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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

I wished you told me earlier that you were writing on AsYa too. I really enjoy your writing even though I only followed one of your SS on SwaRon last time. I love how this SS was different. It concentrated more on what Zoya felt and how Asad reacts to her when she moves away !! Do PM me the next time you write anything on AsYa !! 😊

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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

That end was so freaking adorable!

I loved the whole story :)))

Bahahaha I came home from work and read this and all of my exhaustion just disappeared!!!

I don't think you actually realise how amazing you are!

Loads of love,

Pari!

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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Wow...dis was amazin...i luvd the endin wer asad was givin her instructions...i luvd the whole scene...it was cute n u hve written it beautiful...tysm :-* :)

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

This just amazing superb, fantastic...I'm running out of words!!!!! Though the main theme was more comic than romantic, the sparks between AsYa, the intensity of their emotions, they love, their yearning...all came out brilliantly!!!!!

👏👏👏👏

And I have been reading your other SS as well...do update it when you get the time!

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winniepooh

@winniepooh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

that was absolutely delightful..loved the way u ended it..asad's fear of losing her and the relief on finding her still in his home superb.thanks for taking out the time to finish the story and good luc k with the exams!!!

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

heya! it was a great end. the start was a bit depressing, Zoya deciding to go out of Khan House n da conversation da Duo had was so sad. the gesture of Zoya outting her palm on his chest n sayin dose words made my eyes moist.

but God has planned on keepin dem togetherforeva n dats y, how much ever she tries, she isn't able to move out. the way Asad prayed for her was enough to show dat she meant a lot to him, more dan wat he cud ever show, him being Akdu Ahmed Khan. i loved his attention on Zoya n her heart warming laughter made my day. i hope it stays like dis in QH too.

love,

Nimra.

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

OMG...that was Mind-blowing havok..:):) Simply Out-standing!!
So flawlessly written :) Asad was too cute at the end...he was in awe seeing her laugh...so sweet :):)
I am glad it ended on a happy note..:) Thoroughly enjoyed this SS!! :):)
You made me a fan of your writings, girl! :D You have to wrote moreee...please!! :):)
Take care!! :):)

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

loved it completely...
don't have words to say... 👏
amazing shots...
do write more... 😃

Edited by Fimmy - 12 years ago

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Hahaha! D power cuts arrent dat bad u c 😆

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk
Reserved.

UN-Reserved.

We do follow the show sometimes..busy with exam right now. And not much into Fanfic here in this forum but saw your ID and came here. We had commented on the first part that if you update the next part..we will give a lamba comment.. at last you updated the last part, so here we come! 😆. Actually was too busy and was waiting for the last part so din't comment.
You two are too kind. :D I know, you guys promised that you would give a lamba wala comment after the story was finished, so thank you. :)
YOU SAW MY NAME AND CAME? *HONOURED*

This SS was AMAZING. Not too mush, made sense and was AsYa-ish. it makes sense right?🤔. Anyway in the first update the 'Zo cursing Barbie doll' was hilarious and tit-bits of her questioning herself , her emotional turmoil was well written.

Gee, when you wrote ghost stories, we were totally confused and honestly we had expected Zoya jumping on Asad because of some freaking ghost and 'tada'!! realization hits them!. 😆Generally yahi hota hai..nonetheless We are glad that you din't take it that way.. and woah the fight was hilarious. esp. when Zoya named the lil girl Asad. 🤣

HAHA, yes. :) Many people wanted a romance wala ghost story and I screwed it all up by giving some Comedy Nights thing. :P Nevertheless, hope you enjoyed it!
The ending was done smartly. Although kinda lost the connect when she agreed that he will explain part..dun noe why, take this positively please. And well good ending.

I always take criticism positively. :) Considering I've heard that you two write flawlessly, I will take it all the more seriously! Do you mind telling me where exactly I messed up though? It would help! I'll try rewriting it. :DOn the whole..it was a good read. Do write more and thanks for the PMs.

Btw mate, we are from D3 forum and saw many people talk about your work, we had read it maybe ..but not sure. Finally found the link and will be reading it soon. Its incomplete we know, so it would really kind of you if you, please pretty please complete it. Will be waiting.😳
D3 folks! ;D *hugs* AH, it's been so long since I've watched that show! Sighs. OH, you guys are reading Knockin' on Heaven's Door! Have fun. :P Gimme a month more and I'll be there! :D

I wrote a few oneshots on SwaRon too actually! :) They were called :-
A Week Without Swayam
Complex
Another Day.
:)
Read them too if you get the time and if you cant find them, let me know please!
P.S: isn't this a long comment?!😆
LONG INDEED! Thank you so much for being here :D

-Shreya And Kanishtha- Fatty :D