OS: Qubool Hai (page-1& 3)

Hey all , this is Jeenia here and this is my First OS in Qubool Hai' watching the show from very first day and I am totally in love with this show. so decided to write something in the show''it will complete in two parts as it became littlebit long'.. here it goes first part''..

Asad cuts telephone and confronts Zoya.Ms. Farukhi, apke dimag ke sath sath apki ankhen bhi khrab hain kya? can't you see I am talking on phone?

Zoya-Mr. Khan main wahi to apko batane ki koshish kar rahi hun, that goon was not from mangalpur''..

Asad looked at her in surprise. how can you be so sure?

cause Mr. Khan, Mariyam was laying on ground but he pointed the gun towards Phuphi and not to Mariyam..

So he had came to shoot Ammi? Asad was shocked'.

and also when I pushed him from another shoot, he abused me in English'.. so he can't be a villager''..

Thanks Zoya , I need to tell this to inspector'..

Asad started to go out of house'

wait Mr. Khan,I may also come with you'.

No Miss Farukhi, that is not required'.. I will handle'.

but Mr. Khan I may explain better'

but I don't want you to get involved in the matter'

but Mr. Khan'.

Asad gave her an anger look'.. I said no'.

but why Mr. Khan''.

Asad was completely fuming' he pinned her to the wall'' kyonke ek baar main Mangal pur mein apko kho cuka hun, I can't take risk again''.. he pushed her on thinking what he had said and went away quickly, while Zoya was still standing there like a statue what Asad had meant'..

It was evening when Asad came back home, while Nazma and Zoya were waiting for him' as he came, he looked towards Zoya, their eyes net but quickly he turned his eyes'.. They had dinner together when Zoya again went to Asad'

Mr. Khan, what did inspector say?

Asad could not look at her , said while looking on other side, they will investigate from this angle now'.

Mr. Khan, I may try to recognize that goon'.

Miss Farukhi, I have already said , don't get involved in this , it is dangerous for you'. ow will you please leave, I have some work'.

Zoya went from there thinking how to help Asad'..

After some time she again knocked door of Asad's room'

Now what Miss Farukhi?

Mr. Khan, may I use your printer? she asked while coming to the room'..

Ok'' he signaled her to the printer and got busy in finding a book from the table'

Mr. Khan, here it is' suddenly zoya came behind him ad sid, while Asad turned in shock and fell on Zoya holding her waist'' both were looking at each other and share a small eye lock'.

finally asad got up and said. I am sorry ms. Farukhi''looked at the paper in her hand'what is this?

This is the sketch of that goon. I could not see his complete face, but saw his eyes and small part of his face, so I made it according to that'.

Asad looked at the sketch she had made and then looked at her adorably , he could not help smiling' thanks Miss Farukhi'..

she gave him a smile and turned to go back'. yes Mr. Khan, there was a long cut on his hand too as it was cut by some knife'..

good night Miss Farukhi'

Good night Mr. Khan'..

It was a new day with new hopes, Dilshad was recovering a lot while Zoya and Nazma were taking care of her' Asad had also started to go to his office'.

when Asad called Zoya'.

Yes Mr. Khan'

Miss Farukhi, I need a favor from you'

why not please tell''.

Infect I got a call from inspector, they have spotted that goon'. but they want to ensure the same' if you can help'

why not Mr. Khan, when should I go to police station'

no, not at police station'. I have already told you not to get involved in the matter'

then how can we assure about that?

that man has been seen near an old factory here, you will go there with me' you will just recognize that man from distance and we will come back'.

K'

so I am coming to pick you, are you ready?

yes Mr.Khan'..

After half an hour, they both were standing near an old factory, when inspector came'.

Sir, that goon as described by you was seen in this factory by my informer'. he is still inside with some men' we should wait here till he come out'.

Ok inspector, we are here in our car, you signal us when he come'.

K'. inspector said and hide inside the bushes there with his men'

after some time, that goon came outside' when inspector signaled them'''. both Zoya and Asad came out of car'' Zoya saw him and nodded in yes, he is the same one'..

Inspector held that goon, but he tried to protect himself, ran from there, when Asad held him'.. suddenly he pushed Asad and held Zoya, kept his knife on her neck'. if someone try to touch me, the girl will be killed and no one will follow me..'.

Zoya struggled to get free but he held her more tight'..Asad was looking at Zoya helplessly'. while Zoya too looked ta him with teary eyes'.

Second and Last Part-Page-3

So how was it? do leave your feedback. writing next part too, will update after some time...

Originally posted by: misha93

Great storyline! Please continue

Originally posted by: SPNnIPKKNDlover

loved it
plz Pm me wen u updte da nxt part

Originally posted by: AussieChick

:O
Omfg WAT A CLIFFHANGER!!!
Please continue soon love <3

So here is the second and last part from me...

Part-2

The goon took Zoya inside the factory back…. Inspector tried to go inside but Asad stopped him…. no inspector, I can't take risk… Zoya is in danger…. and we don't know how many persons are inside the factory…. let me go alone….. while Inspector nodded in disappointment….

Asad went inside the factory…. and shouted for Zoya….

when goon came there holding Zoya…. I said no one to follow me…. he shouted….

no, you leave her, I promise you will be free….

no, I can't trust you…. ask the inspector to let me and my men go out safely and no one will follow us, otherwise.. he tightened his grip on Zoya, she cried with pain while Asad too screamed….

Ok, I talk to inspector…. Asad said finally….

He called inspector and asked him to give the escape to the goons…. as the goon turned to go back, Asad got a chance, he punched him and held Zoya safely from him……. then a major fight occurred between goon and Asad, when someone opened the gun and pointed to Asad, Zoya saw it and shouted…. asad, bacho……

Asad just took right turned and got safe……. he suddenly pulled Zoya towards him and both ran from the place…. but he could not see the face of the person who fired on him….

they both were running in the factory here and there…. and hid in a small cabin…

zoya, I call to inspector, he took his phone……. when they listened some footsteps towards them….

zoya held his arm tightly, Asad placed his hand on zoya's hand…. and assured her…. don't worry, everything will be fine…..

footsteps were coming towards them, when Asad held zoya and pulled her with him on backside of the door…. someone opened the door….

no one is here too sir.. they heard the voice of the same goon….

to dhoondo un dono ko.. who bachne nahi chahiye….. someone said…….. on listening, Asad was a little shocked…. as the footsteps went away…. asad said to Zoya….

I think, this voice is familiar to me…

what are you saying Mr. Khan?

yes Zoya, I have listened this voice before……let's go and check who is the person behind attack on ammi….

as they both came outside, on e goon again shouted…. here they… and two to three goons ran toward them, they both ran from there, some boxes were there, Asad pulled zoya with him under those boxes, while zoya was lying on top of Asad and was holding him tight…. Asad put his hand on her back hesitatingly ensuring for her safety……

she looked at him with all trust…. and her one hand was outside the boxes…. the could hear goons looking for them here and there while shouting and someone was ordering them to find soon…. suddenly Zoya screamed with pain….. ahaaa……

Asad looked at her with concern and covered her mouth with his hand…. asked her … what?

she signaled him towards her hand which was outside, someone was standing on her hand…. pain appeared on Asad's face, he slowly took his own hand outside, as the man stnding on Zoya's hand picked his foot, he placed his hand on her hand, now the man's foot was placed on their both's hand however zoya's hand was protected by Asad's hand but she was still feeling pain on her hand… slowly she placed her head on Asad's shoulder, Asad could feel tears of pain in her eyes… he took his second hand on her face, she picked her face, he slowly wiped her tears…..finally the man standing on their hand went away and Asad pulled their hands inside but was still holding zoya's hand….

suddenly someone shouted outside…..

Kahan gye who dono? bahar to gaye nahin honge varna ab tak to police ander a jati? doondo jaldi…. wahi hin jo hamein police se bacha ke bahar nikal sakte hain yahan se…..

Lekin us Asad ahmed khan ke sath wo ladki kon hai? the so called boss of them asked….

Sir, wo koi Zoya ha…

Zoya? that man was shocked to listen that name… khan se ayi ha? Asad Ahmed khan ki to koi rishtedaar is naam ki nahi….

ye to shayad newyork se ayi ha… boss yahi wo ladki thi jisne us din us dilshad or uske parivaar ko bachaya tha….

acha…….. the boss said…..ab dhundho unhe…… and they went a littlebit away talking…

Asad was trying to figure out who that man was and why he was shocked to listen the name of Zoya….

zoya, we can't hide here for long… we have to go out…. Asad said…

Yes Mr. Khan but how?

I think there are four to five people outside, I will handle….. you stay here……

no Mr. Khan. I will be with you… zoya insisted…

Zoya…… I am telling you to stay here, I will handle them… he said and went outside while leaving zoya thinking what to do….

Asad went outside when goons came towards him, and he fought with them….. suddenly someone hit on his head from backsdie … he turned back while feeling giddy and was shocked to see, it was Ayaan's Mamu Mr. Siddiqui…..

You, you wanted to kill ammi?

yes, I wanted to kill dilshad, she is coming on my way……… she is trying to bring Rashid back into her life….. now you know the truth, you have to die…….. he pointed gun towards Asad…….

suddenly Zoya came from back and hit him, the gun fell on the ground while firing in the air….….

Asad got up and started beating goons while they too were beating him….. zoya came in between to protect Asad…. and she was hit on her back while protecting him…. when police came running there on listening the fire, they arrested all the goons as well as Siddiqui….

Mr. Khan, thanks all of them have been held, we will need your statements… let's go…. inspector said to Asad…

you leave inspector, we will come after some time.. he said while looking towards zoya… who was still in pain…. as all left only Asad and Zoya were there while zoya was still sitting on ground…….. she stood up and went to Asad,his head was bleeding… Zoya took a handkerchief….. cleaned his face politely…. he was also looking at her… he could feel his pain in the form of tears in Zoya's eyes….

suddenly, he touched zoya's face with his hand… wiped his tears…. and said going very near to her while cupping hr face into his hands.….

Zoya, I thought I will loose you again today…….

zoya looked into his eyes…. without speaking single word, she just hugged him tight , he too put his arms on her back without any hesitation and both were feeling the most beautiful and unknown feeling of their life….

that's all from my side. hope you liked it……. do leave your comments...

Originally posted by: enrique

good start but make sure u dnt hurt zoya in ur story

i loved the starting of it