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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: havokhotline

WHO IS THIS CREEPY CRAWLY WHO'S MAKING MY ASAD CRY?!FABULOUS part, girl! I totally loved it. :D The suspense is maddening!And I love your DP of Zayn. :P He looks f**k hot. :D


are yu sure it was fabulous?
just cause i had a migraine when i was writing dis down 🤣

Zayn.

*sighs*
WHY CANT HE BE MINE 🤣
*wails louder*

aww thanks love, ill update soon :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Here's anuda chaptah loves!!!

I was meant to post this yesterday, but I found mah favorite song evah on mah old ipod.

Ya know, Love The Way You Lie by Eminem ft. Rihanna <3

S'a classic.

So much meaning, that song has <3

If you haven't heard it you haven't lived.

Go rite now and hear it: P

You will die because of the beautifulness.

:D

btw, I still haven't found mah usb :'(

thats why this chap is so short :'(


sowwy, ill update soon though :D

this one is not that good eithah.

Kinda stupid. :P

Anyways, hope you enjoy: P

Ps.

If I accidently misspelled anyfin or forgot a word, or accidently wrote a line of lyrics, just scrap me, and I'll fix it 🤣

Chapter 3

"Miss Farooqi?"

"I killed my mother."

"N-no no Mr Khan, its not true, who told you that?"

"I killed her Miss Farooqi. With my own hands."

"Mr Khan? Are you okay? Do you ne-"

"I killed her Miss Farooqi, I KILLED HER!!"

"Calm down Mr Khan! You did nothing, it was an acciden-"

"I KILLED HER, I KILLED HER!! I KILLED HER, MY OWN MOTHER!!"

***

After his third panic attack, and fourth actual attack on Zoya and the nurses, Asad was given daily appointments with a councilor, who had been, albeit unsuccessfully, trying to figure out why Asad was behaving like he was.

"Its not just the impact of his mothers death that's made him like this Zoya, there has to something else that's had been sitting it the shelves of his brain all that time, and has only been dug out recently." The old mans kind but questioning gaze came to rest on Zoya.

She was trembling.

"I-I don't know him much at all Aaqil ji. I was just a guest at their house for a few weeks, I didn't even know something like this was going to happen! Phoopi died Aaqil ji, she died, and her daughter doesn't even know yet, what am I meant to do?"

Zoya burst into tears again. It was like a ritual for her for the past three days, to cry.

She didn't know where the strong part of her went.

She really didn't know.

***

"Mr. Khan? Mr. khan, wake up, you need to take your tablets"

Asad got forcefully pushed from the bed, and slowly sat in a seating position. His ribs were a dulling pain, which overpowered the aching in his arm.

"ow," Asad moaned as he nurse tried to check the placing of his ribs.

"Sorry Mr. khan, just a regular check up."

The nurse replied to his discomfort.

Finishing her job, she gave him his medication, and a glass of water, and walked off.

"Mr. Khan?"

A soft voice stopped Asad from completing his actions.

He looked up to see her there.

Zoya.

She came up to him, and sat on the edge of the hospital bed.

Just like he had.

And that's where it started, yet again.

But it was different this time.

He didn't throw things.

He didn't hit anybody.

He didn't yell.

He cried.

Cried so bloody much.

But he didn't know why.

They came again, the people in white.

They drugged him up again.

His eyes closed again.

He saw her face again.

***

Najma had been getting ready for her 1st day of college in America.

She was in a state of happiness that not many people could describe.

Her bhaijaan let her come to America to study!

She was over the moon.

Humming a sweet tune, she gathered up her equipment and got ready to go.

Just as she was picking up her new iPhone, which Zoya gave her, the device started to buzz.

"Who would calling me at this time?"

Najma thought, hastily picking up the phone and looking at the caller id.

"Zoya!" she squealed happily, and accepted the call.

"hullo!"


"hi Najma!" immediately just by hearing the two words, Najma knew something was wrong.

"What happened Zoya?"

She heard muffled voices, and the sound of someone crying.

"Zoya, are you crying?"

Najma was really worried.

"woh, Najm-a who, Phoopi-"

"What happened to Ammi?" she was panicking now.

What could've happened to her? Did she forget to take her stress tablets? Najma tried to search her brain for any possibilities of what could've happened.

But she wasn't expecting something that horrifying.

"Najma, Phoopi- she is no more."

"a-ammi?" Najma asked in a feeble voice, still not getting the grasp of what was happening.

"She is gone Najma, she died the day we dropped you off at the airport."

Phew! Done.

All done!!!

Comments pleej <3

Even if you wanna bash me 🤣

And if you want pms loves, just buddy me, but please comment :P

Oh, and go and listen to LTWYL.

Seriously. Its like, Eminem's best collab :P

And I am in love with Eminem.

I need one of him in mah life 🤣

See? I do listen music by someone other than one direction and ed sheeran 🤣

Buh-bye loves <3

<3

:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
C'mon! listen to Rihanna on the subway! find that USB & give us more!

I say it cuz i love it but i adored the first two chapters!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
OMG!!! 😲

Awesome!!!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Oh god, I feel so bad for Najma, she comes home to find out her mother's dead!
Everything is on Zoya now, Asad's broken and Najma is in shock, I hope she stays strong
...
Beautifully written
You stole my heart
Continue super fast & thanks for the PM <3
PS: Sorry I couldn't comment in the last two updates😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Awww...dis was a sad 1 :( i hope zoya be's strng enuf 2 handle asad...n najma r poor baby...god dis shuldn't hve happnd...she was so damn xcitd 4 her 1st dae...n nw she is literaly brkin dwn in trauma...

Tysm 4 the pm...amazingly written.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
You better find your USB. and CONTINUE..

yup thats a THREAT.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Poor Mr. Khan...I can only imagine what hes going through. And najma 😭
Find that USB girl and make these chapters longer lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
I'll comment when I stop crying. ;(
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is getting sadder and sadder by each update.
Asad blames himself for this
Zoya is now losing it
Najma is confronted with the truth
OHHH!!!! I feel like crying buckets and buckets.
Continue soon cutie
Want to know how Zoya handles everyone now
Even if your updates are sad, you are doing a great job with it. Making us feel their pain.
You have to get an applause for that.
Do I even need to say I love you and your updates? No definitely not.

Love,
Diya

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