wow do continue sooon
i am waiting
it was an soooper duper update
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wow do continue sooon
i am waiting
it was an soooper duper update
Wow that was amazing! I loved the little kid whispering into Asad's ear and Asad caring for Zoya!!!! Can't wait until the next update to see how Humeira and Zoya unite the 2 brothers!!!!!
Hey guys, i am back with another update, thank you so much for your lovely comments, i loved it. I hope you guys also enjoy this part as this will be my last part until next weekend as my school is starting again. I might update the next part on a Friday or Saturday until then enjoy and please do leave comments at the end. And ya i turned it into an SS as Its quite long to be an OS.😊
Part 7
Ghopari:
zoya: tumhe pata hai humaira, mr. khan jhapana bhi hai, hahahaha
humaira: really bagi? wese ayaan bhi kuch kaam nai hai, bohat ziya flirt karte hai.
zoya: really?
asad and ayaan both looked at zoya and humaira with confused look as they did not understand as to way both of them had started to about them suddenly, while zoya and humaira continued with their conversation.
zoya: mr. khan to itni gussa karte hai, itna gussa karte hai ke koi bhi roh de, ye to main ho jo inka gussa tolerate kar leti ho.
humaira: ur ayaan ka pochiye hi mat bagi, woh to har larki ke saath flirt karte rahete hai.
zoya: tum aisa larke ke saath akele kese agai humaira?
humaira: ur ap bagi, ap kese itne akru insaan ke saath akele agai?
both asad and ayaan together(angrily): woh mera bhai hai!
just then both asad and ayaan looked up at each other and came forward with tears formed in their eyes.
asad: i am sorry ayaan.
ayaan: i am sorry bahijaan, main apke saath kitna bura bartav kiya.
asad: koi bat nai ayaan, chote to galtiya kar hai, agar woh nahi kare ge to ur con kare ja?
ayaan: ur baro ka farz hota hai unhe sahi raasta dikhana ur unki galtiya maaf karna. main janta ho ke abb abu ke bare main kya socte hai lekin ab is ki waja se main apne ur apke rishte main darar nahi ane dunga.
both asad and ayaan gave each other a tight hug with tears of happiness in their eyes, while zoya and humaira out of excitement gave each other a high five with broke the two brothers hug and they looked at them.
asad: oh to ms. new york to ye ap dono ka plan tha?
zoya(smiling): so what mr. khan, kaam to kara na?
ayaan: manna pare ga humaira begum, ap to kamal gi actress hai.
humaira: shukriya ayaan miya.
just then they saw one of the pillar holding the roof drop on the ground due to which other pillar's also showed signs of falling.
asad: lagta hai hume yaha se nikalna hoga.
ayaan: lekin hum kaha gai gai itni barish main?
zoya: ye waqt ye bate sochne ka nai hai ayaan, ise pehele ye hamare uppar gir gai, hame yaha se chalna chahiye.
just then another pillar fell which brought more panic, ayaan held humaira's hand and ran out out the ghopri while asad went up to zoya and took her in his arms(mitwa) and ran out of the ghopri just in time because as soon as asad and zoya came out, the ghopri fell right in front of their eyes.
humaira: Allah ka lakh lakh shukar hai ke hum bach gai.
ayaan: lekin ab hum jai ge kaha, raat bhi hogai hai?
asad: don't worry ayaan, koi na koi raasta nikal hi jai ga.
just then zoya saw an outage across the street
zoya: woh dakiye mr. khan, waha koi outage hai, iam sure waha koi madad zaroor mil gai gi.
asad: lets go.
Then all four of them went towards the outage with ayaan still holding humaira's hand and asad still carrying zoya in his strong arms. As they reach the outage, they ring the bell and a old healthy lady opens the door.
old lady: kya kaam hai?
asad: gi woh bahar barish bhohat ho rahi hai ur hamara ghar yaha se bohat dor hai, gari bhi nahi ja pa rahi to hum soch rahe the ke agar..(the old lady cuts asad in the middle).
old lady: ke aj raat yaha rukh gai, haina.
asad, zoya, humaira and ayaan all together:gi
old lady: aow undar aow.
all of them went inside
old lady: dekho main wese kisi ko bhi unmarried couples ko apne ghar par nahi ane deti lekin tum logo married lag rahe ho to main tum logo ko aj raat yaha rikne deti ho.
both asad and zoya looked at each other with shocked expressions while ayaan and humaira did the same.
asad: dekhiye hamari...(ayaan cuts him off).
ayaan: hamari shaadi ho chuki hai.
old lady: tum log yahi ruko, main tum logo ke liye badalne ke liye kapre lati ho.
The old lady left.
asad(angry): ye tumne kya kiya ayaan.
ayaan: bahijaan woh hame ghar se bahar nikal degi, wese bhi bohat raat ho chuki hai ur hum kab tak aisa bahar barish main bhatakte rahe gai.
zoya: i think he is right mr. khan.
asad had no choice but to give in and after a little while the old lady came back with some clothes. she gave ayaan and humaira their clothes in their respective hands while she save both asad's and zoya's clothes in zoya's hands as asad was holding on to zoya with both of his hands. The old lady showed them their rooms and they went inside.
Ayaan and humaira's room.
ayaan: ap pehele change kar ligiye humaira begum warna ap ko thund lag gai gi.
humaira: gi.
Asad and zoya's room
Asad sitted zoya on the bed..
asad: ap ke par main chot lagi hai,ap yaha room main change kar ligiye, main ne andar le darwaza lock kar diya hai, main bath room main change karne ja raha ho, jab ap change kar le to awaz de dije ga.
zoya: ok.
asad took his clothes and went into the bathroom to change while zoya changed in the room.
Ayaan and humaira's room:
ayaan: ur kitna waqt lage ga ap ko humaira begum, mujhe sardhi lag rahi hai.
just then humaira opened the bathroom's door ayaan got and turned around completely lost. Humaira was looking stunning in the green sari and ayaan was lost in her beauty and did not even notice humaira calling to him.
humaira: ayaan, ayaan..ayaan!
ayaan: han?
humaira: kya howa apko, jaiye change kar lige
ayaan: Mashallah humaira begum, kasam se aj ap bohat piyari lag rahi hai.
humaira: ap bhi na ayaan, jaiye change kar lijiye warna sardhi lag jai gi.
ayaan took his blue kurta off the bed and went to the bathroom.
humaira(to herself)(sad): kash ayaan, ap sach bol rahe hote, kash ap sach main mujhe itne piyar se dekh rahe hote lekin sach kiya hai woh hum jante hai.
Asad and zoya's room:
zoya: mr. khan, ab ap asakte hai bahar.
asad: gi.
asad came out waring a black kurta(same design as mangarlpur kurta) as saw zoya in a red color sari, it was his favorite color and she was completely lost in her beauty. zoya also keeped looking at asad as he was looking quite handsome in the black kurta. just then a knock on the door broke their intense glare at each other. Asad went to open the door and the old lay came in.
old lady: woh maine dekha ke apki bewi ke paar par chot lagi hai to main first aid box lekar i ho.
asad: shukriya.
the old lady left after giving asad the first aid box.
zoya: no mr. khan, main dressing nahi karwao gi, bohat dard hoga.
asad: kuch nahi hoga miss. farooqi.
zoya: nahi mr. khan.
asad approached zoya and sat on his knees in front of her.
asad(teasing): oh, mujhe to laga ke ap bohat strong hai, lekin main to galat tha, ap to ek number ki darpok hai.
zoya: dakiye mr. khan, main darpok nahi hi, ok?
asad: acha to dressing kyu nahi karwa rahi hai?
zoya: maine kaha na main dressing nahi karwao gi.
asad: really?
just then zoya saw a smirk on asad's face and looked down on her foot, it was already dressed, asad dressed her wound without letting her know and did not even let her feel any pain. They both stared at each other(mitwa) and did not even notice when the lights went off. They came back into reality when they heard humaira scream.
humaira: AYAAN!!!!
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