Asya SS: When reAl!ty.knocks..(updated pT pg 32 - Page 6

Originally posted by: aditi061

Hey di *hugs* great start. Would be waiting or next update...
P.S. Di i have my boards in 15 days so no comments or like as i won't have time to read fictions but that doesn't aap mujhe pm nae karoge. I want pm of evry single update

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

This was like... Wow

Amazing start dear and brilliant concept

Loved this emotional attachment between AsYa

Just can't wait to read more.

I usually stalk all FFs/SSs/OSs and I don't know how I missed this one. 😭

But thank you for dropping a scrap😳😳 That was so sweet of you🤗

Update soon😳😃 Too excited😃

And also pm me when you update😳

Originally posted by: Rin03

Hey dear,

thank you for telling me about your fic :) I really like your idea. Its quite good n interesting, cant wait to see where you go with this story. :)

Hopefully will get to read this - excited - since I know you have a healthy attitude.

Originally posted by: enrique

Hey dear ur comment inspired me more 😃 Awww... That was good to know😳😳

i am just fluttered to see ur comment 😳 Hehe😳😆

definatly will update soon and let u know about it So sweet of you

and will pm for sure 😊

BTW I'm diya😳😳

Originally posted by: Laila2009

Hopefully will get to read this - excited - since I know you have a healthy attitude.

Laila

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

BTW I'm diya😳😳

Recap : asad heard zoya's heart out and learned about her truth ..

First of all I want to thank every one who liked my piece of work and commented and inspired me to continue so here's the next part for u guys

I would like to make my reading clear as many cannot understand hindi the sentence mentioned in {} are translation of it and

[ ]contain asad's thoughts

( ) contains zoya's thoughts

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Zoya was still and tears were running , the guilt of hurting a person pure like the bud of a flower and ripping her heart by abusing her upbringing made asad so crazy and he thought to himself [ until and unless I rectify my mistakes and until she finds her father I wouldn't leave her side because I am the one who have hurt her heart to the core ]asad just walked slowly towards her without making noise he wanted to see the cheerful zoya whose silly shiray's made every one laugh there heart out …he then realized what mistakes he has done in past and he just stood close enough to her and was observing her carefully he wanted to console her be her friend and make her feel the feeling of 'ill be right by your side' ..he slowing in an heavy voice called her out

A: miss farookhi ( when she heard her name she just jolt in her place and sprung in shock , when she came out of her stance she open her fist and the picture flew away and she fell in side the house and asad caught her when their eyes met he could clearly see the puffiness under them and they went red because of hours of crying ,even his condition wasn't any differ , when realization stuck their heart that they were in each others arms they free themselves and stood straight an unknown awkward feeling took place between them and a killing silent ..[asad thought : I should talk to her …may be she just want to …this thoughts were interrupted by her ]

Z: aap yaha Mr khan ?{how come you're here}(she was bewildered to see his facial expression dropped down)

A: ha …ha,,.vo mai paanni le ne aya tha …{yes I came to grab some water}.[he thought he should just straightly ask her ]

Z :ohk……[he thought how much she try to keep her self in normal state ]

A: aap yaha kya kar rahi thi?{what were you doing?}(when this question arose the worst realization brushed her mind that where is the photo which was in her hand)

Zoya didn't answer the question and indulge in finding it she panicked and was worried about it and asad little did he notice what she was up to ….

A: miss farookhi aap kya dhoond rahi hai ?{what are you searching }[ he was now tensed that what wrong did he do again]

(Zoya had tones of tears streaming down her checks ….she spoke in broken voice) Mr…kh..an……v.o.o..o photo [ he was hell shocked that the picture which was more that her life ,was lost and a feeling of care was creeping in his heart he went close to her …and asked in concern voice] kon se photo ?{which photo}

Z:( her tears never stopped and now she was breathing heavily )[seeing in her in this state he got more worried ]Mera …abu ke …{my fathers pic}..(she realized that what she mentioned in front of him ) please Mr . Khan vo merii ….( she was now fumbling out of pain )[ to pull her out of this state he shouts on her ]miss zoya farookhi …hosh mai aye !{miss farookhi come out of the trance }[he caught he slightly from her shoulders to bring her out of this frincing pain ](zoya placed her both hands on his and spoke with a heavily painful voice which was an indication of her heart break ) mr. khan please …mujhe vo tasveer dhoond kar de dejaye …pplease mr .khan vo mere liya bohat assis hai {please find that picture its really important for me}(a warm tear fell on asad hand which was on hers )

A:[ with a confident voice and tears beaming from his eyes as well he spoke ] trust me mai dhoond kar layunga ...{ I will find it….}(zoya saw a complete blindfolded trust in his eyes and she hesitatingly trusting him)

Now both of them started finding the picture …asad was searching in the kitchen and he once had a glare at her and saw her breathing and panicking out of hurt …the stone wall around his heart started to crack and even he was wincing out of pain which he saw on her face .. .an half hour passed but there was no sign of picture now both came in center of the hall and faced each other …and asad spoke

A: I couldn't find here ….[ he was feeling like his heart was sinking deep by seeing her in such state and he couldn't even do anything ](a lone tear escaped from her eyes and she though that she could never find her father and this thought made her knees go week and she was feeling that her heart is beating more than the normal speed .. She could feel her head go bang -bang and she finally collapsed on the ground …) asad was standing 2 feet's away he came close to catch her but he was to late …she was on ground .. He sat on his knees close to her and tried to speak to her …but zoya took the opportunity and spoke first

Z: mera abu ke vo aakhri nishani thi mera paas …{that was the last thing which belong to my father}.(she shut her eyes in disbelieve that she lost the only single proof which could take her to her father )

A: a.a.p…[ he ran out of words and he just place a hand on her shoulder to console her and then he went into flash back what ever he heard each word what she spoke few hours ago and when he disturbed her how she fell .. His mind just stuck the fact that she fell in and possibility of the picture to fly could be outside the house …]miss….farookhi (this forced her to open her eyes and look at him) vo tasveer to {that pic}…( only the name of the picture bought a ray of hope in her eyes her eyes were shining with tears of hope ) vo to bahar gir gayi thi ….i mean jab aap andre giri to vo picture …{that fell out side when you fell in side that flew out of the house} (that was enough for her she didn't waste even a minute and got up and rushed out side the house in search of the picture leaving a drum stuck asad behind)

A: vo aapne abu se itna pyaar karti hai .. Aur maine use kitna kuch nahi kaha {she loves her father so much and abused her to extend}[ he also rushed as some where in corner of his heart he didn't wanted her be leave alone ]

Both were out of the house it was mid night and he saw a desperate zoya in search of the picture like a Child, who have lost a precious toy…he also started looking for it, it was a bad weather cold chilling breeze were gushing from north and he stood in disappointment and looked at her she was looking in all directions when he saw she was shivering because of this chilled wind ..he then noticed the clothes which were drying out in lawn he went and took his jacket and went near her and placed the jacket on her shoulders .. She just turned behind to face him again with painful eyes questioning him he spoke..

A: cover your self or else you might fall ill …[ when he was doing so his eyes fell on the picture which was lying under a bush and he went close and picked up and said …] mil gayi{ I found it }

Zoya was smiling her million dollar smile with happy tears and when asad handed the picture to her he was feeling like a feeling of joy and empathy fluttered his heart …he was happy to see her smiling back like she use to before ….

Z: shukriya Mr.khan aap nahi jante anjane me aap ne mujhe kitni badi khushi de hai {thanks mr.khan you have no idea what happiness you gave me unconsciously}[his guilt was 1% less ..he thought at least he made her smile back ….](she place the picture close to her heart )

He thought to say the truth that he heard everything every single word and he do wanted to help and not hurt her anymore by hiding it ….he spoke in a low voice

A:anjane mai nahi {not unconsciously} (she heard this and her face drop down )I heard you talking to your self about your father ……[he thought he have hurt her and thought I should be ready ]

Z: (she came in her hyper active mode and said ) aap mujh par spy kar rahe the {you where spying on me}(his eyes popped out and she stared at him with the fluffy eyes )

A: aise nahi hai {its nothing like that}[ he hit his head and thought he wouldn't get a chance to speak but to his astonishment she allowed him to speak ] actually I saw you crying in pain so I ……[ he ran out of word and put his head down in shame ]

Z: aap jante hai Mr khan why I use to tell u that I can feel your pain(she moved forward and started to move in the house and he followed ….) because I know what's the pain to be away from our father [ this made him realized that when ever she said she could fell she actually did ….]

Now they both came in the hall and zoya sat on the sofa and was thinking about the picture he went in kitchen and made 2 cups of coffee and placed it in front of her face to break her thoughts and bring her to reality …

Z: aap ne banayi hai {you made it }(she remember last time he made one for her )[ even he kept the experience of last time in mind and made this coffee and said her ]

A: don't worry miss farookhi maine 2 spoons extra sugar is mai dali hai{ I have tput 2 spoons sugar}

This thought made her smile by curling her lips, both were drinking coffee and he placed his cup on the table and he noticed the picture which she placed on the table and he picked it and when he looked at it carefully he stood up … in shock

That's it for today guys …..

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Precap : kuy hua asad bechain jaane ke liya zoya ka atteit

Aisa kya hai jo jod raha hai in done ke taar

{ why is asad hell bent to know here past , what's the string which is tying them together }

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