Poker Face-AsYa SS (16+) Updated! Chapter 5 11/4 - Page 20

wow i just read all the parts in one go i must say its very hot im just amazed by ur writing plzz do update soon n plz add me n pm me whn u update

Originally posted by: scarletgirl

wow i just read all the parts in one go i must say its very hot im just amazed by ur writing plzz do update soon n plz add me n pm me whn u update

Thank you for reading and liking it. I'll pm u when I update :)

Del girl...



You just made me blush like 50 different shades of red!

It was such a bad idea reading this in the living room. 😆

I usually do not read mature FF because its mot my cup of tea. But that was truly hot and you are talented writer for such sensual scenes.

You described the scenes wonderfully, otherwise I usually get turned off by such fic's because the description are either too graphic or too vulgar.You described the scenes beautifully.

Asad is... ☺️ Wow... after the recent is Asad a virgin discussion we had, I can totally imagine the guy like this 😆

Im jealous of you now 😛 Main aisi hot passionate scenes kabhi nahi likh sakti 😆

Overall seems like a very interesting story!

Do continue soon :-D

Originally posted by: Rin03

Del girl...



You just made me blush like 50 different shades of red!

It was such a bad idea reading this in the living room. 😆

I usually do not read mature FF because its mot my cup of tea. But that was truly hot and you are talented writer for such sensual scenes.

You described the scenes wonderfully, otherwise I usually get turned off by such fic's because the description are either too graphic or too vulgar.You described the scenes beautifully.

Asad is... ☺️ Wow... after the recent is Asad a virgin discussion we had, I can totally imagine the guy like this 😆

Im jealous of you now 😛 Main aisi hot passionate scenes kabhi nahi likh sakti 😆

Overall seems like a very interesting story!

Do continue soon :-D

I am glad u didn't think it was crude. It's hard to write these scenes without usin certan words but its definitely doable. Thank u for reading and liking it 😊

Omg

No words 4 such bold and passionate ss

Its really good
I cant comment now as I dnt no wat 2 for this ss

Bold . Passionate full of love
👍🏼

Originally posted by: enrique

Omg

No words 4 such bold and passionate ss

Its really good
I cant comment now as I dnt no wat 2 for this ss

Bold . Passionate full of love
👍🏼

Aw thank u for reading this. :)

Del, I had somehow missed chapter 3, but it was awesome reading chapters 3 & 4 together. I love your writing style, very hot and intense without being crude. Looking forward to the next chapter.

wow... wonder whats going to happen now?? please add me to your pm list.

Originally posted by: NVBGKY

Del, I had somehow missed chapter 3, but it was awesome reading chapters 3 & 4 together. I love your writing style, very hot and intense without being crude. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Glad you like this SS. I am trying as much as possible to not make this crude. That is not my intent with the story. I wanted it to be hot, passionate, funny and angsty and I hope it's coming across 😊

Thanks for reading!

Too hot..amazing..smthng diffrnt..nice..do update soon..plz pm ne wen u update..