'Oh shit!'| SS by Fizzi and Raina| Part5, Page13!

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The Daily Rush

@TheDailyRush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

I need to catch up so I'm leaving a comment to read later and stalk after! 😆

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Narikg

@Narikg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Love dthe concept!! Ayaan and Zoya friendship and her bestie!!

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Loved it!! Can't wait for next update!! Please PM me :))) Thank youuu

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Amazing!!!!! This is just too good!!!!!

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

This SS is jut AMAZING!!

both of you are doing a fab job😳 it has everything fun masti emotions and they are all at the right place guys its just dreamylicious

i love Zoya and Ayaan's complicity and would actually love to see it in the show!

and what to say about the protective Asher😳 master piece of the show right now

last part was really emotional i felt bad for Asad but he was too mean to Zoya so somewhere he deserves what Asher is doing but stll feelin bad😆

anyway hope to have the next part soon really enjoying readin it

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Rent u guys updating this ss plzzz I am tired staking it lol

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Love the story. Wish there was an Asher in the real show to give Asad a run for his money umm I mean Zoya!

Pls continue soon.

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

This is a great SS, the way asher tried to prove Asad wrong and make him realise it wasn't Zoya's fault is great and i felt so bad for Zoya, you can see clearly how much she loves him and Asher bless him, his anger when he found out Asad slapped Zoya 😭

He is so in love with Zoya

i'm glad Asad is starting the road to acceptance

when are you updating? please pm me when you do

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

1 month ho geya! Ab toh updt dijiye naaa!!!

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

I just discovered this OS.. and I gotta say..

damnnn you two are overly creative!!

loving the characters.. especially Asher!! he's just tooo good with his planning.. couldnt stop laughing at his 'Jammy' joke and when he called Assad Ogre 😆

poor Zoe thinks she's unwanted because of Assad but then again we have our other Hero .. Asher who's making her feel better.. she couldnt have asked for a better best friend!! i got a bit emotional too when I read the part of her loving the family and Dilshaad being like a mother and Najma being like a little sister to her 😔 i'm sure her words must have stung Mr. Khan really bad!!

I was feeling a bit sorry for Mr. Khan but then again he kinda deserves this for what he has done with Zoe .. he never lent her a helping hand or even gave her a shoulder to cry on when she needed it 😔 well now Asher is giving him a taste of his own medicine and Asher is doing great!!

OMG!! if i could i would kiss your hands both of you just for giving us such beautiful updates.. after reading just these 5 parts.. i had a huge grin on my face.. please please please please pleaseee update soon 😳

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