AsYa FF: Beautiful Monster CHAPTER 5 PAGE 23 UP. - Page 11

Originally posted by: RMamsa

C'mon! listen to Rihanna on the subway! find that USB & give us more!

I say it cuz i love it but i adored the first two chapters!

Originally posted by: risingsea101

Oh god, I feel so bad for Najma, she comes home to find out her mother's dead!

Everything is on Zoya now, Asad's broken and Najma is in shock, I hope she stays strong

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Beautifully written

You stole my heart

Continue super fast & thanks for the PM <3

PS: Sorry I couldn't comment in the last two updates😆

Originally posted by: shloksuchi

Awww...dis was a sad 1 :( i hope zoya be's strng enuf 2 handle asad...n najma r poor baby...god dis shuldn't hve happnd...she was so damn xcitd 4 her 1st dae...n nw she is literaly brkin dwn in trauma...

Tysm 4 the pm...amazingly written.. :D

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

You better find your USB. and CONTINUE..

yup thats a THREAT.

Originally posted by: QH1fan

Poor Mr. Khan...I can only imagine what hes going through. And najma 😭
Find that USB girl and make these chapters longer lol

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

awsomeee

Originally posted by: havokhotline

I'll comment when I stop crying. ;(

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

This is getting sadder and sadder by each update.

Asad blames himself for this

Zoya is now losing it

Najma is confronted with the truth

OHHH!!!! I feel like crying buckets and buckets.

Continue soon cutie

Want to know how Zoya handles everyone now

Even if your updates are sad, you are doing a great job with it. Making us feel their pain.

You have to get an applause for that.

Do I even need to say I love you and your updates? No definitely not.

Love,

Diya

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Part 2 and 3-

Wow

Asad's feelings were well depicted

Awesome job

Finally Najma knows everything



Update soon