AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hey ...

Brilliant updates ...

You have beautifully written AsYa's emotions, thoughts and feelings ... 👏

Love the effect both have on each other 😉

Both even dream of each other 😛

Najma suggested a great idea 😳

Dilshad even started loving the idea of Zoya being her D.I.L ...

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Yuks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

This part was adorable. I loved it!

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I want to adopt you.

So i can hug you all day for writing this FF! :)

Absolutely brilliant stuff. :)

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Andrea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Exquisite writing...Wow! 👏

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poojdc87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Great story so far! I think your interpretation of Asad and Zoya's POV is spot on. You've managed to capture their emotions perfectly. I especially liked the scene after Zoya's dream where she thought Asad's appearance was an omen warning her not to get him involved. I'm looking forward to reading where you go with that. Also, how exciting is this potential wedding? I can't wait for your next update!

Pooja

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grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

really really nice please do update soon!!!

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Oishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Love this FF... It will be fun to read..about Asad Zoya's wedding and their married life <3

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Arnavdewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

"But most importantly, she made him feel. " ur writing is flawless. now the story...character's emotional side very well potrayed.

and now we wait...

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blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

wow 👏

my eyes never left the screen, and they groaned that it ended, i didn't even notice how long that was. 😳😳

Amazing. you have sculpted this FF into the show story line immaculately.

i cannot ask for a longer update, because a reader is always a hungry wolf and the writer is Human too. 😳

anyways do update soon, i am going to watch out for this one everyday.

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hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

read both of them in one go and I must say, AWESOME, AWESOME chaps ! : )

awesome plot + detailing. Loved how long the updates turned out to be .. wish it continued .. couldn't get enough !

I'm so excited for the next update. Keep up the detailing along with the great imagery and build up of the characters. Enjoyed the quite humorous wedding convo.. I thought he'd either spit out his coffee or she choking on her food .. ha, Love Dilshii & these two are SO made for each other.

... can't wait for more ! Fab. job !

Edited by hilly - 12 years ago