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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

very good dear👏!!!!!!!pls cntnue soon

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Tanvi Dandime

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

awesome start😊😊..loved the update❤️..please continue soon..

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Yasmin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Woah Asad's going to feel terrible when he finds out he has kids. I think he'll feel like his father, he might think that he abandoned them even though he shouldn't because he didn't know. I also think he'll get angry at Zoe, but I hope she gives a valid reason as to why she didn't tell him. I could just imagine her saying "Yes, it would have really went down well with your wife if she found out you had illegitimate children" in the most sarcastic way ha ha. Feel bad for Zoe, I can't imagine how hard it could be to be a single mother to two children and having to hide it from the father for his own benefit. No one should really be put into that situation.

I like this story-line, it's interesting - although I'll be honest I can't see Asad and Zoe being intimate before marriage but sometimes out of character behaviours make a story a little more exciting.

Waiting for your next update, eager to read about Asad's reactions on seeing the kids, what will he be feeling seeing the children of the girl he loves (bearing in mind that he doesn't know that the kids are his, so he basically will think they are his brothers children) will he be envious? Also looking forward to see how Zoe will hide the fact that the children are his, if Armaan really behaves like Asad then I'm guessing Asad will click on (Unless he is as dumb as he is in the show)

God I'm so excited to read more, please update soon!