asya OS: jagg suna suna laage (lst part pg 17)

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Hey frnzz...
I was getting bored and an idea struck on my mind...so just thoght of writing an OS...hope u will lyk dis...so here u go...

Zoya was very tensed coz firstly she was not able to find her abbu inspite of all her efforts and secondly rashid's case next court hearing was also very near...so she has to find about the truth ehind dis also...but her visa is going to expire in 2 weeks so she has just 2 weeks to do all dis...so i have to start from today...she was thinking all dis when she heard dilshad's voice
"zoya beta breakfast is ready...come down" dilshad said
"ya phuphi coming"zoya said
zoya thought" so i hv to try from today...mr. khan is busy with her so called friend tanveer so he will not help me...aur vo to vse bhi dost(rashid) ko culprit mante h...so mujhe akele hi koshish krni hogi...allah miyyan! what's wrong with you! apko ye kannez hi mili ti itni saari problems dene ke lie...vse allah miyyan bi jante h ki m ms. zoya farukki i can do anything tbhi to...sb smjhti hu m allah miyyan"
with that she rushes to breakfast table with her purse and ipad...she fastly ate her lunch and said" phuphi vo mujhe aj ek bhot important kaam hai to mjhe abhi jana hoga...ap fikr mt kijie m jaldi aa jaungi"...pretending to show tanveer dat dilshad care about her alot..."okay phuphi bye" zoya said...
"bye beta" dilshad said...zoya was about to go when she heard her jahanpanah's voice...
"zo...ms.farukki...ap kaha ja rhi hai?...mera mtlb ap chahe to m apko chod du?"
"hayye jahanpanah...ap chahe to ye kaneez hmesha ke lie apke sath car me bethi rhe...hayye how romantic :p"zoya thought
"ms.farukki kahan kho gyi...ms.farukki...zoya...zoya" asad said while shaking her
" hayye kitna acha lgta h apke muh se mera naam" zoya thought
"han vo...no...no...mr.khan i can go myself..."zoya said
"ok...but plz be on time...u knw i hate in discipline"asad said
he want to be with her...but how can he?
" ya mr.khan i will be back on time...don worry...bbye" zoya said
asad thought"ye khan ja rhi hongi...shayd apne abbu ko dhundne...nhi agr apne abbu ko dhundne ja rhi hoti to mere sath jaane se mnaa na krti...khi ye us rabart se milne to ni ja rhi :0...i have to find about dat rabbart :/" (jahanpanah getting jelly jelly :p)
zoya was out in the street when she thought" i should go to dat factory and see if there is any clue...shayd vhi se koi clue mil jae dost ki begunahi ka"
and she rushes to the "gudiya factory"

GUDIYA FACTORY
here razia was there with her husband siddique...
razia said" hume yahan se hr ek subbut mitana hoga apko to pta hai ki vo asad kitna shattir hai...agr vo dobara se yahan phonch gya aur use kuch mil gya to hmara barso purana raaz khul jaega"
zoya listened to her" which raaz she is talking about...aur ye hai kon...shayd mene inhe phle khi dekha hai...khi ye vhi to nhi jo us dinQURAN KHWAZI me ayi thi...han ye to vhi h...fr is gudiya factory ke sath inka kya raaz hai...mjhe to iss aurat par us din se hi shak tha...i hv to find out everything now" so she closes so to get a full view...and opened her mobile to catch a video recording
razia said"barso purana vo raaz jab humne us aurat ko us zehnab(zoya's mother) ko maar dala tha...aur kyo na maarte ...vo apko humse chinna chahti thi...aise kaise vo hmare pyaar pe apna hq jtaa skti hai...appe sirf aur sirf hmara hq hai...use to mrna hi tha...akhir tbhi to uski sari property hmare naam hoti...acha hua jo uski beti bhi usi aag me jal ke marr gyi..."
siddique" han acha huajo vo marr gyi...us aurat ne to sari property apni beti ke naam kr di thi...agr vo zinda rhti to ye property hmare naam kese hoti" and they both laughed an evil laughter...
zoya was broke down on hearing her ammi's name from her mouth "kya meri ammi ko inhone mara tha aur vo bhi sirf paiso ki khatir...aur ye mjhe bhi maarna chahte the...to ye mere abbu hai...m bhi kitni pagal hu...inhe dhundne ke lie new york se yha ayi jinhe meri prvah tk nhi hai...jinhone khud mjhe maarne ki koshish ki thi...allah miyyan kyu kyu ap mere sath aisa krte hai...mene aisa kya kiya hai jo hmesha mere sath aisa hota h...zoya calm down...she said to herself...u have to be strong...tumhe pura raaz janna hai...ho na ho dost ko bhi inhone hi fsaya hai...agr iss aurat ne meri ammi ko mara tha to dost ke upr ye illzaam kese aya"...and she again watched through the corner...
razia and siddique were searching if there was any clue left...razia said"hume hr suboot ko mitana hoga...17 saal phle mene apne jis gunaah ko rashid ke sir pe daal dia tha usse is factory me aag lagva ke...m us raaz ko yu khulne nhi dungi"
zoya thought" to mtlb inhone ye sb kia tha aur sara ilzaam dost pr lga dia unse aag lgva ke"...she stoped the recording and left the factory...
she was heart broken...finally she came to know about her father but what's dis...her father want her to be dead...why allah miyyan why...why did u do dis???
she was walking in the middle of the road...the laughter was flashbacking in her mind...
*BG...chann se jo tutte koi sapna...jag sunna sunna laage...koi rhe na jab apna jagg sunaa sunna laage re*

she was crying hard...when asad saw her...he was shocked to see her like dat...he immediately stopped her car and was about to go to her...when he saw a fast approching truck towards her...he screamed" zoyaaa...zoyaaa bchooo...zoyaaa bchooo" but she was so busy in her thoghts dat she neither hear truck's horn nor asad' voice...he hurridly went towards her but ALAS he was late...she got hit by dat truck...blood was oozing from her head...and she laid lifeless there on road...asad was so shocked to see that he freezes there...and bent down on his knees on the road...and screamed at the top of his voice" zoyaaa"

*phew* at last completed...it took me 2 hours to complete...i was about to complete in my first attempt but Allas due to power cutt...i lost all the matter...but at the end its completed...so hows this guys?...plz plz plz comment...m eagerly waiting for the response...and tell me if u want me to continue????

joota chappal rotten tomatoes all are acceptable :p
INDEX

PROMO PG 4
PART 2 -PG 5
PART 3-PG 8
PART 4-PG 11
PART 5-iPG 13
LAST PART PG 17
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tishma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww what happen to my zoya baby.plz dnt kill her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

un res


do you plan to continue it pleease 😭

today itself ?? please😭
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
NainaAlex thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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don't tell me Zoya will lose her memory...!!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: tishma

aww what happen to my zoya baby.plz dnt kill her

Originally posted by: pinkks

no no nthing will happen to her don worry

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Originally posted by: Manpreet23

You're continuing right?

Originally posted by: pinkks

well it depends upon the response😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

please continue..well written..

Originally posted by: pinkks

thnkew so much...m glad that u like it😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I ALMOST CRIED WHEN I READ THE LAST SENTENCE. :O
AWESOME! Continue! :D
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

res


un res


do you plan to continue it pleease 😭

today itself ?? please😭

Originally posted by: pinkks

firstly m glad dat u like it😳

Nd m really sry i cant cntinue it today...coz i hvnt planned the nxt ch yet...n the big problem is dat i hv to write the nxt prt from my phn...and it take so much tym...i hv to prepare fr my maths exam also...sry😭...but will definately continue dis soon 😃

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please continueee 😲 NOWWW 😆

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