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Oishi

@Oishi23

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Awww...soo soo cutee..Asad is so cute in this part.. I loved this SS..awesome

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Hey ...

Amazing SS ... :-)

Loved it !!!!

Asad's anger brings the worst on him ... :/

But then my poor baby even realizes his mistake and even repents ... :)

Love the way he wanted to meet her once again ... And his wish came true ... :D

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: havokhotline
IMPORTANT AUTHOR'S NOTE:MY FELLOW CITIZENS OF TOMORROW,

I am not continuing this. :| But dont give up hope on me and on my writing, please. You'll see me around soon with something new. :)

*speaks in old lady voice and wags finger*

Remember, dear children. For every closed door, a new door opens. :P

As I said, I will be continuing Hugs and Kisses! :D

Thank you for reading this. :)

waiting for Hugs & kisses update..😊

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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

wow wow wow👏...i'hv read all da 4 parts at 1 go & dey all r mindblowingly written⭐️
seriously while reading dem i ws so much glued wid da story
dat ghost story wala thing simply blew my mind away🤣...dat ws super hilarious
i luvd their door threshold convo...it ws very touching😳
his prayers finally came true & simply luvd da last bit of how he made her understood da game😛
now surely i wud say powecuts r not dat bad kyu?😉

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

I'm waiting for more comments on this! :O I actually remembered to PM people for once. :P

*SOBS INTO THE CARPET*

WHY ISN'T ANYONE NOTICING ME?!

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Amazing SS!

Loved it!

The ending was really nice!

Sorry for the late comment and thanks for the pm!

And update Hugs and Kisses soon!

~Sophie :)

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countingstarz

@countingstarz

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Oh my gosh that was really good . I love your writing style ! I look forward to reading more from you 😃

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

I can't believe it's over! Thanks for the amazing SS.

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

You're just amazing. I had goosebumps reading the last part when he held her hand and whispered in his husky voice. I loved how he ignored Tanveer. Why did you end it? I wanna read more:(

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

I loved it!!! I wish there was more but nope! and OMG I started smiling at the end and mom was in my room ...and she asked me why I was smiling ...now I couldn't say that hehehe Asya are having a moment thats why ..so instead just said no reason xD LOL