asya OS: jagg suna suna laage (lst part pg 17) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: irock321

Awww you dummy :P xD lool jk You left it hanging and making us want moreee!!! Please update quickly!!! Love it!!! Thanks for the PM :)))

hehehe...i luv to do it😆😆
will update soon 😊
and a bade vala thankewđŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wo actually na m thodi si lazy huđŸ„±...😆
but fikr not i will cntinue😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: devildiva21

awsum...!!!

finally correct video play ho hi gai...!!
but is point pe cliffhangerđŸ˜Č
plz continue soon...!!!

ya i luv to do it😆
thnkew so muchđŸ€—
will cnt. sooon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu

Read all parts in one go.. Very Nice and well written...

Caring Asad and a perfect family..

wohoo mera to din bn gya
thnkewwđŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AFTR readng d stories on ths QH IF i reallly hv a MILLLIIIOOON DOLLLAR qustion in ma mind???? n u knw wts tht????? so d qustion is tht wthr OL D QHIANS R BORN 2 B RITERS ???? (xcept me) 😆 nooo reaaallly i mean it !!! 👏 hatttss of 2 oool d riters (especiallly u )!! verryyy welll done !!! n before i die of suspicion n eagernesss plzzz plzzz plzzz update it sooon !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taareyzen

AFTR readng d stories on ths QH IF i reallly hv a MILLLIIIOOON DOLLLAR qustion in ma mind???? n u knw wts tht????? so d qustion is tht wthr OL D QHIANS R BORN 2 B RITERS ???? (xcept me) 😆 nooo reaaallly i mean it !!! 👏 hatttss of 2 oool d riters (especiallly u )!! verryyy welll done !!! n before i die of suspicion n eagernesss plzzz plzzz plzzz update it sooon !!!!


aww itni taariff *blush blush*😳
well thankew so so so muchđŸ€—
M so glad dat u appreciate my writing...😳
aur m kya kru asya ajkl mere dreams me bi ane lg gye hai😆
but cvs ko to hmara khyaal hi nhi ata..thoda sa mitwa moment and den again fyts..to socha os hi bna dete hai dil ko thoda sa to chaiin milega😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jst read ur os...
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey frnzzz m backkk
i know i know m late...actually m so lazyđŸ„±đŸ˜›
please bear mee😛
ab agr m shuru ho gayi bak bak krna to chup hi ni hoyungi...so directly coming to the post...here u go
PART 5

"zoya r u okay? zoya..." asad asked...he caught hold of her by her waist when she was about to faint..."najma pani" asad said...he made her drink some water and made her sit on the chair...
"zoya beta tum thk ho?" dilshad asked...
"ya phuphi...m...m fiinee..." she was still in shock..asad took hold of her hand and bend down on his knees in front of her..najma and dilshad smiled and thought of leaving them alone so they left fr their rooms,unnoticed by zoya...
"zoya dekho jo bhi hua tumhare past mein hum use change to nhi kr skte par hum unhe szaa zrur dilwa skte hai...aur m unhe szaa dilwana chahta hu...i know i was also wrong in saying dat rashid khan was culprit...i want to make amends now.. i want that razia and siddique behind bars...jinki vajah se mujhe meri ammi ko abbu ko aur especially tumhe itna kuch sehna pdaa..."he caught hold of her face by his palms "dekho zoya agar tum mera sath dogi to hum unhe sazaa dilwaenge aur isse tumhari ammi ko bhi insaaf milega...aur tumhe vo sab milega jo tumse unhone chiin rkha hai...bolo zoya tum mere sath ho na" she nodded and he smiled and hugged her...she too hugged him..."i promise u zoya...now no one will going to hurt u..."
he took her to her room and said "tum rest kro...m abhi apne lawyer se baat krta hu...hum aj hi un dono ko slankho (bars) ke piche daal ke rhenge...
she felt relief...she know dat if asad is with him then nothing will hurt her...she hugged him and said "please mr. khan mjhe kbhi chod kr mat jana...agar ap bhi chle gye to m jii nhi paungi..."
he moved back a little still very close to her...kissed her tears on her cheeks and she closed her eyes enjoying the pleasure...he softly placed a kiss on her forehead and said "kabhi nhi zoya m tumhe kbhi chodke nhi jaunga i promise " she smiled and he too smiled..." m abhi ata hu" and she nodded...
after 1 hour
"zoya mujhe abhi police station jana hoga...lawyer ne case to file kr dia hai par unhe suboot chahiye so can u please give me dat video" asad said
"ya sure mr. khan but m bhi apke sath chlungi"
"no zoya u r not coming..."
"mr. khan please"
"no zoya vo razia aur siddique ache nhi hai vo bhot bure hai...m nhi chahta ki vo apko koi nuksaan phochaye"
"par mr. khan m unse baat krna chahti hu...m unhe sazaa paate hue dekhna chahti hu...please mr. khan"
den asad phone rang..."hello"
"hello asad m lawyer bol rha hu...meri police se baat ho gyi hai...FIR ban chuki hai...they are going to arrest them...tum police station aa rhe ho na saboot lekar?"
"ya ya m coming with the proof"
"okay will meet you then"
"mr. khan agr apko thik lage to m unke ghr jana chahti hu ek baar please mr. khan" zoya said
"unke ghr? par kyo zoya"
"plz mr. khan ek baar le chaliye"
"par zoya vo log bhot khatarnaak hai...vo apko chot phoncha skte hai"
"mujhe kch nhi hoga mr. khan jab tk ap mere sath hai"
he smiled on hearing dat
"thik hai lekin ap mere sath hi rhengi okay?"
"okay okay pakka"
"to ap ready ho jaiye m bhr wait kr rha hu"
"abhi ayi bs"
he came outside and see dilshad standing there...he came closer to her and said dat..."ammi m sorry...ap khti rhi ki abbu begunah hai...par m nahi manaa...please mujhe maaf kr dijiye ammi"
she hugged him patted his back"koi baat nhi beta ab to sach saamne aa gaya na...ap tum jaake apne abbu ko us razia aur siddique ke jaal se bacha lo jao"
he nodded...and the whole conversation was listened by tanveer..."kya us razia ka raaz khul gaya...aur asad uska pardafaash krne ja rhe hai...nhi aisa nhi ho skta mujhe kuch to krna hoga...agar uska raaz khul gya to mera bhi raaz khul jaega...m kya kru"
there she saw an oil bottle..."han yhi shi rhega"...she took that and split some oil in front of zoya's room..."abhi kuch der ke lie to km se km ye baat tal jaegi...zoya giregi aur asad unki care krne ke chkkr me khud bhi nhi jaenge..."
she heard footsteps so moved away and stood behind the pillar to look...
zoya came and opened the door...she was about to slip when caught her...eyelock *mittwa moment*
"ohhh nooo...plan failed ab kya hoga m kya kru...ab to kuch bhi nhi ho skta...mujhe chupke se yha se bhaagna hoga" tanveer thought
"phle mujhe razia to btana hoga" tanveer thought

siddique house

"kya billo rani tum sach kh rhi ho?" razia asked
"han m bilkul sach kh rhi h...unhe tumhare baare me sab pta chl gya haia ur vo tumhare pardafaash krne aa rhe hai"
"aisa nhi ho skta...tum kisi kam ki nhi ho billo rani...kuch kroo"
"m kya kru ab...maine bhot koshish ki par vo nhi ruk rhe"
"maar daalo unhe...han maar daalo...muh maangi rakm (money) dungi tumhe...jaan se maar do us zoya aur asad ko"
"thk hai"

asad house

asad and zoya were about to leave when tanveer came from the back and hold zoya from her hair making her scream "aahhh"...and she placed a knife on her neck...shocking oll...
"ye kya kr rhi ho tum tannu" asad said "chodo zoya ko"
"nahi jammy aka asad...isse to marna hoga...ya to ap vo saboot mujhe dede jisse ap razia ka prdafaash krne ja rhe hai...ya fir ise marta hue dekhe..."
she made her hold tight giving a small cut on zoya's neck..." aah"
"zoyaaa" all three asad najma and dilshad screamed
"ruko tanveer m tumhe vo video deta hu tum use chod do" asad was fuming with anger but he had no other option to save his lady love
"no mr. khan...ap nhi denge...isse to m dekhti hu"
she caught hold of tanveer's hand and rolled it shocking oll...knife slipped from her hand...
"to han kya kr rhi thi tum...mujhe marogi...mujhe? zoya farukki ko hahaha...u r such a fool tanveer...mujhe to tumpe phle se hi shak tha...jammy jammy jammy...jada hi mishri ghole ja rhi thi...khte hai na jada mitha bhi sehat ke lie acha nhi hota...bdi ayi mr. khan ki chamchi...tujhe to m btati hu" and she slapped her again shocking oll...she was again going to slap her when asad caught her and said "zoya chodo use m dekh leta hu"
"acha abhi bhi ap dekhenege...zyada pyaari hai na apko apni ye chamchi...jammy jammy huhhh"
asad could not stop him from smiling at her childish nature she looks so cute and charming...
"zoyaaa ruko tum"
dilshad and najma also smiled on seeing zoya jealous so they came near her and said "jealous jealous jealous" she blushed
"tannu maine kbhi nhi scha tha tum aise krogi...how can you do dis...so tum razia ke kehne pe yha ayi thi hai na?" she nodded
" chli jayo yha se isse phle ki m apni tehzeeb bhul jayu...get out"
"par jammy meri baat to suno"
"i said get out"
not having any other option she left
he turned to see zoya and said "chle zoya" she nodded and they left

siddique house

"police ap yha kya kr rhe hai" rashid asked
"dekhiye hum arrest warrant lekr aye hai...mr and mrs siddique ke lie" inspector said
razia and siddique who were sitting in the living room were hell shocked on hearing dat...
"ye ap kya keh rhe hai inspector ye sharrifo ka ghr hai..."
"kuch log ajkal sharrifo ka naqab phnkr ghumte hai siddique sahab" inspctor said
"lekin kislie...arrest kislie humne kya kia?" razia asked
"17 baras phle apne us gudiya factory me ek aurat ki hatya ki...aur uska saara ilzaam rashid iya par laga dia...par ab apka raaz khul gya hai" asad said coming in the house shocking evrbdy..."bhaijaan...kya ap sach kh rhe hai?" ayaan asked "han ayaan m sach keh rha hu...inhone to us aurat ki bachi ko bhi maarne ki koshish ki lekin shayad mera naseeb acha tha jo zoya bach gyi...this made zoya cry( khushi ke aansu u know)...
"kya subbot hai tumhare paas " siddique asked
"ye rha suboot mr. gaffur siddique" zoya said
zoya played the video...all were shocked to see dat..."apko kya lga tha ap meri ammi ko maar denge aur main kuch nhi krungi...apko saza m dilva kr rhungi..."
"tum vhi ladki ho?"razia asked
"han m vhi adki hu jise apne maarne ki to puri koshish ki par tch tch tch maar nhi paaye"
asad was feeling proud to see his zoya's bravery
"apko kya laga tha ap mujhe tb nhi maar paayi to ab tanveer ke hatho marva denge par bad luck of yours m to vha se bhi bacha ayi...ab apko kon bachaega?" she said giving an evil smile to razia
"police arrest them" zoya said
thinking of no other option left razia snatched the gun from inspctor and pointed at zoya "tab nhi to aj shi...marna to tumhe hoga hi"
she was about to fir when asad hit her hand...and she fell down..."ise abhi arrest kijie inspector" sad said
and inspector arrestd them...and took them to police station...asad looked at zoya and she pointed to rashid...asad came near him and said "m...m sorry maine apko pehchane me galti ki..." rashid said "its ok beta" he had tears in his eyes of happiness..."par m apko meri ammi aur hume chodne ke lie maaf nhi kr skta...hum aise hi khush h ab...apni choti si zindagi m aur ab ap bhi khush rhiyega...khuda hafiz"
"bhaijaan" ayaan hugged him and said thank u...he too hugged him...
"chle zoya?" asad said
"par mr. khan dost"
"please zoya"
"okay lets go"

they reached home and tolld everything to dilshad and najma...after 2 days asad informed zoya dat razia and siddique got imprsnmnt for life punishment...zoya was happy but a little sad
"kya hua zoya tum udaas kyo ho?" asad said
"mr. khan mera visa expire hone vala hai...mujhe 2 din me yaha se jana hoga" and she started crying
"aeee shhh stop crying..." he wiped her tears and said" m kuch krta hu tum royo mat"
"ab kuch nhi ho skta mr. khan mujhe jana hoga" all teary
"ek kam ho skta hai"
"kya mr. khan?"
"i will tell u in evening ap ready rhiyega...hume bhr jana hai"
"okay..."


pheww! that was long...
so hows it?
btao na please btao na :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww. All the Asad-Zoya parts were so sweet :) next part fast kay :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Awww. All the Asad-Zoya parts were so sweet :) next part fast kay :P


Jo hukum😛

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