AsYa OS: The trail of Subconscious- complete pg 5

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
continue soon

Really? i thought tht was about it, but yes i can come up with Zoe's subconscious part... ,lets see

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

It was a treat to read such an amazing update!❤️

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wow!!

I just couldn't stop but read and read and read it.

This was beautiful and well written and well described.

How I wish I could write that way.

I'll try writing something on this level too. I love writing such stuff, that is related to only feelings, the heart and the mind. No need for dialogues. Just actions and the minute details of you body and your insides. That's enough to let you know what is happening.

Annie

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Beautiful! Amazing!!! I'm left speechless ...have no other words! He's a man with beautiful thoughts and emotions and now will have a home to turn to finally! If you continue please PM me :))) Thanks!!

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: luvasya
nice discription👏 & awesome update👏
thanks for pm😊

Thanks a zillion, means a lot

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: millli
very nice..interesting...continue soon..😊 and pm me

thanks, i sure will :)

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: antara2309
It was a treat to read such an amazing update!❤️

glad u liked it.. thanks a lot

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
Wow!!
I just couldn't stop but read and read and read it.
This was beautiful and well written and well described.
How I wish I could write that way.
I'll try writing something on this level too. I love writing such stuff, that is related to only feelings, the heart and the mind. No need for dialogues. Just actions and the minute details of you body and your insides. That's enough to let you know what is happening.

Annie

arey i have read ur stuff too, u write amazingly well... and about writing the way i wrote, i think it is apt for AsYa, reason, the best part about these 2 chars is that despite their amazing dialogues, they are given best silent nods too, i means both SJ & KSG are excellent in doing these roles as they emote thru their eyes and their expressions are sooo darn vocal.. i jus love them

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: irock321
Beautiful! Amazing!!! I'm left speechless ...have no other words! He's a man with beautiful thoughts and emotions and now will have a home to turn to finally! If you continue please PM me :))) Thanks!!

yeahh, how i wish there was somthing happening in the show like this, but i guess PH is there to torture us with cocmpclications.. :)