AsYa-Rashid-Humzie : The loads that we carry. - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: varma.nishi1

Vicky ..I love you


And wait before people get a wrong impression it wasn't meant literally ..but just as a friend and a regular reader ...nice post

U know what ..the burdened individuals also are connected with each other in another way ...that was a hint ...

Btw I am stuck with work ...how u doing darling ...today on time


Thanks Nishi! I love you too irrespective of what the world thinks.😆...Hint? Meaning? I mean, yes, AsYa and Rashid are connected with the load thingy. But how does Humzie fit into their picture even though she maybe Zoe's half sister.You take it easy on work or else you will get stress cramps.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VictoriaHot



Asad - He is weighed down by so many things , feelings and fears at the moment. As if his life wasn't already a sad opera show already, he just appears more and more weighed down now - by his feelings for Zoe, his own turmoil and difficulty to deal with his heart and mind, his desperation to hide and protect the truth of Mangalpur from his family , his worry and concern that Zoe , Mariyam will land into a hot soup with Dilaawar. Earlier, he used to be irritated and now, he has become touchy and anxious. He doesn't want Zoe to touch him ( check out the reaction he gives when Zoe slightly holds his hand to stop him from going into the store room) - he tells her dangerously that he will never have any interest in her. He wishes all could be sorted out - he has lost his peace of mind, his sanity, his sleep and Mariyam is not making things easy either.


Zoe - She is the one who carries a massive weight on her shoulders but her shoulders do not slump. The weight of an unknown past, of an unknown mysterious father , of Asad's complete rejection of her as a human being , of being a do-gooder martyr and now, Mariyam. Life is comparatively easier for her because she lives in a happy make believe world where she turns everything into a joke and a war of wits. She appears steady and fearless but one word from Asad , and she turns into a tear-puddle. Today, her face did fall for a nano second when Asad told her that he has no interest in her and he will never have any interest in her. So, the bambi-eyed beauty carries the weight of her mystery father on her head while Asad weighs down on her heart and Mariyam on her shoulders.

Rashid- What do we know about this man? Bigamist? Unfaithful? Spineless? Sissy? Who knows. He carries the weight of having loved and betrayed two women - Dilshad and Shireen. Of being an incompetent father to all his kids. Of being in servitude of Maamu and Mumaani. Of living a life that he chose but is driven by the tiger-eyed Razia. We do not know his story but his hands are coloured in someone's blood and his clothes soaked in someone's tears. Just like his own son Asad, Rashid burns alone on the inside as everyone plays soccer with him.

Humzie- Fragile almond-eyed nymph like beauty weighed down by the rocksolid weight of an unrequited love , she lives life like a tear drop in the rain. Like Zoe, her shoulders do not slump , but her eyes give her away. She has the strength of spirit and her love has pride. She doesn't want Ayaan as alms in a bowl. She wants him as a man in love with her. She cries, she falters , yet she refuses to let the world see how broken hearted she is. She holds her pretty head high , throws away Ayaan's hand and says it in regal self respect - Ayaan, hum kya paagal hain, jo aapse nikaah karenge?


Fear of Asad and hope of Zoya will bring about the ultimate change in their lives.
the fear n darkness that envelopes Asad will make him break out n fight for what is right for his family and most importantly Zoya but in his own style that, Zoya calls male chauvinism.
where as Zoya, a person who lives with tons of baggage from past, still she doesn't seem pessimist, she is ever hopeful that one day things would be alright in her own crazed out style. a little corner in her heart does say that although Asad is an over traditional patriarch but still he would come to help her, whether he likes or not.
Rashid seems like a man running on the edge of blade, its his own choice that he got manipulated for so many years. how does one ever explain a crime, that one has committed for whatever reason. i got no sympathy for this man, who is so entangled in the web of a wicked spider Razia. he was spineless in past and continues to be so. i wonder how can Asad be his son.
Humaira my jaan, an honest from heart girl. i loved her spirit that she found her happiness in her Love Ayaan's happiness, by not marrying him. she chose a free and happy life of having Ayaan as her friend rather than suffering in a marriage of manipulation and one sided love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Loved the post, you say it so fluidly...
I feel for Humaira, what was poor girl's fault here but her dreams are shattered into pieces, she used to dream her and Ayaan but now can she??
Asad, I am loving his restlessness, these two are too egoist to bend. He always comes to say something but then say other, like while giving gifts. All good intentions are poofed up and Zoya is once looking for him being nice, but then she only irks him..
All i can say they do deserve each other, their life will never be complete without the faults of each other..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vicky great post.
Asad is fighting wid his growing feelings n zoya she just wants to hear some good words from her jahanpanah.
I hope Rashid gathers some courage n let the truth out else Razia will always control him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VictoriaHot


Thanks Nishi! I love you too irrespective of what the world thinks.😆...Hint? Meaning? I mean, yes, AsYa and Rashid are connected with the load thingy. But how does Humzie fit into their picture even though she maybe Zoe's half sister.You take it easy on work or else you will get stress cramps.



Think think vicky and u will get ur answers ..
So true yaar ...work stress and responsibilities Keeo me off the hook here but this place is fun to be with too esp with people like u around ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames


Fear of Asad and hope of Zoya will bring about the ultimate change in their lives.
the fear n darkness that envelopes Asad will make him break out n fight for what is right for his family and most importantly Zoya but in his own style that, Zoya calls male chauvinism.
where as Zoya, a person who lives with tons of baggage from past, still she doesn't seem pessimist, she is ever hopeful that one day things would be alright in her own crazed out style. a little corner in her heart does say that although Asad is an over traditional patriarch but still he would come to help her, whether he likes or not.
Rashid seems like a man running on the edge of blade, its his own choice that he got manipulated for so many years. how does one ever explain a crime, that one has committed for whatever reason. i got no sympathy for this man, who is so entangled in the web of a wicked spider Razia. he was spineless in past and continues to be so. i wonder how can Asad be his son.
Humaira my jaan, an honest from heart girl. i loved her spirit that she found her happiness in her Love Ayaan's happiness, by not marrying him. she chose a free and happy life of having Ayaan as her friend rather than suffering in a marriage of manipulation and one sided love.


Thanks. :-). Wow! That is so beautifully said and i agree with you. Rashid both angers and intrigues me. Except Shireen and Dilshaad, everyone hates him and i want to know what brought him at this juncture.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Loved the post, you say it so fluidly...

I feel for Humaira, what was poor girl's fault here but her dreams are shattered into pieces, she used to dream her and Ayaan but now can she??
Asad, I am loving his restlessness, these two are too egoist to bend. He always comes to say something but then say other, like while giving gifts. All good intentions are poofed up and Zoya is once looking for him being nice, but then she only irks him..
All i can say they do deserve each other, their life will never be complete without the faults of each other..


Thanks Vineeta. :-). I am rather proud of Humzie. To have a shattered heart and yet hold on to life is rare courage. Asad-Zoe are two vertical halves of one cake. They cannot be sold in pieces. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VictoriaHot


<font color="#000066">Thanks Aaniya. What does your name mean? Its lovely.😃</font>


Its not like today only... I always love to read ur posts 😃
Aah...thankyou soo much...glad dat u liked it...!! Aaniya means 'a beautiful girl' in arabic ! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hifzaa

vicky great post.
Asad is fighting wid his growing feelings n zoya she just wants to hear some good words from her jahanpanah.
I hope Rashid gathers some courage n let the truth out else Razia will always control him


Thanks. :-). Asad is frustrated , so he breaks Zoe's heart slice by slice.😆...Rashid will have to speak and confess one day.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: varma.nishi1



Think think vicky and u will get ur answers ..
So true yaar ...work stress and responsibilities Keeo me off the hook here but this place is fun to be with too esp with people like u around ...



Nishi , my brains are already in a frying pan meeting work dates.😆... i will wait for your post. Oh, and with that last sentence you made my day. 🤗

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