asya OS: jagg suna suna laage (lst part pg 17) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: taareyzen

wooowww!! IM REALLLY xiiitd bout it!! 👏

tnx 4 updatng!!! it ws faaab!!👏👏
plzzz plzzz update d next part!!!
😊😊 dieng 2 read d next 1!!n plzzz PM me!! plzzz


thnkeww so much...m glad u likd it
will update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
superb update...!!!
finally that razia and siddique jailed🥳 and tanveer ki truth bhi samne...!!!
asya moments were too sweet...!!!
now whats gonna asad do? is he gonna marry her?
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Actually m a little bit busy...but don worry will update soon
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Originally posted by: pinkks

Actually m a little bit busy...but don worry will update soon


update soon then 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb update...!!!

finally that razia and siddique jailed🥳 and tanveer ki truth bhi samne...!!!
asya moments were too sweet...!!!
now whats gonna asad do? is he gonna marry her?
continue soon...!!

Thankww so much...
Well yr i hvnt planned the next ch yet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LAST PART

ZOYA's ROOM
its 11 pm and zoya came out of her washroom after getting fresh and something caught her eyes..."gift? yeh kisne rkha hoga...? dekhti hu"...she took the gift and there was a slip with the gift and she opened it to read
"zoya aj ka din bhot hi special hone vala hai aur us special day ke lie ye special gift...ap ise pehen kr tyaar rehna humne bhr jana h...i will pick u at 7 pm...aur han maine ammi ki permission le li hai...so dn worry js be ready..
tumhare jahanpanah six packs ;)"
zoya was like😲 "jahanpanah six packs ne apne ap ko jahanpanah six packs bola 😲 aur to aur vo mere sath bahr jana chahte...special day?...date?...hmari first date yipppeee" and she started dancing...najma and dilshad who were sitting in living room got worried listening to zzoya and dey came to her room..."zoya zoya kya hua beta?"dilshad asked "han zoya kya hua tum chillayi kyo" najma...and dey again become shocked on seeing her dancing on bed
zoya become embarassed on seeing najma and her phuphi..."ah vo vo...pta hai kya phuphi...m going on a date with jahanpanah...isnt it amazing...and he gifted me something to wear...let me see it..." and she opened the box and there she saw a beautiful red coloured saree with pearl work on the border
"wow phuphi...mr. khan ye mere lie laye hai...hmari first dat" and she immediately stopped speaking realizing wat she had blurted out and dat too in front of his ammi and his sister...najma and dilshad were gigling on seeing their chirpy and bubbly zoya...dilshad came close and kissed her forehead "m so happy for u beta" dilshad said and left her room
najma said in teasing tone "ahan zoya first date😉"
"chup kkro tamater nhi to tumhari first date cockroach ke sath krva dungi😆"
najma made a pouted face and dey both started laughing..."zoya i will help u getting ready"
"okay tamater"
it was 7 pm and asad was waiting for zoya in living room impatiently ..."ajao zoya aur kitna tadpaogi(😆) "
and then he heard a sound...sound of a payal and he turned around and there she was dressed in dat beautiful saree with pearl earings..loose hairs and with kohl in eyes...she was looking mesmerising...
"woww.." asad said
"apne kch kaha mr. khan?"
and he didnt replied..he was soo busy in admiring her beauty dat he didnt listened to her words and she waved her hands in front of his eyes so he was back from his lala land...
"haan han woh chale ab?" asad said
"ya m ready...btaiye na mr. khan m kaisi lg rhi hu?" and she twirls around waving her saree's pallu and got slipped and jahapanah caught her by his strong arms...*eye lock* *mitwaaa*
"ahem ahem" dilshad and najma broke their trance and they immedialy stood up...
"ahh ammi ab hum chale?" asad asked
"han beta tum jao but be back early "
"okay ammi allah hafiz"
"allah hafiz phuphi"
and they came out of the khan mansion...asad opened the door for zoya like a gentleman and she sat down...and they drove off
"mr. khan hum kkaha ja rhe hai?" zoya asked
"abi pta chl jaega" and he stopped the car on the road
"mr. khan yha car kyo roki?...khi ap mujhe jaan se maarne ka plan to ni bna rhe?...no mr. khan plz mjhe mt mariye...mujh jaisi pyaari si ladki ne apka kya bigada hai...plz mr. khan aisa mt krie"
and he put his index finger on her lips "shhh"
and he took out a black cloth and tied it on her eyes...
"mr. khan ye ap kya kr rhe hai?..."
"ahh dance kr rha hu"
"whaaattt"and he laughed
"zoya cloth kr rha hu aur kya!"
"par kyu mr. khan"
"abhi pta chal jaega kyu"
and he drove off...
"mr. khan ap mjhe btaie hum kaha ja rhe h khi ap mjhe jungle me chodne to ni ja rhe? vo bhi akele... :("
he gigled on seeing her childish nature...
"mr. khan ap has rhe hai ? :O fr to zrur kaale me daal hai"
"zoya kaale me daal nhi daal me kaala hota hai"
"han vhi vhi!...kya iska matlab sch me kch gadbad hai"
"gadbad to hai" he said in a naughty tone
"kya schii me...nhi mr. khan u cant do dis"
"chup kro"
and she become silent immediatly...and he gigled on seeing her pouted face suddenly car came to an halt...and asad made zoya came out of the car and took her at a place and untied the cloth...
there she was...at the hilltop the place where they wished for each other to be fall in love to the opposite...the place beautifully decorated with lights and flowers and there was a table for two in the middle of dat place decorated withwhite and red stripling and red roses...and the table was fully covered with rose petals and there was a slip on the table and then she realized dat she was so busy in seeing the beautiful place dat she forgot about mr. khan and she turned around to see no one...she quickly grabbed the paper on the beanch and read dat...
"ghabraiye mat m yhi hu"
" par kaha mr. khan" zoya said and den she heard some music...

'hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte tere bina kya wajood meraaa'

she turns around but found no one...

'hum tere bin ab reh nhi skte tere bina kya wajood mera...tujhse juda agr ho jae to khud se hi ho jaenge judaa'

she knew whose voice is dis and den she twirls around but again no one..."mr. khan ap kaha ho?"
and den she felt his breathing near her ear..."kyunki tum hi ho...ab tum hi ho zindagi ab tum hi ho"he wrapped his arm around her tummy and danced and he continued "mera chain bhi...mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho" he twirls her and they were now face to face...their was a prettly smile on her face and her cheeks were red...he became very happy on seeing her blushing...
he took his guitarand continued singing..."tera mera rishta hai kaisa...ik pal door gvara nhi...tere lie hr roz hai jeete...tujhko dia mera waqt...koi lamha na ho ab tere bina har saans pe naam teraa..." and zoya placed a finger on his mouth and started singing..."kyuki tum hi ho...tum hi ho...zindagi ab tum hi ho...chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi hoo"

a small smirk played on his lips on seeing his zoya singing for him...she was singing and again he dissapeared...she realized dat he was not there...
"mr. khan kaha gye ap"
and den he came from back and hugged her from one hand with a big bouquet of red roses in the other..."this is for you"...she felt a cute sensation in her when he hugged her and she jumped in joy on seeing the bouquet..."wow mr. khan ye mere lie hai?..."
"hmmm"
and she smelled the roses and suddenly hugged..."thankew so much mr. khan" he also hugged her and she realised what she did and she backed...and he held her hand and pulled her in a way such dat her face landed on his chest and she can hear his heart beat which was running even faster than rajdhani express :p she thought
she backed upon a little still very close to him so that she can see his face which was lightened with a small smirk...*eye lock*
and after a moment trance broke and she turned around...he held her hand so she turned again only to be shocked to see him on his his knees with his head down..." i wanna say something zoya"
"hmm"
"zoya tumhe shayd pta na ho...vo dis vo waqt jo meri zindagi ka sabse special moment tha...aj se pure 3 mhine phle...m dargah gya...vha maine apni zindagi ko dekha...par uski ankho kch nami thi kch tadpa rha tha use...bhot dard tha un ankho me...laal jode me saji hui vo ek kaali shaul ke sath vha bethi allah se kch maang rhi thi...na jaane kyu mjhse uska dard dekha nhi gya...na jaane kyu m uski taraf khinche ja rha tha...par maine apne ap ko roka aur allah se prayer krne laga...aur jb maine aankhe kholi to vo vha nhi thi...aur m vha se chl dia...pr shayd allah ko hmara fir milna manzoor tha...hum fir mile...uska meri car se accident hua...m uski help krne utra par vo mjhe hi daantne lagi...us waqt mje aisa lga ki usme bilkul tehzeeb nhi hai...m vha se chla gya usse dobara na milne ka soch kr...par shayd allah ko vo manzoor nahi tha...hum fr mile aur milte rhe ...na jaane kaisi kashish thi usme ki uske alava kch dikhta hi ni mjhe...vo sath hoti hai to jaisi meri zindagi sath hoti hai...aur vo sath nahi hoti hai to jaise kch bhi nhi hota...maine usse door rhne ki bhot koshish ki par pta nhi kyu m uske bina rh nhi pa rha tha...meri hassi meri khushi sb usi ke sath hai..." and he looked up only to see his zoya smiling with tears in her eye4..." aur tum jaanti ho vo kon hai? han zoya tum hi meri zindagi ho...tum hi meri chahat ko...tum hi mera junoon. ho...tum hi mera sab kch ho...bs tum hi ho i love you zoya...i love you so much"
she was so happy on hearing dat she wason cloud 9...she also bend down on her knees and cupped his face and said in tears "me too" they both hugged each other and stood up...
"tum bhi kya zoya?"
"huh?"
"me too means?"
"means means i love me too :p" and she ran only to be chased by asad...
"hahahha u cannot catch me" zoya said while running
"acha zoya ki bachi abi pkdta hu"
and he ran behind her and ofcourse he caught her and held her so close that their nose are touching...
"ab btao kya kh rhi thi?"
"ah vo kch nhii"
"acha kch nhi " and he become close to her and kissed her their...she moaned on his touch and he became happy...
"to kch nhi kh rhi thi?"
"ammm na"
and he reached to the other side and kissed there...
"to nhi kh ri thi?"
"um na"
and he kissed her on her cheek...and bend down his face to reach to her lips...
"kuch nhi?"
he said in a teasing tone and zoya knew wat he was going to do...she said "nooo" and run away...
she reached near the corner of the hill top and spoke with full voice..." i love you my akdu jahapanah six packs" and she laughed...he become very happy on hearing dat and amused also
saying so she moved towards asad and said "i love you so much...i dont knw when where...par ap agr sath nhi hote to aisa lgta h koi khushi nhi h sath aur jb ap sath hotte ho to aise lgta h jaise sb kch sath hai sari khushiya itni khushiya jitni kisi ke pas nhi hai...aur jb ap us tannu ke sath hote ho to mann krta hai m use gala daba ke maar daalu...saali cockraoch ki maaa"
asad was like :O "cockroach ki maa?" and both burst out laughing...and suddenly he hugged her...i love u so much zoya...mujse nikaah krogi.?...m saari zindagi tumhari vo untolerable shayaris sunna chahta hu...saari zindagi tumari vo shararto ke sath rehna chahta hu"
"nhiii"
":O"
"kya m nhi krungi apse nikaah apko meri shayari untolerable lgti h na :/"
she made a pouted face and he felt like kissing her and so he did
yes jahapanah kissed his miss new york...
at first zoya got shocked but after sometime she also joined him...
and they broke the kiss in the need of oxygen
"so zoya farukki will you be mine"
"yes i would like to be zoya akdu ahmed khan"
"akdu? :O...abhi btata hu m akdu hu ya kch aur" he said and winked at her and she ran...and he ran behind her...





so frnz dis was the last part...i know i know i have updated after ages so sorry for dat...chodo uso ye btao ye kaisa tha o.O
only jootas without heels and tommtoes not rotten are accepted :p

aur haan ab last post hai islie m bhana bi ni bna skti encouragement ka :p...to yr bachi par thodi daya krke thode se comments zrur daal dena *puppy face*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
you brought a smile on my face. Excellent
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

you brought a smile on my face. Excellent


Thankew so much😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woow it was sooo cute! ehhee! I loved it! 🤗 looking forward to more of your writing 😳

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