|AsYa-FF| ~::Hellspawn-Warped Angels::~(Chap8Pg30) - Page 7

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

Wow! I am going to give u a looong comment so you better update quickly next time. This is such an engaging and a rare plot. Thank God I read it after you wrote the initial chapters otherwise I would have died out of suspense.

O Man! Zoe's father killed Rashid! Shit! That means Asad is in search of Zoe's father :9

Oh No! But that would be fun! 😃

Ideas? you're asking us for ideas? Who can think about such an intriguing and strange plot.. Alone you! Now you're in my list of favourite writers!

One thing disturbed me.. In the character sketch you had written that Zoya was an efficient CBI officer. She gets what she wants by hook or by crook and this chapter contradicted that fact. It seems she has solved no cases and landed up in failure always. Please explain me that part in a PM 😆

ANd yes! Next part! SOOn! Means SOON! PM Me 😳

P.S - If I'd be in your place, I would have made Asad and Zoya work together in a case.. Maybe because both of them are on a similar person. Maybe Zoe is afer a Don and Asad wants to kill the same man just to remove competition. Just an idea. it sucks though😆 M sure you can think about something better and interesting 😆

I saw him, the Greek God sitting with all his glory and drinking his coffee. And as if he could feel my presence he looked up and our eyes met. It felt as if it were only us two just like in the club.

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Chapter - 4

~Zoya~

I clutched my tray tightly and sat on a table opposite to him, he looked at me from beneath his lashes and smirked at me. I looked down at my sandwich and chewed it silently until I felt a big fat drop of water on my back. I looked up and it started raining suddenly big fat drops of rain pouring on both of us.

The sky had turned so dark it almost felt like evening, he didn't get up waiting for my reaction. But I didn't give him any reaction I kept sitting there drenched to the skin. Two can play this game Adonis, I thought. He smirked again his eyes playful and for the first time I saw a dimple in his cheek, and suddenly his ruggedly handsome features turned adorably cute.

My fingers longed to push his hair out of his which were sticking to his forehead, even though he was wearing a proper 3 piece I could still make out his broad shoulders and muscles. He was perfect. Maybe a bit too perfect. He got up suddenly and then turned and walked away my eyes searched for him frantically. I got up and looked for him, up over here we both were alone and it was dark it was hard to make out whether he was still there or had left.

My heart sank, he had left I sighed loudly and was about to leave, when someone grabbed my arm and pulled me. I was suddenly against someone's rock hard all too familiar warm chest. I looked up and I saw his greyish-blue eyes, I could still make out those heavenly eyes in this darkness as though they sparkled like diamonds.

"What's your name?" He said, and man his voice made me weak in my knees, how could someone have that affect on me? How is this even possible? This tension between us?

"Zoya" I said softly, and his eyes brightened suddenly.

"Zoya." He said softly, my name sounded so beautiful in his voice, and as if he had heard that thought of mine he spoke my name again and again as if trying to memorize it.

He took my hand and gently played with my fingers and then with one swift movement he pulled out the elastic band from my hair leaving my damp hair open and sticking to the back of my neck.

"I like it this way...it makes you such a temptation..you know forbidden fruit is the sweetest?" He said while his index finger traced my cheek bones, and I closed my eyes and nodded my head in a yes.

"You are that forbidden fruit Zoya, so tempting and within my reach..yet so far." He said his eyes filled with desire so intense it sent a shiver down my spine. I was falling in love with a total stranger, who might be dangerous but the temptation was too hard to resist.

"Kiss me." I blurted out, not once regretting it.

"With pleasure." He said and gave me that dimpled smile, and then his lips descended on mine, so lightly I almost might have imagined them, but they were very much there lighter than a moth's wing and softer than velvet.

He broke apart too soon, and I whimpered in irritation and he gave me a lop-sided smile once he saw my expression.

"Temptation, remember?" He said and tapped my forehead gently, and in that moment I was sure I was in love with him. It might've been too soon to come up with this conclusion but it felt right, just to stand this close to him, I felt wanted and protected.

He gently kissed my forehead, and then suddenly we heard a loud scream from inside the cafe.

~Asad~

She looked at me shyly, with her tray clutched tightly I could almost see the knuckles sticking out, I looked at her and she gulped and chewed her sandwich slowly and thoughtfully her eyes never leaving my face.

And then all of a sudden it started raining, and we were both drenched in no time, I looked at her again and she looked like an angel even while she was drenched to the core. Her kohl was messed up because of the rain and it made her even more ravishing than the night at the club.

She was beautiful and my heart gave a lurch, my finger longed to touch her high cheek bones, hold her close once more to feel her warmth. She was waiting for my reaction waiting for what would I do next. We were both alone in the terrace and the waves of the sea were crashing loudly against the shore. I got up suddenly and she wasn't waiting for this and took a long route and stood beside an open door from where I could see her clearly.

She got up and searched for me frantically and she was standing so close to me I could almost smell her perfume. And then I reached out and pulled her close to me, and I felt that electric connection again this time it was more stronger and more prominent. Her eyes were suddenly filled with relief on finding me, as if she had thought that I would leave her. I could not now, even if I wanted too, she was a part of me now.

Even though we had hardly met 2 times I remembered every inch of her, like her eyes were the color of mocha and her skin was flawless and so soft my fingers didn't want to leave it, the curve of her hips everything. This was the first time I had noticed a girl so intently she was beautiful and I wanted her to be mine, only mine.

"What's your name?" I asked her and she shyly looked up from underneath her eyelashes.

"Zoya." she said softly.

"Zoya." I repeated softly, she had such a beautiful name, and it did justice to her, I kept repeating her name like a mantra, just to memorize it.

I took her hand and gently played with her fingers and then I noticed that her hair was tied at the nape of her neck. In that moment I had a flash of what she looked like in the club and I pulled out the elastic band from her hair, and my she looked every inch of a goddess.

"I like it this way...it makes you such a temptation..you know forbidden fruit is the sweetest?" I said and traced her cheek bones with my index finger and she nodded her head in a yes, with her lips parted and exhaled slowly.

"You are that forbidden fruit Zoya, so tempting and within my reach..yet so far." I said my heart filling with desire for her, her eyes mirroring the same intense feeling, her lips looked so plump and kissable I had to resist the urge to crash my lips onto hers.

"Kiss me." She said, allowing me and I didn't hesitate.

"With pleasure." I said and smiled at her and then gently descended my lips on her, controlling myself so as to not hurt her, her lips were soft and tasted like strawberry. I broke apart before I lost my patience and would've pinned her then and there and snog her senseless.

She whimpered when I pulled apart too soon, I gave her a smile when I saw her expression.

"Temptation, remember?" I said, and tapped her forehead gently, and gently placed a feather light kiss on her temple. I cupped her face and looked into her eyes, it was not just the desire to want her that drew me to her, it was something else entirely else.Love.

And then we heard an ear-piercing scream from inside the cafe.

Hope you liked this update and this is a tad bit longer than the previous one! 😛

R&R! 😉

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

Wow! I am going to give u a looong comment so you better update quickly next time. This is such an engaging and a rare plot. Thank God I read it after you wrote the initial chapters otherwise I would have died out of suspense.

O Man! Zoe's father killed Rashid! Shit! That means Asad is in search of Zoe's father :9

Oh No! But that would be fun! 😃

Ideas? you're asking us for ideas? Who can think about such an intriguing and strange plot.. Alone you! Now you're in my list of favourite writers!

One thing disturbed me.. In the character sketch you had written that Zoya was an efficient CBI officer. She gets what she wants by hook or by crook and this chapter contradicted that fact. It seems she has solved no cases and landed up in failure always. Please explain me that part in a PM 😆

ANd yes! Next part! SOOn! Means SOON! PM Me 😳

P.S - If I'd be in your place, I would have made Asad and Zoya work together in a case.. Maybe because both of them are on a similar person. Maybe Zoe is afer a Don and Asad wants to kill the same man just to remove competition. Just an idea. it sucks though😆 M sure you can think about something better and interesting 😆

Originally posted by: Ishaaxx

Thanks for the PM!

And What A mindblowing twist ;)

Loved it!

Originally posted by: Kaya13

That was absolutely FANTASTIC...U hav to continue asap!!!

Originally posted by: Surish