FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi982

This was such a cute part I loved the dance scene the phone scene and how zoya kept on getting irritated by asad I think tht was really cute especially when zoya finally gave up and said I LOVEYOU ASDA!!!!!!

OHMYGOD PLZZZ UNDATE SOON!!!!!!


thanks dear, will update within two hours...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god! Very lovely update. Loved it very much. And the code "I LOVE YOU ASAD" it was so good. Once again very nice update & waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amanrj

Oh god! Very lovely update. Loved it very much. And the code "I LOVE YOU ASAD" it was so good. Once again very nice update & waiting for the next one.


thanks a lot dear... will update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all.thanks for liking previous part... here is the next one. hope you all will like it...

Part-24

At dinner , all were enjoying when Nazma asked Ayaan, bhaijaan, what's the plan for tomorrow?

Tomorrow, we will go for a picnic on lake side nearby……… and one more thing, the lake is in jungle… you will enjoy natural beauty there… and there will be night stay in the huts near lake……

That will be really fun,said Nuzzrat with excitement……..

All had dinner and normal light conversations during dinner …. Still the dinner was going on when suddenly zoya stood up to go….

what happened beta, asked shirin…..

nothing ammi….i have to make urgent call to appi… she said giving a look towards Asad. These days whether they were talking or not but Asad could understand looking on her face…. and her sudden pale face was letting him know clear there was some problem….

she was feeling nausea while eating…Zoya walked to her room and washroom, and was vomiting, there Asad finished his food and followed zoya to the room….

he knocked the door of washroom, zoya, zoya are you ok?

she didn't reply… while Asad was a bit tense as doctor had stopped her from traveling and today had been a hectic day for her…

After a few minutes, there was complete silence, he again knocked the door, but could not get any reply… his heart was beating fast, if there is something wrong?

Finally he pushed the door hard breaking down the lock…… he saw zoya was lying unconscious on the floor…..

He screamed Zoya…., took her into his arms and laid her on the bed… and sprinkled water on her face… she got a bit consciousness… and screamed with pain….. ahaaa…..

Zoya, are you ok? Asad held her close to him… he could see a tear dropping from corner of her eye….

He wrapped his arm round her, slowly wiped her tear…… caressing her face. she closed her eyes with pain…….

Are…..are you ok?

I am feeling pain in my abdomen….. finally zoya spoke forgetting all their fights and differences keeping her head on his shoulder…….he tapped her back.. don't worry zoya, I am with you here, Asad said taking her into a hug. soon he could feel zoya's complete weight on his body……. while Asad was still caressing her hair…… she took a bit relaxed and tried to be away from Asad.. Asad gave her space…she got up to washroom for change…As she got up from the bed, again she was about to fall, when Asad held her tight from her waist……

Mr. Khan, leave me….

No zoya, you are weak enough… I will accompany you……

I am going to change Mr. Khan, and you can't accompany me…..

but you are not able to move zoya…..

that is not your problem…. I am strong enough to take care of my baby and myself…saying this, she was again unconscious……… he was really afraid, finally he called her doctor and told her complete situation…

Mr. Khan, nausea is not a big problem but falling unconscious every time is symbol of weakness as well as mental tension, ……She told him the medicines……, I had already advised these medicines to Mrs. Khan, these must be with her, one more thing, I have felt she is a bit upset…this may be dangerous for her and your baby. try to keep her happy and calm………

Asad was really upset on listening all this, zoya had never allowed him to accompany to doctor in last three visits…. he was shocked on listening all this….. He checked zoya's bag…thankfully, he got the medicines…. again bring zoya to consciousness and gave her medicines…. with the effect of medicines, she felt asleep immediately……

Asad covered her with sheet, he knew, she must be feeling uncomfortable due to jeans… he opened the bag and took her night suit, thinking what to do…… finally he decided to go ahead…

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Zoya got up early in the morning, found herself sleeping in arms of Asad……. her head was on Asad's shoulder while Asad's one hand was holding her tight closer to his heart as if he will never let her go away from himself……

Zoya tried to move a bit without disturbing him, while Asd woke up with a shock with her small movement , Zoya….are you ok na?

Yes, Mr. Khan, she said politely remembering how much he helped her a night…while Asad turned a bit to take more sleep as he could not sleep complete night looking for zoya..

As she tried to wake up, she checked her clothes were changed.

She shouted ….. Mr. Khan…

what happened? Asad woke up in a hurry…

how dare you?

what? he was shocked unknowing why she is shouting in the morning…

I said how dare you?

zoya kya keh rhi ho tum? mujhe lkuch samaj nahi aa rha?

how could you touch me without asking me? you again cheated me?

but what has happened zoya?

how could you change my clothes at night? how could you do so?

Zoya, listen to me…

No Mr. Khan, you listen to me, you are a person, who always take benefit of situation…

Zoya , you are completely mad. think what ever yo want to think…….. saying this, annoyed Asad went out of the room. when Humaira came there. good morning appi……… how are you feeling now? Asad bhaijaan had asked me to bring lemon water for you. it will be good for you…..

Humiara , I am not in the mood to talk dear….

but appi, last night,you were not ok na? apko pta hai Asad bhaijaan kitna darr gye they? he called your doctor, apko medicine di…midnight tak wo apka hath pakd kar baithe rhe apko sehlate huye ke ap acha mehsoos karein…..phir mujhe bula kar laye ke main apko fresh kar sakoon ta ke ap disturb na ho, I changed your clothes.. aur pta nahi uske baad bhi wo soya ya apke pass hi bathe jagte rahe apki care karte……

tum raat ko ayi thi mere room mein? Zoya was shocked…

Han, Asad bhaijaan had called me to change your clothes and make you a bit relaxed…

and zoya was in tears on listening……. aur maine Asad…..i mean Mr. Khan ko itna kuch suna diya….. thanks huma…… zoya said smiling….

Anytime appi. lekin ap ye lemon water pi lijiye aur fresh ho jayiye, humein picnic ke liye nikalna hai jaldi…

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After getting ready, Zoya reached in the living area, she found all had left and she was alone there, when Asad came form the outer gate and held her hand bag from her without even speaking a single word….

Mr. Khan.called zoya.it was first time since twenty days after their marriage , she had called Asad herself…..

Asad smiled to himself and turned back…hummm….

Infect, I …… I just wanted to say sorry for my behavior today. I just mistook it….and……

Its all right zoya. but in last twenty days, we are staying together, did I ever tried to be close to you except when it was not urgent? zoya lowered her head…

Asad held her hand in his both hands….. Zoya, I love you.. even at that night what happened between us , was never a mistake, wo hum dono ka pyar tha, but I swear even after that I didn't even thought so about you…. my love was never selfish….

Yes, your love was never selfish, I know… but it was transferable to someone else? Zoya asked a question with tears…….

Asad lowered his head… zoya, I thought , you love him and moreover, he is my brother…..

So you chose your brother over your love na? and moreover you thought so? but did you asked me even once … ok leave,u never ask me anything… just judge……. but did you even bother to know, what do I feel?

Asad held zoya from her shoulders and brought her closer… Zoya, please leave this anger, this is not good for you and our baby…… and give me another chance… I assure, I will not leave you ever….

I know, you will never leave me Mr. Khan and never yu had already, you have always stood by me… even when you didn't like me…. but how could you take such big step this time?

please forget everything zoya.soon everything will be fine…… if not for me, then at least for our baby……

you know Mr. Khan, I was in no mood to stay here but I am staying just for my baby. because i don't want my baby to feel absence of its father always and live a life like me..What if something happen to me tomorrow, my baby will have at least its father and will not be orphan like me………

Zoya… Asad kept his hand on her lips holding her tight…………. never even dare to say so… I can't loose anyone from you……. you two are my life…….i will never let you go……. zoya was looking into his eyes, something melt inside her heart seeing so much pain on Asad's face, the same pain she had seen when he had cried for his father one day…… of loosing someone very close to his heart……she slowly moved away and sat int the car to go to picnic spot….

Asad also kept quite while driving but driving very carefully and looking at zoya in between for her comfort….

As they reached there……..there were three to four small huts near the lake, and all were resting there…….

Nikhat said smiling…. bhabhijaan, aap logon ko goa hi jana chahiye tha?

Kyon kya huya?

Naihi……… infect hum sab kabab mein haddiyan bane huye hain.isi liye ap log baar baar gayab ho jate ho……… and all were laughing while zoya was blushing on listening……

Asad went to ayaan……

Bhaijaan how is the situation? asked ayaan…….

Its under a bit control… asad said smiling…..

fikar mat kijiye bhaijaan, humare hote sab thik ho jayega………

All were havig fun for the whole day, they played games, sang songs, went for boating… and had complete fun…..

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In the evening, Nazma came there pulling her both brothers…… bhaijaan, ayiye na, dekhiye, kitna acha mausam hai, barish hone wali hai…

They went there near the lake, clouds were all over the sky, all the girls were enjoying there talking while elders had still gone for boating in the lake when suddenly rain started……the girls were dancing in the rain …. Ayaan too joined them and was dancing with them while Asad was looking at zoya from distance……

When Humaiara came and pulled Asad too in the rain…

Humaiara, I don't like rain..

but bhaijaan, its too good here, please come…. she took Asad to rain……

Zoya started sneezing and shivering due to cold…..

bhabhi aap thik to hain na? asked nazma….

haan Nazma main thik hun…. bus thodi thand lag rhi hai..

bhaijaan, ap inhe yhan se ander le chaliye…… she said to Asad….

Asad took a shawl from there, covered zoya and took her inside the hut….. all were also there , Asad took towel, dried her face as well hair……. a hesitation, a shyness all had become secondary for Asad when it came to zoya.. He had forgotten anyone else is there too. he was just concerned to his wife and his baby……

slowly all left the hut and only two of them were left….. he checked she was suffering from fever….. he started shouting on zoya…... Zoya, how can you be so careless? when you knew you are not ok since night, to tum barish mein gyi hi kyon? agar apne bare mein nahi to atleast hamare baby ke bare mein to soch lena chahiye tha………….

Mr. Khan…… wo main……suddenly she shivered with cold…….

Zoya... Asad held her tight into a hug……. I am sorry, I would not have shouted on you….he placed a soft kiss on Zoya's head…..

Ye kis bache ki baat kar rhe ho tum Asad, Abhi 20 days tum logon ke nikah ko huye hain aur Zoya? dishad left her sentence incomplete standing behind Asad, while both Asad and Zoya were shocked………….

Note:- Hey all beautiful and handsome readers, i just want to tell you, i will be busy from tomorrow onwards, so i may not get enough time to give updates... infect i wanted to finish this FF by today but as the story came into my mind and went on wwriting forgetting my time line... but will try to give updates, if not five per week as usual , will try to give two per week... thanks for being patient enough to read my updates...


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part.
update when you get time
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dear. Will wait for your updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
it ws a bang!! Updt soon cnt wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
nysh prt.. luvd de new carng side of asad...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

nysh prt.. luvd de new carng side of asad...


Asad had always been caring but now he is becoming a bit open to show his care for his wife and baby...

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