'Oh shit!'| SS by Fizzi and Raina| Part5, Page13! - Page 13

Originally posted by: aditi061

This is the limit guys! i mean koi itna acha kaise likh sakta hai! i m, for sure, saving this whole in my lappy! the update was amazing! its the only thing that zoya need! to vent out her feelings! till when will the poor soul will keep her feeling bottle up inside her! The update was emotionally rich!

Asher's reaction after hearing zoya was too good! it actually happens! now waiting what he'll do to Mr. Khan for revenging what he did to zoya!

And then the description, the point of view of Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan as a normal person who is not emotionally challenged was beautiful! it is not easy to write in point of views but you guys did it very well!

Just one request! Change the title of the fiction from OS to SS as no ways it is an OS!!!

Originally posted by: marialuvsarshi

beautiful i absolutely love this story plzzz pm me when you update!

Originally posted by: sophie420

Fizzi and Raina, both of you are Amazing writers!

Loved all the updates

Also, loved how Asher was there for Zoya and how Asad realized his mistake.

Please continue soon!

~Sophie ;)

Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh asad 😔