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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Ok no prob will wait 4 reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
hey
just found this and read it
and its totally amazing
i really like this Asad
please continue soon and please PM me when you update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update!!!!! Awesome job!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So, guys finally i am updating part 8, thank you all for your lovely comments and i really hope that you like this part aswell. Do leave behind your comments.

Part 8:

As both asad and zoya heard humaira's yell, they came back into reality. Asad got up and told zoya he will be right back. He clearly warned her not to move from this place as it is already dark and she has already hurt her foot.

Ayaan and Humaira's room

humaira: hum apko nahi chore ge ayaan!

ayaan: hahahaha, pehele pakar lo ligiye humaira begum.

humaira: ayaan!

ayaan ran out of the room and ran into asad. huamira came along .

ayaan: aah! bhaijaan.

asad: kya howa ayaan, sab thik to hai na, humaira ki chikne ki awaz i thi abhi thori der pehele?

ayaan: are kuch nai bhaijaan, ye larkiya bhi na bohot dar pok hoti hai(while smirking at humaira)

asad: tum bhi na ayaan.

ayaan: wese mona darling kaha hai bhaijaan(smirking at asad)

asad: woh kamre main...(cut off by zoya)

zoya: main yaha ho ( while walking with the help of the support of the wall).

asad (angrily walks over to zoya): main ne kaha tha na apse room main rahaine ke liye! agar kuch ho jata to!

ayaan: relax bhaijaan, kuch howa to nai na(smirking)

asad: tum chup raho ayaan!

ayaan: are bhai, galti kare koi ur dant khai koi.

humaira: hum batate hai apko(teasingly)

humaira runs after ayaan as ayaan runs in the direction of asad and zoya. While running, ayaan accidentally pushes zoya and zoya is just about to fall when asad catches her in his arms.(mitwa moment).

ayaan)breaking the eye contact between them): uurrfff, agar ap logo ka ho gaya ho to i am sorry.(teasingly)

humaira: ayaan(feeling embarrassed at ayaan's comment)

ayann: kya? kuch galat thori na kaha main ne.

humaira: han, ap to kuch galat karte hi nai na.(angerly)

humaira walks towards her room while ayaan follows her.

ayaan: are humaira begum, baat to uniye, main sirf mazak kar raha tha. are lag jai ki, andera hai.

asad: tum thik ho?

zoya: hmm.

they start walking and suddenly zoya freezes, asad asks her what happened put did not get any response from her, asad feels something is wrong and looks in the direction in which zoya is looking and he sees a figure approaching them with a candle in hand. asad instantly knew what troubled zoya.

old lady: are, main tum logo ke pass hi a rahi thi, woh barish ki waja se light chali gai hai, isliye main candle lai ho, ye lo.(handing it over to zoya)

asad looked at zoya and put his hand on the burning candle.

zoya came back to reality and looked at asad so was constantly looking at zoya, a tear dropped from her eye and the she looked back at asad's hand and took it in her hand.

zoya(with tears in eyes): ye apne kya kiya?

old lady: han beta, ye kya tumne, tumhara hath(hand) jal gaya. tum yahi ruko main abhi tube lekar ati ho.

the old lady left leaving asad and zoya alone.

zoya(emotionaly): apne aisa kyu kiya mr. khan?

asad just stared at her and wiped of her tears. Zoya was shocked at asad's reaction but felt comfortable and gave him a small smile. Asad realized what he was doing and pulled his hand away from zoya's face and just then the old lady arrived.

old lady: ye lo(handing over the tube to zoya but before zoya could take it asad takes it.)

asad: shukriya.

old lady: koi baat nai, main abhi dusri candle...(cut of by asad)

asad: nai uski koi zarorat nahi hai, hum andhere main hi thik hai.

old lady(teasingly): chalo thik hai, wese bhi chand(moon) ki roshni ho, saath main barish ur saath main heer ur ranjha. haye.

asad and zoya felt embarrassed.

Asad and Zoya together:gi?

old lady: are humse kya chupana, hum to purane khilari hai(laughing)

The old lady went away from there .

asad:chale?

zoya: hmmm.

asad held zoya's hand to give her support while zoya held asad's hand making sure it dose not hit anything on their way to the room causing him pain. Both unaware that ayaan and humaira were watching them room their bedroom window.

ayaan: humaira begum, kya apko bhi lagta hai k...(cutting him off)

humaira: han ayaan, ap saki k rahe hai.

ayaan: to ho gai?

humaira: kya?

ayaan: are wahi, mere brother ki dulhan, mere brother ki dulhan.

humaira(smiling): ayaan ap bhi na.

Asad and Zoya's room:

asad carefully seated zoya onto the left side of the bed and himself went to the right side. asad was trying to put the cream onto his burned hand put was not able to do it properly. Just then zoya came forward and to the cream from his hand without even asking.

asad: miss. farooqui, ye ap kya kar rahi hai, main ne kaha na main kar loga.

zoya(angrily): kya khak kar lege, ap to thik se pakar bhi nahi pa rahe hai.

asad could not help but to smile at her comment, but zoya was zoya, she saw asad's smile and started her talking.

zoya: wese mr. khan ap haste howe bohat ache lagte hai.

asad: gi?

zoya: ur nahi to kya(while dressing his hand).

asad: dekiye mujhe lagta hai k apko kuch aram kar lena chahiye, kal subha hote hi ham yaha se chale jai ge.

zoya: to mujhe konsa yaha rukne ka shock hai.

asad(smirked): gi?

zoya: kuch nai.

zoya (while going back to her side of the bed): akkdu ahmed khan.

asad: suna main ne.

zoya making a face at him.

zoya fell a sleep within second while Asad was having a hard time as he is used to his bed. Then, he suddenly hard zoya crying in her sleep.

zoya: nai, ammi!

zoya: bacho.

zoya: ammi!

asad went over to her side.

asad: zoya

zoya suddenly woke up and held asad a hard as she could as if her life depended on it.

asad: ssuuhhh, kuch nai howa.

zoya: asad woh...ammi.

asad: bas, so jao.

Asad layed zoya back onto her sleeping position and sat next to her.

asad: main ho na(holding her hand)

zoya felt safe and soon fell asleep, asad was also feeling sleepy know put did not want to as he was worried about zoya having the nightmare again and not finding him there beside her. Soon after, asad also fell asleep right beside zoya still holding her hand in his hand.

Next Morning:

ayaan and humaira's room

ayaan(on bis phone): gi thik hai, ab main rakta ho.

humaira: kis ka phone tha ayaan?

ayaan: nikhat ka, woh ke rahi thi ke abhi thori dar k liye barish rukh gai hai, to is waqt agar hum ghar k liye nikle to shayad hum ghar soch sakte hai.

humaira: thik hai.

ayaan: main bhaijaan ko batake ata hoon.

humaira: rukiye, hum bhi apke saath chalte hai.

ayaan: chaliye.

both ayaan and humaira do towards asad and zoya's room, they open the door.

ayaan: bhaijaan woh...

To be continued





Edited by arnavkhushi-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
It was tooo AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
loved it plzzz continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Clif hanging kyu choda 1stly u update late *pout* now clif hanging

Hw sweet asad is 2 sweet he cares 4 her

And zoe she is a darling she cares 4 him hw sweetly she scoles him

Now wat is gng in this devil ayans mind god nos

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
beautiful update. plz don't take too long next time to update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part.
Continue soon.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was such a cute update!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it thanks for the PM😊😊😊

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