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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai meri tamata is teasing his brother

Fab update ...

Really enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 👏 very good..pls continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zoya getting possessive.
Nice one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..this is amazing...Read all parts in one go..Wonderful..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this! Please continue soon and PM me.
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great update...wating to see wat will happen next!
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Here is part 10, i hope you guys like it and please do leave your comments.

Part 10:

Living Room:

Zoya came out of her room when she suddenly gets a call.

zoya(on the phone):hello.

zoya(on the phone): hello? kon, awaz nai a rahi.

zoya(on the phone): hello?

zoya(phone): ek minute, shayad network problem hai, agar app ko meri awaz a rahi hai to please ek minute rukiye, main uppar ja rahi ho, wait just one moment.

zoya did not know that two pairs of eyes were watching her from upstairs. Tanveer(billo rani) let out an evil smile watching zoya come upstairs. Tanveer(billo rani) had spilled some oil on the top stairs so that when she calls zoya and does not speak, zoya will surely go upstairs on the terrace thinking it to be a network problem.

She closes her window so that nobody sees her.

tanveer(billo rani)(to herself): pagal larki, apne ap ko bohat smart samajti hai, ye janti nai hai k billo rani kya chezz hai. hahahahaha

zoya taking each step forword trying to hear the voice on the other side. Just as she steps on the stair with the oil, she slipped and tried to get a grip of the stair wall but she was not sucessful. Zoya closed her eyes in fear and yelled.

zoya: aaa!

tanveer(billo rani) was happy to hear zoya yell and decided to come out to see zoya suffer but then decided to stay back as she told everyone that she is not felling well, she did not want to spend her time watching all the drama outside. She decided to watch television.

2 hours later

Tanveer(billo rani): ab neche ja kar dekti ho, us zoya ka to bura haal hoga, bechari, mujhe takar lene chali thi. hahahahahaha.

Downstairs

Asad was sitting on his usual spot when he saw tanveer come to the living room.

Tanveer(billo rani): are asad, app akele yaha kyu bethe hai? baki sab kaha hai, khala, najma ur zoya?

asad: woh actually ammi najma zo...(saw dilshad and najma come out of zoya's room)

tanveer(billo rani): are app log agai, zoya kesi hai? sab thik hai na??

dilshad: woh zoya to...(was about to continue when zoya came out of the room).

Tanveer(billo rani)(shocked to see zoya perfectly fine): zoya tum?

zoya: kyu, kya howa?

tanveer(still shock): nai kuch nai, main apne kamre main jati ho, mere sar main abhi bhi dard hai.

dilshad: are lekin...(tanveer left before she could finish her sentence)

asad zoya dilshad and najma all looked at each other and smiled.

Flashback

tanveer was in the kitchen taking out some oil in a bowl and talking to herself.

Tanveer(billo rani): ab main zoya ko batao gi k main kya chezz ho.

Tanveer(billo rani) left from the place but did not notice asad standing in front of his bedroom door. He heard what she said and understood that she was trying to harm zoya. He has to warn zoya and so he called her to his room.

asad(phone): app mere kamre main aye abi!

zoya(phone): are lekin...(asad cuts the call before zoya could even finish her sentence).

Asad's Room:

asad(to himself): mujhe zoya ko warn karna hoga.

zoya: mr. khan, ap apne ap ko samajte kya hai han?

asad(tensed): meri baat dehan se suniye.

zoya(tensed): kya howa mr. khan ap bohat pareshan lag rahe hai.

asad: woh...woh billo rani kuch karne wali hai, woh apko nuksan pochocha chahati hai.

zoya: don't worry mr. khan ap hai na(mitwa)

zoya: i mean woh...kuch nai kar pai gi.

asad(tensed):hmm

just when zoya and asad turned around, they saw dilshad and najma standing on the door way.

dilshad: kya howa hai asad... zoya?

najma: han bahijaan, kon hai ye billo rani ur woh zoya ko nuksan kyu pohochana chahati hai?

asad and zoya tried to cover up put then gave up as dilshad and najma did not believe a word they said. They told them everything about tanveer being billo rani who is here to find the doll and that rashid is innocent. That she is planning something against zoya.

dilshad: Ya Allah, itne dino se tum dono ne itna bara sach mujhe chupaya, tum log jante bhi ho ye kitni khatarnak ho sakti hai, tum logo ko mujhe batana bilkul bhi zarori nai samjha!

asad: ammi hum apko pareshan nai karna chahate the.

zoya: han phupi.

dilshad: chup raho tu dono, mujhe tum dono ne koi baat nai karni.

asad and zoya(with a puppy face): please, man gai(holding their ears).

dilshad could not help but laugh at their cuteness and gave in. All four of them got into a group hug.

After the hug broke.

dilshad: ab se tum log jo bhi karo, main ur najma tumhara saath dege.

both asad and zoya nodded.

zoya: main ek minute main camera lekar ati ho, ek picture to banti hai.

zoya hurried of to her room.

asad: ye miss. farooqi bhi na, itni tension main bhi inhe photo lene ki parhi hai.

dilshad and najma just smiled.

zoya was coming back to asad's room when she got a call.

Zoya came out of her room when she suddenly gets a call.

zoya(on the phone):hello.

zoya(on the phone): hello? kon, awaz nai a rahi.

zoya(on the phone): hello?

zoya(phone): ek minute, shayad network problem hai, agar app ko meri awaz a rahi hai to please ek minute rukiye, main uppar ja rahi ho, wait just one moment.

Asad's room:

najma: ye zoya kaha rahe gai, itni der kyu k lag rahi hai?

dilshad: main dekh kar ati ho.

asad: ek minute ammi, ap rukiye, main check karke ata ho.

asad goes out of his room and sees zoya go upstairs.

asad: ye miss. farooqi uppar kyu ja rahi hai?

he was about to call zoya when he saw tanveer(billo rani) watching zoya come upstairs and smiling. He knew that something was wrong. Then he saw tanveer(billo) close the window. He rushed up to catch up to zoya and he was only two stairs away from her when she slipped and yelled out loud but to her surprise she was safe, asad had manage to safe her in time. Dilshad and Najma came out to see what happened and saw asad and zoya on the stairs.

dilshad: kya howa asad?

zoya: kuch nai phupi, bas mera par phisal gaya.

asad: phisla nai, balke kisi ki sochi samjgi chal thi.

all the three ladies knew what he was taking about, just then najma spotted the oil on the stairs.

najma: woh dekiye, oil.

asad then remembered how he had seen tanveer(billo rani) take oil in the bowl. He got really angry and was going to confront her when zoya held his hand to stop him.

zoya: ye sai waqt nai hai mr khan, hamara ek galat kadam apke abu ke liye galat ho sakta hai.

dilshad: han asad, zoya bilkul sahi ke rahi hai.

Flashback Ended

All four of them come together and smile.

Zoya: ab pata chale ga us billo rani ko k usne kise panga liya hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay first one to respond to the update!
Great job I love ur story- please do continue and try to PM me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblown!!!! like WOAH ! 😆 At first I was like ohoo Zoya toh gai ...but then I was like nahhh Zoya's not our tension ...She's Asad's tension and woh sambhal le ga 😉 Loved this chapter!! Can't wait for the next one!! PM me please :))
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Originally posted by: fee-fee

Yay first one to respond to the update!

Great job I love ur story- please do continue and try to PM me!

Thank you so much and i will surely pm you

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