! Mom".
Before Zoya could apologize to the lady..she heard the familiar voice say "Zoya beta". Zoya was shocked but answered "Phupi, aap". Both had tears in their eyes and hugged. Dilshad cried for the daughter that brought her and Asad happiness and Zoya for the woman who was the closest she had for a mother.
Part II soon (comments and likes are requested) and no PMs as it is too tedious.
Edited by UK_VS - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

265

Views

127.1k

Users

128

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

princess_T thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Nice One. Want to know how you take the story forward!
sumatra1234 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
I can not wait another part ... Great write ... 👏
CutiepieHarshad thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
awesome part
loved it
plz plz plz plz plz plz cont soon
-Prinky- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

AWESOME !!!!!!!

really awesome start

cont. soon waiting for the next

Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Nice 1 please do continue

Would be intereted to read
Scrap me the link wen u update
CrazyBilli thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Intersting start.update the 2nd part soon..😊
AmaZaynGirl thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Wow..!dis is jst awsum...i luved it...m eager 2 read further...updte soon...n plz PM me.!
Anjinie thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Beautifully written cannot wait for the next part
shweta_yadav thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Great writing do post 2 soon luv to knw what next

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".