FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 17

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

amazing!

sry like tab nt working

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

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First and the foremost thing, Cheer up girl!!!

Why are you sounding so dull??? This is definitely affecting your imagination skills dear. 'It's said when you're sad, the whole world will be sad.'

I'm an honest person. I speak straight. My words may hurt you but now as you are saddened; your brain thinks less. Affecting your performance. You seem to be losing that charm. Not expected from a good writer.

Very little is needed to make a happy life; it is all within yourself, in your way of thinking."

The story line is perfect and so is the execution but it somewhere reflects your impasse. Cheer up girl!! You are doing a wonderful job with this. Don't let yourself down. Don't think you're incapable. I know you can do it and you've did it. Why the fear then? I'm with you, we readers are with you. Stay positive and write from your heart. This forum is my family and if I see one of my family member upset; I can't stand that. We can't afford to loose writers.Nah! Never!

Success and failure. We think of them as opposites, but they are really not. There are companions. The hero and the sidekick.

Please smile for me; for your fellow readers, for your sake, for the forum. I want to see your 32 teeth and as long as you don't show me that, I won't be leaving you

This is exclusively for you

Now coming to your update.

Poor Zoe. It was her mother

Al evidences lost ??

Now what are they gonna do?

Asad that's not fair man! First you said so many things about her and did't notice her

Precap: Something shocking? What's it? Please make it fast and remember what I said dil se likho, dimag se nahi.

Sorry if any of my words hurt you. Never intended to do so.

See ya in the next update

Before coming up with your next update, show me how you smile. See I smile like this

Love,

Diya

Originally posted by: scarletgirl

hey no dnt think this way u r a v good writer...im positive ull get good respnse nw...and as fot the chap it was gr8 waiting to c wt shock is in store for us...thnkz 4 d pm dear

Originally posted by: jeenia123

just loved your views Diya...you are amazing, you really made me smile again, yup, i was depressed just due to this FF... yaar, it takes me two to three hours to complete one part... but don't find anybody giving me proper feedback...so i was totally sad... for my last update, i had to give one complete night to get the things into proper timelines so that i may give proper justification to connect the twenty years/seventeen years mastery and to connect the past of zoya with all that... but response? almost nil...
It makes anybody depress... I know the struggle dear. When I myself sit to write anything, it takes me so much just to think what to write and comes the writing part then proof reading. It is difficult. Ya! but not impossible
I wrote this part very short and really halfheartedly... thinking to continue or not... but really i continued only for those who read... I was always with you, am always with you and will be always with you.
you know i am not afraid of failure but we need success in life too...Don't get disheartened. People tend to ignore fresh writers at the start but when they run behind you. This is common. It's we who have to prove that yes we can do it in spite of the odds. And you have that potential. Who knows in the future, you become the top writers of India or even the world😉 Stay calm. Appreciate what you get. You will be a winner at the end. Write for yourself and not for the world.
i love to write, so i write but if someone gives you proper response, it becomes more and more enjoyable... Don't worry. You will get.
I must say, in my first FF in another show, only one person was there, he used to give me proper feedback... and he was the only one to respond, i was writing just for him and he improved my skill very much that my second FF was too much appreciated... See that's great!! Look at the positive side
thats why i am saying, i don't need only positive response, tell me my weakness too that i may improve myself... I'll help you but still I too am not a good writer myself. Wrote only three works till now. Wanna read them???😳
thanks so much dear. just loved your views...Awww...

Originally posted by: asyaforlife