Poker Face-AsYa SS (16+) Updated! Chapter 5 11/4

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

oh my god.

can't wait for the morning after

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: shaz2009
Holy mother of God!That was friggin hot!☺️That was heaven on a plate dished out for our needy,sinful souls ☺️.I really liked how you went about introducing more new positions through use of euphemism so that no such offensive linguistics were required,leaving no room to border on vulgarity!Though erotic,it was still very aestheticically penned to perfection!😊
Everytime I read Poker Face I feel as if I am watching a movie in the genre of supense/thriller instead of actually reading some words as your writing has that power to make the your words come to life to give us such awakening visuals.

Right now I am very intrigued about these people that are after Zoya's life that I've got a herd of questions doing the rounds of my head and cannot rest in peace until the next installment...so please dnt keep us hanging on for too long Del!😃

Aw thanks shaz. I love how you give feedback! It makes writing stories more fun 😊

I'll try and update soon. I am currently nursing a dislocated hand so it might take to the weekend at the very least. 😭

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: adeeti10
Just the perfect thing to read after a hard days work! Thanks Del! Loved every word, and every action. So well described, I could imagine it! 😆

Hey Dee! Thanks for reading! Hehe, I am glad you could imagine it 😉

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: delena90

Aw thanks shaz. I love how you give feedback! It makes writing stories more fun 😊

I'll try and update soon. I am currently nursing a dislocated hand so it might take to the weekend at the very least. 😭

Wish you a speedy recovery Del.. and no worries... how ever hard it may be,I can wait!😊

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Oh god...Amazing update!!! An effing hawwtt one!!!😳

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Delana - Your stories need to come with a SUPER WARNING! I burnt myself it was so HOT!!! Your stories are so scorching and wild they are causing us to get so giddy we're going to end up like Zoya - unable to stand up! That was so amazingly shocking I was gasping for air and the smile on my face was just 😳

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

'Osfokirogwjepgoht'

I was gonna type more of this nonsense, only to show how incapable I am of forming a proper sentence. OH.HOT.DAMN.

I really do not need to say 'that was hot' because you already know that! Delena, woman, that was BRILLIANT! Beyond brilliant, beyond words. Hot, erotic, passionate and intense (THEY WERE ON A BLOODY FREAKING PLANE!!!!). I'm loving every single minute of it.

Continue soon, I mean it! 😆

-Raina