OS: Oops! On the Beach? [16+] Note - Pg 19 - Page 15

Originally posted by: darkangel93

that was so goddamn HOT! i almost fainted!!!!!

Originally posted by: Rushitaa

Annie,
Truly..your writing is flawless! I must learn from you 😆
But there is something that kind of ruins it for me... 😳 and I say this because as writers we all want honest feedback and I am no where as good as you but just wanted to share this with you...
your use of...
*cough*
*ahem*
You like to censor some stuff I guess, to his each his own but I'd rather you didn't! 😆 just my two cents 😳
amazing work, honestly! 😊

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Well, my Goldie's back!! 🤗

Hmm... You know to be very honest, it was the way Asad was thinking here. And I tried writing it in that manner! I ain't someone who is a strict censor girl, but given the forum's rules, you've got to abide by it.

I know the subtle form of words used for that particular reaction and would have used them here too, but i thought of playing with the words here and ended up writing in that manner! Hehehehe...

you get what i mean?

Lol ye, I do! Some what 😆

Awww... You write way better than me, pretty gal!! I gotta learn from people like you!😳 Now you're just being humble! *wags finger*❤️

Thanks a lot, Rushi!! I missed ya! Where were you anyways? Just been busy with school.. 🥱 semester's almost done and I've got finals in two weeks and then SUMMERRR 😆