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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY QHians!!
I am writing a story..
So, i really hope that u QHians like it! The 1st bit idea of the story is taken from yesterday's episode (23rd March 2013)
PLS COMMENT QHians!!! Anything is welcomed..good or bad!!
So, here it goes!

(Zoya was sitting in her room as usual and trying to go more in detail about her dad's finding mission. While she was doing all this Asad came in the room without knocking, and Zoya saw him and thought to taunt him.)
Z- MR KHAN(completely surprised) Aaappp??!
A- Hain (counfused😕)
Z- Mr Khan, aako pata hai ki aapne kya kiya..??
(Asad still confused..and when he was just about to utter a word...Zoya interrupted him)
Z- OK..OK...I will tell u..aapne mere room mein aane se pehle knock nahi kiya!!!!!!!
A- (Angry) Ms. Farouqi..meine aapko living area mein bhulaye tha..aap kyun nahi aai??!
Z- (Remembers whatever she saw) Mr Khan mein aai thi...par aap apni Tanu ke saath busy the...toh mujhe laga ki mujhe aapko disturb nahi karna chahiye (ALL JEALOUSS)
A- Aapko pata chal raha hai ki aap kya keh rahi hai...jab aapko uss waqt situation pata nahi thi...to aap kuch bhi kyun bol rahi hai..?? Z- Oh really Mr Khan?!! Anyway abhi kya aap bata sakte hai ki aapne mujhe living area kyun bulaya tha?! (hoping that he would say what she had expected)
A- Ye lijiye(handing her earring 2 her)...aapkii earring mere paas thi...
(Zoya interrupts)
Z- (Happily😊😊) My earring..thank u soo much Mr Khan,
(change of mood...from happy 2 questioner!!) 1 min...aapke paas meri earring kya kar rahi thi...aur..aur aapne ab tak mujhe di kyun nahi..?!
A-(Hesitatangly) Woh...Woh...actualllyyy...
(Suddenly Tanveer comes and asks Asad to come out for a min...Zoya from the other side is just burnt in jealousy!! She is fuming )
(Zoya later ignores them and goes back to her research of her dad)
(All of a sudden she gets another clue..and gets really happy+shocked 😊+😲)
Z- Thank u sooo much Allah Miyan...ab mein abu tak jaldi pahunch jaungi!!!😊😛
(Zoya rushes to go to that place..Asad from the other side comes and see's Zoya in a hurry and enquires on where is she going...She tells him that she has come to know one more man's address who was there in the picture. Asad tells that he will drop her to the respected place...And so they go)
(On the way..Asad is quite and Zoya is just being sooo happy and excited...)
Z- Oh My God, Mr Khan...finally mein apni manzil se bas thodi dur huin...😛
(Asad gives a small smile...as he gets really happy on seeing Zoya finally reaching her goal😊)
(They reach the spot..and Zoya enters the big mansion with a lot of hope!!)
(A servant welcomes them)
Servant- Jee, aap kaun?!
Z- Kya ye Mr Abdul Khan ka ghar hai?
Servant- Jee hain..par aap kaun?!
Z- Woh actually mein unse milna chahti huin..pls..it's really urgent!!
Servant- I am sorry madam..par Mr Abdul Khan toh do saal pehle hi yeh sheher chod kar chale gaye...
(Zoya and Asad shocked😲😲😲)
Z- Kya?! Par yeh toh unka ghar hai na?!?
Servant- Jee hain..ye unka ghar hai..par woh idhar nahi aate..
A- What do u mean?
Servant- Mera matlab ki..yeh ghar unke naam se hai...yahan par kuch log rehte hai bhade(rent) par.
Z- Par..par aapke paas unka koi to contact details honge...kuch bhi chalega..
Servant- Sorry madam, mere paas aisa kuch nahi hai..!
Z- How is that possible..i mean aapki roz unse koi toh baat hogi!!
Servant- Madam, meine kaha na..mere paas kuch contact detail nahi...aap samjhti kyun nahi hai! Ab aap pls jaiye!(Closing the door)
Z- (In tears😒) Dekhiye...suniye...Hellloo..listen plsss
A- Let's go!
Z- (Crying😭😭) How Mr Khan...mein kaise jaa sakti huin?!?...yeh meri akhri umeed thi...u know how excited i was...mujhe laga ab mein apne abu se jald milungi! Par...
A- Ms Farouqi...stop crying! Sab theek ho jayega! Trust me
(Bothe stare into each other's eyes...they forget everything around them..Zoya only see's TRUST in Asad's eyes!...
(MITWA...)
(Asad was also broken...he could not see Zoya in such pain! He felt to take away all her sadness)
(They both finally sat in the car...Asad drove off the car)
(Till they reached their home... Zoya din't utter a single word...and neither did she talk to anyone. She just went to her room)
(Asad was stressed out...Puphi, Najma were asking about what happened to Zoya?)
(Asad gave them some sort of excuse and went to his room)
(..It was 8:00...and everyone had come 4 dinner..except Zoya)
(Asad kept waiting for her..he also could not eat anything properly... Puphi, Najma and even Billo Rani asked about Zoya's whearbouts! And again Asad just gave out some excuse! Puphi was really worried on seeing Zoya like this...and after everyone finished their dinner..they all went 2 sleep)
(Asad thought to get some food for Zoya..and so he hid and took some food 4 her and went to her room)
(When he entered her room..she was sitting near the window..looking at stars..and with teary eyes talking to herself)
Z- (Crying) Allah Miyan...ye sab kya ho raha hai? Mujhe humesha aek umeed ki kiran nazar aati hai..par humesha ke tarah woh kiran chali jaati hai..mein yahan par kab tak rahungi..?!? Mr Khan toh mujhe hate karte hai...
(Asad listening to everything... and when Zoya told that "Mr Khan toh mujhe hate karte hai" he just wanted to go and say her that he likes it when she's around him..he likes her presence..her carefree attitude..and dosen't want her to go)
(Suddenly Asad get's damn hell shocked😲😲...he runs 2 Zoya and...)

OK QHians, here's my part of story..pls do comment about how did u all like this half of story!!
Edited by doll_rox - 12 years ago

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viya.mallik4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its nice. Pls update the second part soon. Please PM me when you do so
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nice... lookin for 2nd part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it and plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice 😊
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls pm me if possible ...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome

plz continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...
interesting read 👏👏
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Amazing story. I love the concept and its just WOW!!!!! Please PM for the second part. Can't wait!!!!!!
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and...plzzz continue...this part was awsum

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