asya OS: jagg suna suna laage (lst part pg 17) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: HoneySweety

It is realy fantastic.no words to describe it dear.just awsm romantic,caring.

ohh thnkeww so much...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: krishna_str

nice os👏👏
loved it ...
update soon😊😊

thnkew...and will update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rsk16

really nice update. plz do update soon.loved it .

m glad that u oll lyk it😳...thnkew so much😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: irock321

Awww that was seriously heart wrenching!!! Soo much emotion! LOVED! Please hurry up and continuee!!! I wanna know when Asad and them will find out why she was broken and crying and when Razia and Siddique will get punished! And of course Asya confession!!! 😃 Please PM me :))) Thankss!

will pm u...thnx a lot😳
and wait kro...aage aage dekho hota hai kya😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayee ...we all need this...to survive
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
really very sorry frnzz for the late update...😭par m bi kya kru mele boards the na😭
so ab chodo aur aj ki badi khabar suno...
m ab newbie nhi rhi😃...m GROUPBIE ban gyi yeahhh...😆
so to celebrate here is the 4th part...so enjoy😉

PART 4
hume sab sboot mitane honge...us aurat ke khoon ka raaz ab samn nhi ana chaie...us aurat ko marna tha mar gyi so uski ldki bhi...han use to marna hi tha (came another)...zainab zinda hoti to hume ye shan-o-shaukat kaha se milti...hahhahahaha...
"ammiii" zoya woke up with a shock...sweating badly...(its 2 am at night...

here asad was not slept even at dat tym...he was thinking of her...thinking of the problem which caused her so much pain dat she was not able to listen to him at the day of accident...but now she havnt remember...i also cant force her...as it would stress her...not what to do?
then suddenly he heard a voice full of shock...shattered...as if someone is crying...and ya he could recoganise dat voice...his zoya...yes...but what happen to her?...again dat horror dream of fire i think...and he rushed to her...
he entered her room with a baash...there he saw zoya sitting on the bed...sweating badly...as if she had seen a ghost...who will kill her...who will take her whole happiness...
and he rushed to her...sit beside her on her bed...he took her face in his palms...and said "wat happen zoya? is everything fine?...again dat dream of fire?" and she was still crying...and he wiped her tears and old her not to cry...she simply placed her head on his shoulder...wanting from him the comfort...the comfort dat she belongs here...she belongs to some...he brushed hair asideand placed his hand on her haed to assure her dat he is with him and he forever will...
she slowly moved away...trying to stop crying yet was not able to...
than najma and dilshad came..."zoya beta kya hua...tumhe fir se vhi sapna aya kya" asked dilshad...and she saw asad sitting beside her consoling her...she felt relaxed and happy as she thought dat now someone is there for her every minute and she would never be alone...and also there is someone for asad...she and najma simply went out as they thought dat now asad is dere for her...and he will take care of her at his best...zoya was shocked to see that but was still in the big shock of her dream...
asad ask her "what happen zoya tell me zoya please"...
zoya said"kuch dhundli si yaadein hai asad...kuch dhundle se chehre hai...m unhe pehchan nhi paa rhi hu...par itna jaanti hu ki meri ammi ko unhone maar dala...vo mujhe bhi maarna chahte the asad sirf aur sirf paiso ke lie " and she broke down in tears again...
"shhh...shhh...zoya don cry...chup bilkul chup...ab ye yaad kro ki vo log kon the?...yaad kro zoya kuch to yaad ayega?"..."nahi mr.khan kuch bhi yaad nhi aa rha kuch bhi nhi"...and then she saw her phone..."phone mr. khan phone!" zoya said
"phone kya zoya?" asad assked
"pta nhi par kuch to hai mr. khan is phone se related mr. khan" zoya said...and he stood up took the phone and started searching the call logs and messages but doesnt find anything...he told zoya...but she was not ready to accept that there was nothing in phone "nahi mr. khan kuch to hai...m kh rhi hu na kuch to zrur hai"... and she stood up to grab the phone from his hand but he raised his hands so zoya was not able to take the phone...zoya took a stool and stood on dat...and then he lowered his hands.."ahhh mr. khan...y r u doing dis...give it to me please"
"nhi zoya..mene kha na isme kuch nhi hai aisa..abhi ap soyengi..apko pta hai na apke lie itna stress thik nhi hai..chaliye soyie" and he took her in his arms and placed her on the bed and drop yhe quilt on her...
" mr. khan ap bhot ziddi hai :/"
" han vo to m hu ap hi ne sikhaya hai"
"jahapanah six packs has rhe hai :O...mr.khan ye kb hua apki tbiyat to thik hai na.. let me check"
and she checked his forhead by her palm... arae apko to bukhar bhi nhi hai...khi ye apka bhoot to nhi hai? :O
ya khi m sapna to ni dekh rhi... and she pinched herself "owwwchhh"
"zoyaa ap bhi na m sch me hu apka akdu ahmed kha " and he winked at her and she fainted

:O "kitni pagal hai ye behosh hi ho gyi" asad said and he took the glass of water frm the bedside...and sprinkled some drops on her face...she slowly opened her eyes..."zoya ap thk ho?" asad asked and she nodded ok chlo ab ap so jao...hum kal subh baat krenge gud nyt..asad said...'good nyt' zoya repkied...she was still in the shock dat her jahanpanah winked at her OMG...pta nhi mr. khan ko kbhi kbhi kya kya ho jata hai..khair chodo abhi m soo jati hu..and she was able to have a good sleep dat night coz of her jahanpanah..

next morning

at the breakfast table..."good morning phuphi..good morning najma..good morning mr.khan" it was a cheerful morning as after so many days zoya came at the breakfast table to have her meal with them..they looked like a perfect family..."zoya beta tum yha kyo ayi m tumhara breakfast room mein le aati" said dilshad..." no phuphi m fine...m bore ho gyi hu room me breakfast kr krke...i want to have breakfast with my family...i mean with all of you"zoya replied
" u r a part of our family zoya" dilshad said dat looking at asad and he simply smiled..."yes zoya u r a part of ur family" said najma and hugged her...zoya smiled her dimple vali smile...
she stood at the table...just den tanveer came..."gud morning jammy" "gud morning khaala...najma and zoya" said tanveer...she was about to sit next to her when asad said"zoya tum yha betho" zoya was hell shocked to hear dat...she simply went and sit beside asad...tanveer took the place beside zoya...they completed their breakfast and zoya sat on the couch...asad came near her and sat beside her..."zoya show me ur phone"..."ya here it is"
"zoya i don think there is any call or msg in this phone which is an evidence"...
"but mr. khan pta ni kyu mjhe aisa lg rha hai ki isme kuch to hai"...
"leave it m kuch pta krne ki koshish krta hu.." and he left for office

at 2 pm
"zoya ye dekho meri new dress...hows it"najma asked
"its fab tamatar"zoya said
and tamatar begin to dance...zoya took out her mobile and started to capture a video...
"zoya what r u doing no...don do dat" najma said
" ok ok ok nhi krti khush meri laal laal tamatar." zoya said

at dinner table
"phuphi m apko kuch dikhana chahti hu..." zoya said while winking at najma...no" said najma...she tried to snatch the mobile accidently wrong video played or we can say dat right video played...zoya saw the whole incident occurd in factory captured by her and broke down in tears...dilshad najma and asad also saw the video and were hell shocked that razia is the evil behind it...and siddique is zoya's father who killed zoya's mother and tried to kill zoya also...and rashid is innocent Oh MY god...

so frnzz hows it????...wrote it today itself...bura lga ho to bta do m marungi nahi :p...please give me reviews...ur comments are very precious for...as said earlier...encouragement nhi milta na :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awww you dummy :P xD lool jk You left it hanging and making us want moreee!!! Please update quickly!!! Love it!!! Thanks for the PM :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
awsum...!!!
finally correct video play ho hi gai...!!
but is point pe cliffhanger😲
plz continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Read all parts in one go.. Very Nice and well written...
Caring Asad and a perfect family..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
thankeww🤗

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