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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

yay!!!ankie is bk wid her bootiphool os🥳
kya naam dia hai os ka main tu pura shut up ho gai😛
da chand wala sher ws awesome-oye jhalli itne dur se bhi kabhi dikhta hai😆...main toh kehti hu chanda maama dikhta hai na agar apke samne ek dazzling sa nawjawan khada ho(i'm reffering 2 asad hehe) toh uske roshni se sab kuch dikhta hai😳
tune likha asad ko tang karna zo k lie tonic hai
maine arz kia hai wah wah kya logic hai👏
& OMG!asad & shayari...mera dil toh ekdum gulzar gulzar ho gaya🤣
oyye hoyye zoya u r so lucky-mrs asad ahmad khan sirf naam hi kafi hai☺️
on a whole tu hamesha mera dil khush kar deti hai islie tujhe ek jadu ki jhappi🤗

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: blueflames
well i cannot call it an OS, because i couldn't really figure out what happened earlier or what both of them were up to. 😆😆

Dilemma Appiie Meri. A constant force that makes you think over and over again what you read, what it might have been, what was going on, why it was. 😆 😆

its more of a casual dialogue between two people, and only they can tell us whats with them. its quite a different style of writing. you know usually its a 3rd person writing, or 1st person, it has thoughts n assumptions. this did not have any of that.

Yess!! BINGO!! this did not have any of them, it makes you think, what is going on what will happen next what might have happened what are the reactions what makes them do this. Actually i couldn't bring it out well, it was supposed to be more ornate. I suck at that. 😕

i felt more like a tree standing where they were constantly bickering, i could only hear them, and only interpret half of what they might have actually meant. 😉

😆 😆 😆 😆

anyways taking only the dialogues in consideration, its good. not as bad as you have already declared it. its different. 😃

A bit of apprehensiveness takes over me, maybe cause this is a first attempt But glad you liked it. 🤗 I SERIOUSLY HAD NO EXPECTATIONS FROM THIS ONE 😆 😆

sorry i just murdered it in the first comment only😳

🤣 🤣

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Shruti.M-
firstly, acchi baat hai ki asad ne 'aap' se 'tum' bolke address kiya!!
secondly, the shayri...just superb!!!👏
So totally mujhe Mr&Mrs.Khan and ankie ka OS QUBOOL HAI👍🏼

You make me go HAaaiyeee!!! 😆 😆 😆

well yea, Asad jab zyada pyaar jatata hai, he uses TUM and ZOOO---YAAAHH :P orelse AAAPP se hi kaam chala leta hai 😆 😉

Shukriyaa Shukriyaa Shukriyaa!! 😆 😃 😃

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Nisbah

@-MitwaIshqPe-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

HAHA!! 🤣🤣

Looks like u have all the time in the world Ankie

Loved Asad shayri 😆

Mujhe aap ki OS Qubool Hai

Edited by Nisbahx - 12 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: snehatalk
OMG!!! What the hell was that🤣🤣...You are so funny...bahaut free time milta hain kya?
Though the argument was cute in a maddening way...and the shayeri...just like Zoya's...chalo lage rahoi👍🏼

Yaar my exams finished. My colg is over for the year 2012-2013, my internship again starts from last week of April. Hence YAAA!! Mere pass hamesha se hi bahut bahut bahut time rehta hai LOLZZ 🤣 jokes apart I know it wasnt worth it, But still, hope you enjoyed at least reading it 😃

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Nisbahx
HAHA!! 🤣🤣
Looks like u have all the time in the world Ankie

Goshh that is soo truee!! Still i run out of time 🤣

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

and did i really forget to comment on the shayari?? uff only the chand wala shair got across me. 😆😆
cannot comment on Asad's shayari, because bechare ka first time hai 😆🤣🤣

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

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Okay, I gotta agree with blueflames! What's her name again?😲 Sorry if you've already told me. Blame it on my bad memory! XP

Now, This was fun to read! Most of it was trying to figure what on Earth actually happened that they are bickering like this!! 😕

But... But, there's always a but! 😆 But it was a nice attempt, and I have come across such stuff. But not often. Rarely.

It looked more like reading mails! You know, when we chat or message our buddies, without emoticons, this is what happens. The way the statement has been delivered is more of a mystery to me, without their actions or even expressions, specified.

Apologies, if I... *cough*... thhoda.. you know... critique hogaya toh! 😳

But Asad Miyaa actually did that?? Shayari?? *faints* 🤪 HAILAAH!!!! Yeh kab dekhne ko milega onscreen??

Heehee... Anku Mallika? I missed you!!! 🤗

Am missing Sammu also!😭

Annie

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: veenisha
omg its really gud
loved reading it
good work dear :D

Really?? Trust me i have NO HOPES from it 😃

Thank you soo much for your kind words. 😊

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

cutness ki daadi amma aur shayari ki president😆😆🤗
tere jaisi koi nahi yaha...tere pe hum kurbaan😳

tere os humesha itne cute hote kyun hai aur teri shayari toh baapre😆.face pe sabse badi wali chodiwali smile aa jati hai❤️

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