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Thank you all for your lovely comments everyone, here is part 9, ihope you like it and do leave behind your comments.

Part 9:

Ayaan opens the door to Asad and Zoya's room and goes inside along with humaira.

ayaan: bahijaan woh...

Shocked as well as happy to see asad and zoya together

humaira: ayaan ye dono...

ayaan: kitne ache lag rahe hai ek dosre ke saath.

humaira with a smile on her face nodded in approval.

ayaan(wispering): chaliye, ab hum yaha se chalte hai.

humaira: gi.

just as ayaan and humaira were leaving, ayaan accidentally hit a vase causing it to drop, fortunately the vase did not break but it did cause asad and zoya to wake up.

asad(while rubbing his eyes): ayaan, tum yaha?

zoya(half in sleep): han, tum log itni subha yaha kya kar rahe ho?

ayaan: woh bhabijaan hum...(just then humaira pinched him)

asad and zoya together: what!

ayaan: woh... mera matlab hai bhaijaan woh nikhat ka phone aya tha, woh bata rahi thi k agar hum is waqt ghar k liye nikle to shayad hum dobara barish shuru hone se pehele ghar pohach gai.

asad: thik hai, tum log niklo, hum bhi nikalte hai.

asad and ayaan hugged each other while zoya and humaira did the same.

humaira: pata nai ab hamari mulakat kab ho bagi(sadly)

zoya: don't worry humaira, hum bohalt jald hi mile ge.

asad: dihan se jana.

ayaan:hmm

ayaan and humaira left.

asad: ab hame bhi chalna chahiye.

zoya:hmm

asad: pehele hame aunty ko shukriya kahene chahiye.

asad and zoya went outside and thanked the old lady and took her leave.

As the rain had stopped, it was easier for them to reach home.

Khan Mansion:

asad and zoya made an entry into the house, dilshad and najma who were pacing around back and forth in the living room saw them enter and rushed to them.

dilshad: khuda ka lakh lakh shukar hai ke tum dono thik ho.

najma: han, hum to dar hi gai the.

dilshad: tum log fresh ho jao, main breakfast laga deti ho, light bhi nai hai ur generator bhi kharab ho chuka hai.

asad: ap fiqar mat kare ammi, barish kal tak khatam ho jai gi, phir sab thik ho jai ga.

dilshad: hmm

dilshad left.

najma(teasingly): wese bhaijaan, ap ur zoya in kapro main bohat ache lag rahe hai.

zoya blushed while asad felt embarrassed.

asad: tematar, tum jao apne kamre main ur parhai pe dihan do.

najma left the two alone, just then tanveer(billo rani) was coming down the stairs and saw asad and zoya, she pretended to be all worried.

tanveer(billo rani): are asad tum log a gai, mujhe kitni fiqar ho rahi thi(about to hug asad when zoya came infront of asad and hugged tanveer)

zoya: oh thats so sweet of you tanveer!

asad noticed what zoya did and could not help but smile.

zoya: acha, ab hume fresh hone jana hai, ok!

tanveer(billo rani)(making a face): hmm

zoya: chale mr. khan?

asad(smiling): gi.

asad and zoya went to their receptive room and came back outside after a little while.

Dinning Table:

tanveer(billo rani): are asad, ye hamne apke liye bread jam banaya hai, don't worry, home made jam hai.

asad was about to take the plate when zoya took the plate from tanveer.

zoya: thank you so much tanveer, tumhe pata hai mujhe break jam kitna pasad hai, infact main bachpan main sirf yahi khati thi.

asad gave a little smirk to zoya and zoya noticed it.

tanveer(pissed off): hum apke liye ur bana dete hai jammy.

asad: nai shukriya, main yahi kha loga.

tanveer(to herself while looking at zoya): is zoya ko to sabhak sikana hi hoga.

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Wow that was amazing! Thanks for the PM!!!!!
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Thank you so much 😊

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Originally posted by: AsYa_fan

Wow that was amazing! Thanks for the PM!!!!!

thanks, and no problem😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely!
I loved this zoe! 😛
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Y m i nt getting the pm...meine kya paap kiya hai...?!?! Plz pm me...u write beautiful...n i realy njoy ur writing...it was fab :)
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Originally posted by: shloksuchi


Y m i nt getting the pm...meine kya paap kiya hai...?!?! Plz pm me...u write beautiful...n i realy njoy ur writing...it was fab :)

Oh i am really sorry, won't happen next time.

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Amazingg!!! LOL laughed soo hard at the end xD buhahahaha omggg!!! Good job Zoya!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Nice update as always

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