'Oh shit!'| SS by Fizzi and Raina| Part5, Page13!

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CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: darkangel93
LOOOVVVEEEDDD it!!!!!!! they should have a scene like this in the show! u know, asad repenting and all... all he does is shout his head off at the poor girl! amazing part! continue soon!!!

Totally! But what we don't get to see in the show, we write about it here! That's the beauty of IF and FFs😆

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CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Iqbal_009
love it contt soonnn...

Thank you! 😳

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Raina??? Sheesh!!!

That was just amazing to read! I could feel my eyes stinging as I read Zoya's side of story... 😭 Damn!!! It was brilliantly written!!!

So you wrote the whole thing or edited and added some to Fizzi's version, eh?

Wowie!!

This was lovely to read!!! :D

Thanks for this piece!!

Annie

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: latanzia
love it 😭😭

Thank youuu! 😳

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
Raina??? Sheesh!!!
That was just amazing to read! I could feel my eyes stinging as I read Zoya's side of story... 😭 Damn!!! It was brilliantly written!!!
So you wrote the whole thing or edited and added some to Fizzi's version, eh?
Wowie!!
This was lovely to read!!! :D
Thanks for this piece!!

Annie

Hey Annie! 😳

Thanks so much!! And I added A LOT! 😆 Fizzi sent me her version, and I was planning on writing just one paragraph/2-3 sentences, but I ended up writing LOADS! 😆🤣 Blabbermouth me! 😆

We're so glad you liked it!

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: malini1996
amazing and mindblowing update...

Thanks a bunch! 😳

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

Addyyy! I missed your comments! Idiot! Kahaan thi!? TBP forum mein hi milenge kya?! 😆
Thank you so much! Idea is poora Fizzi ka, she started writing this! But I just HAD to butt in! 😉😆
It's an honour that we reminded you of some beautiful memories! Thank you! 😳

And REALLY?!!! I actually thought no one would laugh because I'm rubbish at the whole funny timing thing! But I'm SO glad you liked it! Thankyouuu! 😳

Hello madam meri siggy toh dekho! BOARDS HAI!!!! opps the! aaj hi khatm hue hai! abhi will be off for whole march! going to see some ill relative!
It was my honour to relive those memories as these board exams weren't helping me in any way!
oye don't underestimate urself! u too can write funny! try toh karo!

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Hera Flames

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

This is the limit guys! i mean koi itna acha kaise likh sakta hai! i m, for sure, saving this whole in my lappy! the update was amazing! its the only thing that zoya need! to vent out her feelings! till when will the poor soul will keep her feeling bottle up inside her! The update was emotionally rich!

Asher's reaction after hearing zoya was too good! it actually happens! now waiting what he'll do to Mr. Khan for revenging what he did to zoya!

And then the description, the point of view of Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan as a normal person who is not emotionally challenged was beautiful! it is not easy to write in point of views but you guys did it very well!

Just one request! Change the title of the fiction from OS to SS as no ways it is an OS!!!