AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

The bathroom scene loved it.. then the cute babies cuddling each other to sleep. Thank god , dilshad didn't wake them up.. And then the awkwardness.. Loved it.. Could imagine all of it... Loved the update. Thanks for the pm. Do continue soon.

Dee

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

i simply cant believe i never came across this FF earlier!!!!!😲

dr this is a flawless piece of work...i read all the updates in one go n yearning for more now!!!!👏😳

i simply love the way u describe Asad and zoya's feeling..their personalities, personal inner conflicts n everything that goes along!!!

their unknown feelings for each other...the awkwardness...is wow!!!⭐️❤️

i hope they realise that they are in love with each other soon!!!😉

please dr please pm me for the next update!!!

cant wait to read it!!!!👍🏼

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Edited by Linsie - 12 years ago

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Sammy

@sammy4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

awesome part dear

loved it

asya should not give najma such shocks...she has her exams,these things will affect her mind...least she keeps thinking about her dearest bhaijaan n zoya...toh phir paper kaisi likhegi?😆

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

How did I miss this delightful piece of writing all these days--brilliant! I love reading about peoples thought process and the repartee and you hav edone justice to all this - yhank you.---please update fast!

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Holy moly, Ur back! You know how much I love this story? Like alot. I missed you and this story!

I'm going to Reserve this spot for now but really you need to publish books! You write marvelous!😳

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

😃really nice ff dear

u write very well i just came across dis ff n readed all

⭐️ parts in one go as it was so Interesting

Will wait for d next part...👏👏

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Oh you up-dated after sooo long...Haha, I had to read the whole story again to understand...But again that was a beautiful up-date...Hope you will up-date soon...😊