OS: We Were Not Meant To Be.. #2-Pg 10 - Page 10

Honestly this is amazing! My gosh beautiful
I had tears in my eyes. WOW!
I cant wait for the rest. Please don't take too long!

brilliant update... wish i could hear what asad played... loved zoya's meeting with yaani... i badly want to be in her shoes... and really hope there is no confusion between them in regard to zaki...

This is amazing! cant wait to read more. Please continue :)

This was brilliant! I lubbed it!
The way you detailed the writing- it made me feel as if I was the one experiencing the pain and loneliness and the grief of lost love. I applaud you for this amazing piece that has so much depth, its got me in a trance.
I just cant wait for the next part, I wonder where Zaki came from!? Reading into Zoya's reactions, Zaki ( I see the Z connection.lol ) seems to be her son. As much as I'd like it not to be related to Tanveer, I guess perhaps there is a connection in the memory loss gap? But the dimples and the smooches... Well, it depends on their history which of course only you know. I'm sure uv got something better in mind to pen down!
Waiting eagerly. Please add me to ur PM list.

absolutely mindblowing! loved every bit of it... waiting badly for the next part :D

Amazing! Just like the first part!

pls do update the next part soon...

Please PM me once you update Wanna know what happens :):):)

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

hey, whn u r going to updt it?

Please continue this, you are really good