|Power Cut| AsYa SS. LAST PART PG27NotePg32! - Page 21

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

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We do follow the show sometimes..busy with exam right now. And not much into Fanfic here in this forum but saw your ID and came here. We had commented on the first part that if you update the next part..we will give a lamba comment.. at last you updated the last part, so here we come! 😆. Actually was too busy and was waiting for the last part so din't comment.

You two are too kind. :D I know, you guys promised that you would give a lamba wala comment after the story was finished, so thank you. :)

YOU SAW MY NAME AND CAME? *HONOURED*

This SS was AMAZING. Not too mush, made sense and was AsYa-ish. it makes sense right?🤔. Anyway in the first update the 'Zo cursing Barbie doll' was hilarious and tit-bits of her questioning herself , her emotional turmoil was well written.

Gee, when you wrote ghost stories, we were totally confused and honestly we had expected Zoya jumping on Asad because of some freaking ghost and 'tada'!! realization hits them!. 😆Generally yahi hota hai..nonetheless We are glad that you din't take it that way.. and woah the fight was hilarious. esp. when Zoya named the lil girl Asad. 🤣

HAHA, yes. :) Many people wanted a romance wala ghost story and I screwed it all up by giving some Comedy Nights thing. :P Nevertheless, hope you enjoyed it!

The ending was done smartly. Although kinda lost the connect when she agreed that he will explain part..dun noe why, take this positively please. And well good ending.

I always take criticism positively. :) Considering I've heard that you two write flawlessly, I will take it all the more seriously! Do you mind telling me where exactly I messed up though? It would help! I'll try rewriting it. :DOn the whole..it was a good read. Do write more and thanks for the PMs.

Btw mate, we are from D3 forum and saw many people talk about your work, we had read it maybe ..but not sure. Finally found the link and will be reading it soon. Its incomplete we know, so it would really kind of you if you, please pretty please complete it. Will be waiting.😳

D3 folks! ;D *hugs* AH, it's been so long since I've watched that show! Sighs. OH, you guys are reading Knockin' on Heaven's Door! Have fun. :P Gimme a month more and I'll be there! :D

I wrote a few oneshots on SwaRon too actually! :) They were called :-

A Week Without Swayam

Complex

Another Day.

:)

Read them too if you get the time and if you cant find them, let me know please!

P.S: isn't this a long comment?!😆

LONG INDEED! Thank you so much for being here :D

-Shreya And Kanishtha- Fatty :D